Get Away From Me
Submitted August 26, 2005 Updated August 26, 2005 Status Incomplete | A evil plot to sacrafice a young woman for evil perposes
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Chapter 1 - chapter 1
Submitted: August 26, 2005 • Updated: August 26, 2005
Word count: 601 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 169
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hikari0205 on August 26, 2005, 7:45:03 AM
hikari0205 on (Chapter: 1)
It is rather good so far . You are still mixing up a few their and theres but all in all its good . you are getting better at story writing . continue soon !!!