Survive and Conquer
Submitted October 26, 2007 Updated May 11, 2008 Status Incomplete | Separately, four people are talented artists. But together they become miraculous. They revolutionize a country by merely existing.
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Chapters
Chapter 0 - Plot Help
Submitted: October 29, 2007 • Updated: October 29, 2007
Word count: 132 • Size: <1k • Comments: 13 • views: 782
Chapter 1 - I Perform for Questions (Keene)
Submitted: October 26, 2007 • Updated: November 5, 2007
Word count: 266 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 670
Chapter 2 - He Performs for Questions (Dove)
Submitted: October 26, 2007 • Updated: November 5, 2007
Word count: 651 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 360
Chapter 3 - The Second Performer (Drew)
Submitted: October 29, 2007 • Updated: November 5, 2007
Word count: 696 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 611
Chapter 4 - The Second Invitation (Dove)
Submitted: October 29, 2007 • Updated: November 5, 2007
Word count: 26 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 619
Chapter 5 - Mud (Perkin)
Submitted: November 28, 2007 • Updated: November 28, 2007
Word count: 413 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 679
Chapter 6 - Meeting (Keene)
Submitted: January 15, 2008 • Updated: January 15, 2008
Word count: 405 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 609
Chapter 7 - Break your Heart (Drew)
Submitted: January 15, 2008 • Updated: January 15, 2008
Word count: 368 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 337
Chapter 8 - Sober (Scholar)
Submitted: May 11, 2008 • Updated: May 11, 2008
Word count: 622 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 596
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liggybird on March 24, 2011, 9:42:46 PM
I've only read two chapters (and the Plot Help) so far but I'm liking this very much. I like the two lines of small talk that interrupt Dove's strongly ascerbic thoughts (on what Dove sees as the very hypocritical hidden lives of his fellow countrytmen). I also like the idea of Dove's feeling of being more fortunate than his fellows (on account of his dancing) while at the same time being subject to their condition ("Their agony is beyond belief and it spills over onto me."). I'll read further soon but I just wanted to give this a comment before I went out. ^^redclaw on June 20, 2008, 3:53:05 AM
........weird.........did the dude die?
thelump on June 20, 2008, 2:40:44 PM
Course not...you'll see. (If I ever get my next chapter up...) *sigh*redclaw on May 10, 2008, 10:15:52 AM
candice! are ou ever goin to write again for this story? or was that the end?thelump on May 10, 2008, 11:27:49 AM
Eh...I have it up there in my noodle. I just haven't had the time for awhile. And I have writersblock-ish. Not that I can't write it out, I just can't do it the way I want...but I do plan to finish it eventually.redclaw on May 10, 2008, 12:32:59 PM
thats niceredclaw on January 16, 2008, 6:07:03 AM
lol, like the way he describes the color ofthe flute.DaGaia on November 29, 2007, 7:58:13 AM
Ya this is pretty much freakin awsome!thelump on November 30, 2007, 10:48:06 PM
Thank you, my dear...I am now inspired to keep going. I didn't have the energy to write anything for a while there. <3
gigglebutton on November 28, 2007, 10:54:40 AM
Way awesome Vi. Once again your amazing marvelousness shines brilliantly. You so rock.thelump on November 29, 2007, 6:09:32 AM
Love you dahling...and thank you!redclaw on November 28, 2007, 9:05:24 AM
ooo question, what is kremon fighting?thelump on November 29, 2007, 6:09:00 AM
Some type of fighting. I thought a little kid would like to wrestle and slash and punch and kick and stuff. But I didn't want to put karate, or kung fu or martial arts. Those are used too often. So I created my own type of fighting. I'm not quite sure what techniques are used, but it's my own creation... musicismylife on November 28, 2007, 9:06:11 AM
thats a good questionmusicismylife on November 28, 2007, 9:03:38 AM
serously i imagine ur a muscisian right?! i am too and i know exactly how each of these ppl feel! perfect description!!!!!!thelump on November 29, 2007, 6:05:19 AM
Righto! Alot of the emotions in here are either of my own experience or from friends. musicismylife on November 28, 2007, 8:58:23 AM
VERY NICE!!!! woot!!!!! are you a violist?thelump on November 29, 2007, 6:03:46 AM
I'm actually a violINist. But I have always envied those that played the viola... it has such a rich tone. musicismylife on December 11, 2007, 7:05:27 AM
true true. i is pianist+ violinist+ hopefully (eventually) cellist