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Tokyo Mew Mew R

Seven months after tokyo was nearly destroyed, the origonal mew mews are invited on a trip to paris.
But what if the cyniclons attack again?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 0 - people & stuff(read the bottom section)
Submitted: July 13, 2008 • Updated: October 1, 2008
Word count: 333 • Size: 1k • Comments: 10 • views: 313

Chapter 1 - Seven Months Later
Submitted: July 18, 2008 • Updated: November 1, 2008
Word count: 517 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 205

Chapter 2 - Mew Fans
Submitted: July 19, 2008 • Updated: October 28, 2008
Word count: 1134 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 213

Chapter 3 - Rin-panda
Submitted: September 29, 2008 • Updated: March 15, 2009
Word count: 1011 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 189

Chapter 4 - Tokyo Mew Mew Replaced
Submitted: October 1, 2008 • Updated: October 1, 2008
Word count: 878 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 329

Chapter 5 - Lucia
Submitted: October 22, 2008 • Updated: October 22, 2008
Word count: 1547 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 189

Chapter 6 - Mew Mew Autumn.
Submitted: October 28, 2008 • Updated: October 29, 2008
Word count: 1390 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 194

Chapter 7 - Fly away, little butterfly.
Submitted: November 2, 2008 • Updated: November 21, 2008
Word count: 1891 • Size: 10k • Comments: 3 • views: 325

Chapter 8 - The Cyniclon's Plan
Submitted: November 13, 2008 • Updated: November 13, 2008
Word count: 1108 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 595

Chapter 9 - Stone cold, Icy steel.
Submitted: November 21, 2008 • Updated: November 21, 2008
Word count: 1339 • Size: 7k • Comments: 6 • views: 327

Chapter 10 - Saving Kaili
Submitted: December 10, 2008 • Updated: December 10, 2008
Word count: 2204 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 228

Chapter 11 - Alley Ally
Submitted: February 2, 2009 • Updated: February 2, 2009
Word count: 1075 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 203

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luckylace222 on August 8, 2009, 11:35:57 AM

luckylace222 on (Chapter: 11)
luckylace222xD Everyone's so eccentric!!! You captured their personalities just fine!

shinypikachu2608 on September 7, 2009, 6:15:34 AM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: 11)
shinypikachu2608Thanks~ If you wanna read an updated version, check the Da XD

StrawChan on February 2, 2009, 5:28:38 AM

StrawChan on (Chapter: 11)
StrawChanLIES.
You did not update more today!
But I'll take this update as it's the first in awhile.

...I DO NOT KNOW WHO THIS REN PERSON IS.

StrawChan on December 18, 2008, 2:36:47 AM

StrawChan on (Chapter: 1)
StrawChanAH HA!

The letter is signed by Ginni and Reik BACKWARDS.

Caught you!!

StrawChan on December 18, 2008, 2:37:01 AM

StrawChan on (Chapter: 1)
StrawChanAnd Enta.

shinypikachu2608 on December 20, 2008, 3:29:02 AM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: 1)
shinypikachu2608You mean Kenta. I put the K in reik and kenta's name's together.

sailoraqua13 on December 11, 2008, 5:48:23 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 10)
sailoraqua13I loves it! ^U^ Yes, Ryou and Kaili like each other, and her theories r put to shame. HE'S MINE!! ^U^

StrawChan on December 10, 2008, 9:21:45 AM

StrawChan on (Chapter: 10)
StrawChan...is it weird that I ship BellaxRin?

shinypikachu2608 on December 10, 2008, 11:41:30 PM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: 10)
shinypikachu2608But can I ask why?

StrawChan on December 11, 2008, 5:19:51 AM

StrawChan on (Chapter: index)
StrawChanXD

You may.

Actually, I'm working on my half of the art trade and in my original idea (that I scrapped) they were all doing cafe things in their Mew Mew forms and I didn't know what to do with Bella and Rin so I had Bella laughing as she chased Rin around and Rin was like WAAHHH STOP IT!

And I was like, "This is so cute! Straw ship them now."

XD

shinypikachu2608 on December 11, 2008, 11:41:02 PM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: index)
shinypikachu2608Wow. Straw, your imagination's cwazy.
BTW!!!!! someone else is joing teh mew mew teamz, but you dont has 2 drawx dem since i asking and som 1 else like niikgfi also made nu char but yu no hav 2 daadd so yahto tally yah so byez fwend you teh beastdtgf,jyuhrtfg.ki;urt.i;

ERROR:
shinypikachu2608 spazzed out. RUN. RUN WHILE YOU STILL CAN.

StrawChan on December 17, 2008, 11:28:04 PM

StrawChan on (Chapter: index)
StrawChanSame. I'm adding Miyuga back in, but you don't have to worry about drawing her.

shinypikachu2608 on December 10, 2008, 11:37:11 PM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: 10)
shinypikachu2608*almost dies*
Omg, a fanship. You may. I didn't plan it, but it kinds is there. Kinda. Like usagixrei in sailor moon.
Actually, in that chapter I was trying to imply RyouxKeiichiro.

KinkyKitten on November 22, 2008, 4:27:42 PM

KinkyKitten on (Chapter: index)
KinkyKittenwheres Mew Mew Rogue?? shes supposed to be the one working for the cyniclons 0.o yea her real name is Rika Minamoto. also i want her to have a crush maybe on a good guy who works for the mews to turn her good again well try too anyways or a cyniclon and its gotta be a main character.
ur story is great so far lol i love it but i feel kinda left out that meh character hasnt been mentioned in it yet. well once but only a tiny sentence T_T

shinypikachu2608 on November 22, 2008, 6:37:23 PM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: index)
shinypikachu2608.....Ok.Ummm shiny need go create-a-character.
Also I know rogue hasn't arived yet. But that's part of the plot.
Please don't feel left out.
Just wait till the fuss about Kaili's over and done with
cuz once it is.....let's just say theres gonna be a rogue
on the loose. *evil grin*

KinkyKitten on November 22, 2008, 7:04:09 PM

KinkyKitten on (Chapter: index)
KinkyKittenyea, alright. also its 9 chapters in and shes not even in it yet.....i thought she was going to be mentioned when the cyniclons was planning to use a mew mew that would work with them. i thought they were talking about Rogue but apparently they werent. im going to feel left out until shes mentioned T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T

StrawChan on November 21, 2008, 5:19:27 AM

StrawChan on (Chapter: 9)
StrawChanMew Mew Rainbow
Mew Mew Amythest
Mew Mew Midnight
Mew Mew Twilght...

...How many freaking forms does Kaili have anyway?

Thanks for including Tsumi- you got her prefect!

I can hardly understand Lucia half the time, tough. Guess it's the accent! XD

shinypikachu2608 on November 21, 2008, 6:53:21 PM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: 9)
shinypikachu2608You forgot normal Kaili.

StrawChan on November 24, 2008, 9:13:08 AM

StrawChan on (Chapter: 9)
StrawChanOh. I didn't think she counted.

sailoraqua13 on November 21, 2008, 7:59:22 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 9)
sailoraqua13She only has three:
Mew Mew Rainbow-Her first-ever form
Mew Mew Midnight-Her evil form, the Cyclonians have her gain it when she goes to their side, prior to becoming the Ultimate Mew Mew
Mew Mew Twilight-As I stated, her Ultimate form.
That clarify things Straw-chan? o-o?

StrawChan on November 21, 2008, 12:34:13 PM

StrawChan on (Chapter: 9)
StrawChanWhy is her evil form Mew Mew Amythest is Kitty's story?

sailoraqua13 on November 28, 2008, 3:59:35 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 9)
sailoraqua13Because Shiney-chan is just random like that! ^U^

shinypikachu2608 on November 28, 2008, 6:45:39 PM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: index)
shinypikachu2608Yep!~

swampertgirl0504 on November 14, 2008, 2:17:18 AM

swampertgirl0504 on (Chapter: 8)
swampertgirl0504heh heh LOL. I adore ur style of writing 'Y hallo thar mr killingman'

shinypikachu2608 on November 14, 2008, 7:41:32 PM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: 8)
shinypikachu2608Y THANKU KITEH-CHAN.
*big smilez*

StrawChan on November 13, 2008, 5:27:29 AM

StrawChan on (Chapter: 8)
StrawChanXian! *huggles*

You made him so cool! XDDDDDD

Thanks for including him and AWESOME chapter! I can't WAIT for the next one.

shinypikachu2608 on November 14, 2008, 12:20:33 AM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: 8)
shinypikachu2608Yeah since tsumi comes in there.

sailoraqua13 on November 13, 2008, 6:37:54 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 8)
sailoraqua13Oh dear...MINT! Escape and help me! Yea, Lucia is going to convince me! ^U^ Nice chappie! Can't wait for the next one! ^U^

nikki001997 on November 13, 2008, 6:02:18 AM

nikki001997 on (Chapter: 8)
nikki001997YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!go koichi!!!!!!!!!!!!


by the way,awesome chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

nikki001997 on November 2, 2008, 8:44:13 AM

nikki001997 on (Chapter: 7)
nikki001997awe-sume!!!!!!!!!!I really like it!!!!!!!!!!!

sailoraqua13 on November 2, 2008, 7:53:39 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 7)
sailoraqua13Awsome! I love it! ^U^

StrawChan on November 1, 2008, 4:00:28 AM

StrawChan on (Chapter: 6)
StrawChanD=

I thought maybe you had added a chapter.

shinypikachu2608 on November 1, 2008, 4:25:46 AM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: 6)
shinypikachu2608naww not yet. hopefully tomorrow, cuz the next chaper's a big one.

sailoraqua13 on October 28, 2008, 8:11:05 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 6)
sailoraqua13Loves it! *Sits patiently waiting for next chappie*

nikki001997 on October 28, 2008, 7:56:23 AM

nikki001997 on (Chapter: 5)
nikki001997wow.......

nikki001997 on October 28, 2008, 7:50:50 AM

nikki001997 on (Chapter: 4)
nikki001997yeah!!!!!!that's just plain coolness!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nikki001997 on October 28, 2008, 7:46:51 AM

nikki001997 on (Chapter: 3)
nikki001997awesome work!!!!!!!!!you did fabulous!!!!!!!!!!

swampertgirl0504 on October 28, 2008, 5:24:32 AM

swampertgirl0504 on (Chapter: 6)
swampertgirl0504kewl, but I changed it so Lucia knew of her mew mew powers since she met Eregot in the forest when she was seven.

swampertgirl0504 on October 22, 2008, 4:39:13 PM

swampertgirl0504 on (Chapter: 5)
swampertgirl0504oh dear.

sailoraqua13 on October 22, 2008, 6:55:04 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 5)
sailoraqua13Wow...

sailoraqua13 on October 1, 2008, 9:11:11 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 4)
sailoraqua13Coolness! And, there's a few things I forgot to mention about Kaili:
1.She has a Mini Mew Robot which she calls Misha
2.How she became a Mew Mew is, she was sitting in Mint's room, kind of lonely that her cousin had left her here to fight yet ANOTHER attack, when a Chimera Anima attacked her. She jumped out the window and ran to where Mint and the others were fighting and Mint got flung backwards and her pendant flew off. Kaili grabbed it and her pendant came out of Mint's and she transformed for the first time. I understand you'll have to change that for the story, but could you keep any of that in? Also, Zakuro is her best friend! ^U^

swampertgirl0504 on October 1, 2008, 2:52:38 AM

swampertgirl0504 on (Chapter: 4)
swampertgirl0504cool

sailoraqua13 on September 29, 2008, 10:14:27 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 3)
sailoraqua13....AWSOME!!!! ^U^

shinypikachu2608 on September 30, 2008, 12:04:44 AM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: 3)
shinypikachu2608aww thankies aqua-chan

sailoraqua13 on September 30, 2008, 6:25:48 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: index)
sailoraqua13You tis welcome! When will the next chappie b up? And is Kaili gonna b in this?

nikki001997 on July 19, 2008, 6:12:30 AM

nikki001997 on (Chapter: 2)
nikki001997that's cool!

swampertgirl0504 on July 18, 2008, 1:18:54 AM

swampertgirl0504 on (Chapter: index)
swampertgirl0504ok. So um, ichigo is still alive in the original?

swampertgirl0504 on July 14, 2008, 4:54:21 PM

swampertgirl0504 on (Chapter: index)
swampertgirl0504I said i'd join