For Tombot!

Chapter 1 - 1st Chapter
Submitted: June 12, 2004 • Updated: June 12, 2004
Word count: 127 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 190

Chapter 2 - Huge Demon!
Submitted: June 12, 2004 • Updated: June 12, 2004
Word count: 228 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 224

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Lucky_7 on July 22, 2004, 4:37:45 AM

Lucky_7 on July 22, 2004, 4:37:45 AM (Chapter: 2)

No. Just no. Learn about a fandom before you destroy it with horrible misspellings.

sexyboy07 on June 26, 2004, 6:48:00 AM

sexyboy07 on June 26, 2004, 6:48:00 AM (Chapter: 1)

not bad not bad you should make it alil more in depth when you get time toi think you have a good story going

Zekk on June 24, 2004, 10:34:05 PM

Zekk on June 24, 2004, 10:34:05 PM (Chapter: 2)

I liked it/// buyt yet again a little to short... if you want i can re-writer it to show you what i mean

Zekk on June 24, 2004, 10:32:10 PM

Zekk on June 24, 2004, 10:32:10 PM (Chapter: 1)

I like it.... But being a fic writer my-self.. the chapter was a little short... you shoud of just edited it insted of adding another.

Tombot on June 14, 2004, 5:53:20 AM

Tombot on June 14, 2004, 5:53:20 AM (Chapter: 2)

gtttttaaaaaarrrrrl, I cant believe you picked up on that!, great so far!

senkoneko on June 13, 2004, 5:21:54 AM

senkoneko on June 13, 2004, 5:21:54 AM (Chapter: 1)

thanx Tom!

Tombot on June 12, 2004, 7:52:55 PM

Tombot on June 12, 2004, 7:52:55 PM (Chapter: 1)

mystery, Great so far!