My poem

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My poem

Author
senkoneko

Submitted
June 28, 2004
Updated
June 28, 2004
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 1k
Words: 201
Comments: 1
Views: 969
Faves...: 2
Rating: 0

Good to read for spirit lifting

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Category: Miscellaneous » Writing » Poetry

Chapters

Chapter 1 - nature
Submitted: June 28, 2004 • Updated: June 28, 2004
Word count: 201 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 184

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sexyboy07 on June 28, 2004, 2:06:23 PM

sexyboy07 on June 28, 2004, 2:06:23 PM (Chapter: 1)

its a lil confusing
heh sounds like your a lil mad at someone and you want them to chill out or theyll die or the other POV is that the person is on drugs cuz they have depression since htey cant get first place and you tell them that theres still room for improvement and not to set you on fire for their faults
or something along those lines lol
newho i think its a pretty alright poem
good jobd