YGO GX Fan Fic.
Submitted September 21, 2008 Updated September 21, 2008 Status Incomplete | This if my first fan fic so i welcome you to tell me how to improve. This is a yugioh GX fan fic about my OC trying to become the next king of games. Please enjoy. (sorry about no description of my oc but i will upload an image of him ^^)
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Chapter 1 - The Beginning Of Dreams
Submitted: September 21, 2008 • Updated: September 21, 2008
Word count: 499 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 176
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ladychaos on September 21, 2008, 12:27:00 AM
ladychaos on (Chapter: 1)
solarox on September 20, 2008, 10:53:56 PM
solarox on (Chapter: 1)
Hi Solarox here ^^Please comment and tell me how to improve since this is my proper first fan fic on the net.
Once again i apolagise for not having a description of my OC in this story but i will upload an image of him^^.
Enjoy :)
I like how you've written it in the 1st person narrative, your character himself sounds interesting.
The fact that you havn't given a full description of your character adds a little mystery towards him, this will intrest the readers to read on in order to find out more about him. As will the cliffhanger you left.
Over all great job, i can't wait to read the 2nd chapter.