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Undertones

Well i wrote this when i was really sad its about a friend of mine or at least i hope shes my friend...well neways please comment

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Chapter 1 - Undertones
Submitted: January 13, 2005 • Updated: January 13, 2005
Word count: 51 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 109

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_secrets_screaming_to_speak_ on January 22, 2005, 2:30:06 AM

_secrets_screaming_to_speak_ on (Chapter: 1)
_secrets_screaming_to_speak_really nice! i like your poems a lot! thanks for commenting on mine ^_^ im adding a new one today if youd care to read it ^_^

forbidden_child on January 21, 2005, 10:15:05 AM

forbidden_child on (Chapter: 1)
forbidden_childThank you for commenting on my poem!!! You are very good writer and artist and you have true talent for what you do! I hope you write more soon!!! ^^

girlinpink2 on January 13, 2005, 11:29:05 AM

girlinpink2 on (Chapter: 1)
girlinpink2Thank you for commenting on my poem!! Of course I will comment on yours. I really like the use of imagery. The poem is very symbolic, and I like that. It's very good. I understand it. ^_^ I think it's absolutely wonderful. Great job! Write more!