Ramen for your Thoughts?
Submitted February 12, 2008 Updated June 26, 2008 Status Incomplete | I've wanted to do something like this for quite a long time! These are just some small Naruto stories that I've made up (will make up). Support is loved and adored! Please read and enjoy!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Valentine's Day
Submitted: February 13, 2008 • Updated: February 29, 2008
Word count: 2940 • Size: 15k • Comments: 16 • views: 1086
Chapter 2 - Naruto's Day Off 1
Submitted: February 23, 2008 • Updated: March 4, 2008
Word count: 1545 • Size: 7k • Comments: 12 • views: 460
Chapter 3 - Naruto's Day Off: 2
Submitted: March 4, 2008 • Updated: March 4, 2008
Word count: 2084 • Size: 11k • Comments: 8 • views: 679
Chapter 4 - Another's Shoes: 1
Submitted: March 17, 2008 • Updated: March 17, 2008
Word count: 1786 • Size: 10k • Comments: 7 • views: 423
Chapter 5 - Another's Shoes: 2
Submitted: March 19, 2008 • Updated: March 21, 2008
Word count: 1250 • Size: 6k • Comments: 10 • views: 608
Chapter 6 - Another's Shoes: 3
Submitted: March 30, 2008 • Updated: March 30, 2008
Word count: 1683 • Size: 9k • Comments: 7 • views: 434
Chapter 7 - Another's Shoes: 4
Submitted: June 10, 2008 • Updated: June 26, 2008
Word count: 1143 • Size: 6k • Comments: 6 • views: 352
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SunaNoFara on February 26, 2008, 12:19:05 PM
"Under construction"...*rolls eyes*rlkitten on February 26, 2008, 12:47:40 PM
Whatever~ *rolls eyes alsoSadisticPrincess on February 24, 2008, 11:33:47 AM
Wow colorful but nicerlkitten on February 25, 2008, 9:49:21 AM
thank you ^^SadisticPrincess on March 3, 2008, 10:34:42 AM
You're welcomehflp on February 24, 2008, 4:38:30 AM
lol. Can't wait for part 2.rlkitten on February 25, 2008, 9:48:13 AM
I'm glad you liked it! I'm really sorry about the way it's all jumbled up. I submitted it and still actually need to fix it. I have some rewording to do, too.hflp on February 14, 2008, 2:54:55 AM
That was good.rlkitten on February 14, 2008, 12:22:42 PM
Thanks!SunaNoFara on February 14, 2008, 8:43:40 AM
Cheesy, and da red is burning mah eyes worse than the pink!! DXBut then again, I think most romances are cheesy, even a superbly well-written one. XD
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It was okay. Needs improvement, but it's not totally horrible (like some people's stuff) Use some more pronouns--it goes both ways. Don't use too many, but it's like the School House Rock song about pronouns. "Saying all those nouns, over and over can really wear you down!"
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Lol, that's a funny song.
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Anyways, good job. ^^
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P.S. Stop giving me inspiration...-_-'
rlkitten on February 14, 2008, 12:22:24 PM
Well, now- I didn't think it was THAT cheesy...and what do you mean pronouns? I thought I used them just fine. Examples of where I over used, please /\_/\' Â
And I'm sure there are a couple typos, but that was just because I didn't have time to proof read. It was almost 11, when I lost Internet, and I had to submit it real quick right after I finished. I didn't think it was too horrible, despite the "slight" Lee Saku pairing, which it isn't really if you think about it.
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I loved the ending...I thought it up last minute XD