Simple Dream
Submitted February 17, 2004 Updated February 17, 2004 Status Incomplete | this is my first poem, done on my own attempt, please review and tell me how to make it better, i want to get better.
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Chapter 1 - Simple Dream
Submitted: February 17, 2004 • Updated: February 17, 2004
Word count: 113 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 417
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Kaybo_Sasuke on September 24, 2004, 12:41:23 AM
Kaybo_Sasuke on (Chapter: 1)
Yeah, I'm agreeing with RaptorAlien. You really hit a bull's eye^^ That's awesome!RaptorAlien on July 9, 2004, 4:11:46 AM
RaptorAlien on (Chapter: 1)
Wow, I like it. I consider myself more a writer, but I'm no good at poetry. Still, I respect anyone who will give it a shot and you hit a bullseye there, Pyropyrofreak_becca on February 17, 2004, 7:25:56 AM
pyrofreak_becca on (Chapter: 1)
this is my first poem, EVER, that i wrote souly because I wanted too. please review and tell me if something seems to be bad.