Aangs not the last airbender

Chapter 1 - aangs not the last airbender
Submitted: July 31, 2005 • Updated: July 31, 2005
Word count: 336 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 226

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FFXgirl on February 11, 2006, 1:51:51 AM

FFXgirl on February 11, 2006, 1:51:51 AM (Chapter: 1)

I don't think it's bad I liked it!!! Great job!!!! *favs*

BlackRose_Archer on August 19, 2005, 9:09:19 PM

BlackRose_Archer on August 19, 2005, 9:09:19 PM (Chapter: 1)

Not bad. Don't forget to break up paragraphs though, other then that, it was pretty good. ^.^

sokkarox67 on July 31, 2005, 4:19:27 AM

sokkarox67 on July 31, 2005, 4:19:27 AM (Chapter: 1)

its not very good but... its my first one