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Ramen for your Thoughts?

I've wanted to do something like this for quite a long time! These are just some small Naruto stories that I've made up (will make up). Support is loved and adored! Please read and enjoy!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Valentine's Day
Submitted: February 13, 2008 • Updated: February 29, 2008
Word count: 2940 • Size: 15k • Comments: 16 • views: 1085

Chapter 2 - Naruto's Day Off 1
Submitted: February 23, 2008 • Updated: March 4, 2008
Word count: 1545 • Size: 7k • Comments: 12 • views: 460

Chapter 3 - Naruto's Day Off: 2
Submitted: March 4, 2008 • Updated: March 4, 2008
Word count: 2084 • Size: 11k • Comments: 8 • views: 676

Chapter 4 - Another's Shoes: 1
Submitted: March 17, 2008 • Updated: March 17, 2008
Word count: 1786 • Size: 10k • Comments: 7 • views: 420

Chapter 5 - Another's Shoes: 2
Submitted: March 19, 2008 • Updated: March 21, 2008
Word count: 1250 • Size: 6k • Comments: 10 • views: 607

Chapter 6 - Another's Shoes: 3
Submitted: March 30, 2008 • Updated: March 30, 2008
Word count: 1683 • Size: 9k • Comments: 7 • views: 432

Chapter 7 - Another's Shoes: 4
Submitted: June 10, 2008 • Updated: June 26, 2008
Word count: 1143 • Size: 6k • Comments: 6 • views: 350

Comments

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SunaNoFara on February 26, 2008, 12:19:05 PM

SunaNoFara on (Chapter: 2)
SunaNoFara"Under construction"...*rolls eyes*

rlkitten on February 26, 2008, 12:47:40 PM

rlkitten on (Chapter: 2)
rlkittenWhatever~ *rolls eyes also

SadisticPrincess on February 24, 2008, 11:33:47 AM

SadisticPrincess on (Chapter: 1)
SadisticPrincessWow colorful but nice

rlkitten on February 25, 2008, 9:49:21 AM

rlkitten on (Chapter: 1)
rlkittenthank you ^^

SadisticPrincess on March 3, 2008, 10:34:42 AM

SadisticPrincess on (Chapter: 1)
SadisticPrincessYou're welcome

hflp on February 24, 2008, 4:38:30 AM

hflp on (Chapter: 2)
hflplol. Can't wait for part 2.

rlkitten on February 25, 2008, 9:48:13 AM

rlkitten on (Chapter: 2)
rlkittenI'm glad you liked it! I'm really sorry about the way it's all jumbled up. I submitted it and still actually need to fix it. I have some rewording to do, too.

hflp on February 14, 2008, 2:54:55 AM

hflp on (Chapter: 1)
hflpThat was good.

rlkitten on February 14, 2008, 12:22:42 PM

rlkitten on (Chapter: 1)
rlkittenThanks!

SunaNoFara on February 14, 2008, 8:43:40 AM

SunaNoFara on (Chapter: 1)
SunaNoFaraCheesy, and da red is burning mah eyes worse than the pink!! DX
But then again, I think most romances are cheesy, even a superbly well-written one. XD
 
It was okay. Needs improvement, but it's not totally horrible (like some people's stuff) Use some more pronouns--it goes both ways. Don't use too many, but it's like the School House Rock song about pronouns. "Saying all those nouns, over and over can really wear you down!"
 
Lol, that's a funny song.
 
Anyways, good job. ^^
 
P.S. Stop giving me inspiration...-_-'

rlkitten on February 14, 2008, 12:22:24 PM

rlkitten on (Chapter: 1)
rlkittenWell, now- I didn't think it was THAT cheesy...and what do you mean pronouns? I thought I used them just fine. Examples of where I over used, please /\_/\'
 
And I'm sure there are a couple typos, but that was just because I didn't have time to proof read. It was almost 11, when I lost Internet, and I had to submit it real quick right after I finished. I didn't think it was too horrible, despite the "slight" Lee Saku pairing, which it isn't really if you think about it.
 
I loved the ending...I thought it up last minute XD