Blue Bird
Submitted August 15, 2008 Updated December 4, 2008 Status Incomplete | I liked this song so I decided to make a story. Yes Ayume is my naruto Oc. And yes her and naruto like each other. Um I may cotinue it if enough people read it so uh yeah enjoy and do the comment thingy.
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Chapter 1 - Ayume's Birthday
Submitted: August 15, 2008 • Updated: December 4, 2008
Word count: 542 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 249
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nextguardian on August 15, 2008, 12:54:36 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 1)
sorakeyblader258 on August 16, 2008, 1:26:51 AM
sorakeyblader258 on (Chapter: 1)
Yeah thanks for the comment and I'll space out more.
My only critique would be spacing. Something like this would be easier to read:
"Naruto, you do know that a girl sings that song," Sai said.
"And your point is...?" Naruto said.
Anyway, nice work!