Angels In Our Life...
Submitted November 1, 2007 Updated December 24, 2007 Status Incomplete | just a few random short stories that i kinda liked and my friends stole from me -curse them- and read to the people in the resturaunt.... they liked them really... and actually asked for copies i was really happy... and yet embarrassed....-.-"
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Forgotten Angel
Submitted: November 1, 2007 • Updated: November 1, 2007
Word count: 195 • Size: 1k • Comments: 10 • views: 181
Chapter 2 - Death Angel
Submitted: December 24, 2007 • Updated: December 24, 2007
Word count: 176 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 126
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xkaitlyn25x on March 30, 2008, 3:31:57 AM
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i really love this poem! do you think i can post them on myspace to show some of my friend's? i think they would love it!^-^xkaitlyn25x on January 6, 2008, 5:57:33 AM
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that is sad.... it is really good though...FreezingRain on December 29, 2007, 9:52:07 AM
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Awww thats so cute, poor little kid.sorrowfulsoul on December 31, 2007, 1:32:48 AM
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ya....-.-sorrowfulsoul on December 24, 2007, 4:52:39 AM
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ya i thought of this while i prayed with the nurses when a small child passed on , he did so with a smile knowing his loved ones are waiting in heaven for him, it was truly sad but i was happy knowing he was at peace.-.-that happened a while back though, he was atleast 8 i believe.
xkaitlyn25x on November 26, 2007, 7:06:15 AM
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hmmmm i like this too much add more!!!XDsorrowfulsoul on November 1, 2007, 8:02:04 AM
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ya.... emotional this is how feel sometimes.... just not a girl!!!!>_< sorry but you gotta say it's kinda okay..... it's sad though i thought of my parents and i almost felt like crying but i am older noe and need to act like a man.... even though sometimes i just want to cry for hours... but i have to hold it in........ is that unhealthy cause i gotta know...FreezingRain on November 16, 2007, 9:54:57 PM
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yeah it's unhealthy, but so is reading or drawing when you have a head ache or taking at least one ibuprfen(or however you spell it, i'd have to find the bottle)a week durring the summer. so yeah alot a things in this world are unhealthy. O an i'm doing a sience fair project on stress and i shal know what your problem is mwahaha!myartmaybebadbutatleastitry on November 3, 2007, 3:44:33 AM
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It is unhealthy, but I do the same thing.sorrowfulsoul on November 3, 2007, 11:54:56 AM
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arg..... thanx.....Phoenex360Gorillaz on November 2, 2007, 9:05:56 AM
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Wows. This is really good, but you should work on your sentance formatting. Mix it up a bit, you know? And a few too many dots. ^.^ Other than that it was completely wonderful! Please update if you add more to this story; it would make a great plot point.sorrowfulsoul on November 16, 2007, 8:57:34 AM
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dots are cool and fun!!!!^________^ ................................................sorrowfulsoul on November 3, 2007, 1:27:25 AM
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heeee thanx... iknow my retarded computer wouldn't let me back space...-_-' i like dot!!!!XDFreezingRain on November 3, 2007, 7:15:28 AM
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The story is really goodFreezingRain on November 3, 2007, 7:18:53 AM
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Yay for stories, spellchecker, and cake, sorry that was random, i knowFreezingRain on November 4, 2007, 10:25:23 AM
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oh and i forgot rolly chairs!!! How could i forget those!?sorrowfulsoul on November 8, 2007, 6:48:31 AM
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yes!!!! rolly chairs are terrific!!! o and sandwiches and big beda that hurt when you fall out of em!!!!!XDFreezingRain on November 9, 2007, 7:24:11 AM
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Yes, exept i don't fall out of my bed. But the best thing in the world (in my opinion, sorry people get mad if i don't say that) is closing your eyes while you spin around in circles YOU DON'T GET DIZZY!!! it's amazing. i learned that by spinning around the hall at school, i must have looked like such an idiot! *o* sorrowfulsoul on November 16, 2007, 8:50:49 AM
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ha! thats fun i did that at school too and my principal rocks and starts doin it with me!!! it was creepy but he is funny!!!XD alot o my friends did it too!!=]Phoenex360Gorillaz on November 16, 2007, 11:36:57 AM
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XD He did that with you? If our principal saw you doing that he'd put you in detention! XPsorrowfulsoul on November 26, 2007, 6:14:35 AM
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or possibly a mental institute!=]FreezingRain on December 6, 2007, 6:19:44 AM
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haha, no, he'd lecture us about having pride for our school, not that anyone does. they told us that if we wore blue or orange to a basketball game we'd get in for free, its kinda sad that they have to do that just to get some people to watch a basketball game.yeah our school colors are blue and orange( the same as the color of the words) our school is really wierd, i heard they painted the boy's bathroom orange [/color !FreezingRain on December 6, 2007, 6:11:02 AM
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yup he sure would, he got mad at me for taking the long way back to study hall so i could go to my locker, its almost the same really but most people go the other way. sorrowfulsoul on November 3, 2007, 11:56:00 AM
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ha ha !!!!!!XDmyartmaybebadbutatleastitry on November 3, 2007, 3:43:55 AM
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That is really good ^_^ I lurv it!sorrowfulsoul on November 3, 2007, 11:55:28 AM
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thanx!^_^FreezingRain on November 2, 2007, 11:35:33 AM
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Its really good, but yeah what Kylie said and the 2nd and 3rd sentences should have a coma between them. Sorry i just like really long sentences, you don't have to do it.sorrowfulsoul on November 3, 2007, 1:28:09 AM
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will do thanx for the advice !!! sorry it's kinda weird....FreezingRain on November 2, 2007, 11:37:37 AM
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Wait... I meant the 3rd and 4th sentences, sorry!