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Chapter 0 - Plot Help

Separately, four people are talented artists. But together they become miraculous. They revolutionize a country by merely existing.

Chapter 0 - Plot Help

Chapter 0 - Plot Help
I understand that this story has the potential to be confusing since it is told through the eyes of 4 DIFFERENT people. I'm sorry. I just like to vary my Point of Views. I think it's interesting. But to clarify and organize the characters, I'm going to post the chapters in color.


Dark blue is the POV of the drummer, Drew.
Dark Red is the POV of the old blind violist, Keene.
Green will be a chapter by Perkin, the boy genius who plays flute.
And indigo will be the dancer, Dove.

Thank you for bearing with me folks. Ask me any other questions about my insane story, I'd be happy to try and help.

~Lumpy

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redclaw on May 10, 2008, 10:15:52 AM

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redclawcandice! are ou ever goin to write again for this story? or was that the end?

thelump on May 10, 2008, 11:27:49 AM

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thelumpEh...I have it up there in my noodle. I just haven't had the time for awhile. And I have writersblock-ish. Not that I can't write it out, I just can't do it the way I want...but I do plan to finish it eventually.

redclaw on May 10, 2008, 12:32:59 PM

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redclawthats nice

DaGaia on November 29, 2007, 7:58:13 AM

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DaGaiaYa this is pretty much freakin awsome!

thelump on November 30, 2007, 10:48:06 PM

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thelumpThank you, my dear...
I am now inspired to keep going. I didn't have the energy to write anything for a while there. <3

gigglebutton on November 28, 2007, 10:54:40 AM

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gigglebuttonWay awesome Vi. Once again your amazing marvelousness shines brilliantly. You so rock.

thelump on November 29, 2007, 6:09:32 AM

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thelumpLove you dahling...and thank you!

gigglebutton on November 5, 2007, 6:22:08 AM

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gigglebuttonCANNDDDDIICCCEEEE!!!!! Write more of your story already! I'm reading Janette Oke, that's how bored I am. Please write. Please??

jcizcraz on November 4, 2007, 8:47:34 AM

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jcizcrazSoooo... What are you going to write next...It's a nice story although I think I'm missing the main point but yea...

gigglebutton on October 29, 2007, 10:23:12 AM

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gigglebuttonWAHHH!! It's so cute, and sad, and utterly AWESOME! I love you!!!

redclaw on October 29, 2007, 10:08:55 AM

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redclawam i allowed to aderntly adore YOUR story? lolz, its very interesting, the drummer is the very best.........i almost cried...

thelump on October 26, 2007, 12:24:40 PM

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thelumpI KNOW!!! I'm so excited...geez louise!

gigglebutton on October 26, 2007, 11:54:10 AM

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gigglebuttonGoodness gracious, tis scandalous me dear. Whoot! The story rocks. You're so cool...why?!? Why do you always leave me in the dust with your mad skills?!?! It's not fair. I demand that you give me the artistic part of our brain! =P