How Rivers Were Formed.

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Author
shamanic_princess

Submitted
May 25, 2004
Updated
May 25, 2004
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 3k
Words: 591
Comments: 1
Views: 610
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Rating: 0

I wrote this story for english. I thought it was good so i posted it here.

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Category: Miscellaneous » Writing

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Chapter 1 - How Rivers Were Formed.
Submitted: May 25, 2004 • Updated: May 25, 2004
Word count: 591 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 190

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Apliscosisco on October 29, 2007, 10:31:41 AM

Apliscosisco on October 29, 2007, 10:31:41 AM (Chapter: 1)

Well written, may I make a suggestion to the story?
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The ruler should have 4 blue dragons and when he gets mad at them he should strip them of their wings, when the dragons are stuck on land they decide to merge with the land and become rivers.
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Again it's just a suggestion, but your original is very well written!
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