Teen Titans 5 years from now
Submitted September 13, 2004 Updated September 13, 2004 Status Incomplete | The story takes palce 5 years in the futer some Titans get Married. Oh ya they make Terra get un-pettrafied
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Chapter 1 - 5 yrs. in future
Submitted: September 13, 2004 • Updated: September 13, 2004
Word count: 108 • Size: <1k • Comments: 11 • views: 387
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anime_chick on September 13, 2004, 10:20:53 AM
anime_chick on (Chapter: 1)
1)Try Putting More Details on the Dialouge.
2)Nice Start! Just Put alittle more into the Story!
3)Tell more about their Past in the Story so People will understand How and Why.
4)Put how they Un-Petrefied Terra.
5)And Try Spaceing the Paragrufs and Sentises.
Use those and the Story will be a Hit!