The Teacher

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The Teacher

Author
rosecrow13

Submitted
March 17, 2006
Updated
March 17, 2006
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 2k
Words: 460
Comments: 2
Views: 650
Faves...: 0
Rating: 0

Maraget and how she feels on the school subject

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Category: Miscellaneous » Writing

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The Liar
Submitted: March 17, 2006 • Updated: March 17, 2006
Word count: 460 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 203

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rosecrow13 on March 19, 2006, 1:59:37 AM

rosecrow13 on March 19, 2006, 1:59:37 AM (Chapter: 1)

I have no idea how that happened, I will try and fix it but it is going unsuccsessfully...sorry about that.

theWriter on March 17, 2006, 11:49:20 PM

theWriter on March 17, 2006, 11:49:20 PM (Chapter: 1)

O.o Your character has issues, I can see. Great story. It's really an evolutionary step up from your original one. There's a lot more tone, character developement...everything. I love it. However, the only gripe I have is that the first line is repeated twice.