Chapter 1 - 1st Chapter
Submitted June 12, 2004 Updated June 12, 2004 Status Incomplete | Funny and crazy
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Chapter 1 - 1st Chapter
Chapter 1 - 1st Chapter
Tenchi was walking around the garden to make sure Raoki hadn't munched on the vegetables..
Tenchi made sure every crop was okay and went inside. Sasami was cooking dinner as usual and Raoko, and ayame were running up to Tenchi full speed fighting each other. Then KABOOM! They fell into a huge dustcloudy circle and rolled over Tenchi. And you can guess that Tenchi was flatter than a pancake.
Funny huh. Uhgggggg, moaned Tenchi "NEXT TIME DON'T MAKE ME TRIP!" yelled Roako.
"You WERE THE ONE WHO MADE ME TRIP!" yelled Ayame.
"well if you guys stop fighting maybe...." Booom!!!!! A huge Demon blew a hole in the house!! What will happen to Tenchi and his friends???
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Sorry thats all i can write for now!
Tenchi made sure every crop was okay and went inside. Sasami was cooking dinner as usual and Raoko, and ayame were running up to Tenchi full speed fighting each other. Then KABOOM! They fell into a huge dustcloudy circle and rolled over Tenchi. And you can guess that Tenchi was flatter than a pancake.
Funny huh. Uhgggggg, moaned Tenchi "NEXT TIME DON'T MAKE ME TRIP!" yelled Roako.
"You WERE THE ONE WHO MADE ME TRIP!" yelled Ayame.
"well if you guys stop fighting maybe...." Booom!!!!! A huge Demon blew a hole in the house!! What will happen to Tenchi and his friends???
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sorry thats all i can write for now!
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sexyboy07 on June 26, 2004, 6:48:00 AM
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not bad not bad you should make it alil more in depth when you get time toi think you have a good story goingZekk on June 24, 2004, 10:32:10 PM
Zekk on
I like it.... But being a fic writer my-self.. the chapter was a little short... you shoud of just edited it insted of adding another. senkoneko on June 13, 2004, 5:21:54 AM
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thanx Tom!Tombot on June 12, 2004, 7:52:55 PM
Tombot on
mystery, Great so far!