Chapter 1 - 5 yrs. in future
Submitted September 13, 2004 Updated September 13, 2004 Status Incomplete | The story takes palce 5 years in the futer some Titans get Married. Oh ya they make Terra get un-pettrafied
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Chapter 1 - 5 yrs. in future
Chapter 1 - 5 yrs. in future
The Titans are in their twentys Robin and Star got married one monuth ago.The week before Robin and Starfires wedding they un petrafied Terra. She was happy yet sad evrey one was older then her but she had a choice to catchup with evrey one in age and she did.Beast Boy of corse asked her to marry him and she married him one month after Starfire and Robins wedding. The following week Starfire had some very good news to tell Robin Starfire was pregnent. Robin was supised but happy with mixed emotions. Two months later they held a Baby Shower for Starfire.The place was Tamerran Time Moon rise.
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anime_chick on September 13, 2004, 10:20:53 AM
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1)Try Putting More Details on the Dialouge.
2)Nice Start! Just Put alittle more into the Story!
3)Tell more about their Past in the Story so People will understand How and Why.
4)Put how they Un-Petrefied Terra.
5)And Try Spaceing the Paragrufs and Sentises.
Use those and the Story will be a Hit!