Time Tracers: Book One. It's just a matter of time.
Submitted February 13, 2008 Updated March 18, 2008 Status Incomplete | This is the first book of many. Young Alana Page Black and her four friends were outcasts. Then she meets a new kid, who changed there life. There sweeped to a great adventur that a person could only wish for. |
Chapters
Chapter 0 - Prologe
Submitted: February 13, 2008 • Updated: March 4, 2008
Word count: 272 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 477
Chapter 1 - The house of hell, and a school of friends.
Submitted: February 13, 2008 • Updated: March 4, 2008
Word count: 1785 • Size: 9k • Comments: 5 • views: 258
Chapter 2 - The new kid.
Submitted: February 29, 2008 • Updated: March 15, 2008
Word count: 597 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 246
Chapter 3 - The machine.
Submitted: February 29, 2008 • Updated: March 4, 2008
Word count: 696 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 225
Chapter 4 - The shock of a lifetime.
Submitted: March 4, 2008 • Updated: March 4, 2008
Word count: 1668 • Size: 8k • Comments: 1 • views: 514
Chapter 5 - Breaking Away
Submitted: March 8, 2008 • Updated: March 8, 2008
Word count: 1099 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 236
Chapter 6 - The Reunion.
Submitted: March 18, 2008 • Updated: March 18, 2008
Word count: 1682 • Size: 8k • Comments: 2 • views: 214
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MiaEmber on March 19, 2008, 12:03:47 PM
Just so you know, it wasn't supposed to say "Mr. Growl." It was supposed to say "Mrrowl." Like a noise.umitara on March 20, 2008, 12:10:43 PM
Oh. Well I think it sound ok the way it is. But My spell cheker didn't think it was. I'm keeping it on my computer two.MiaEmber on March 9, 2008, 12:39:36 AM
I've noticed a couple of places I would like to change. But their not really important. If I could I would like to scan over the entire story and then fix the problems. So...thanks and the story is great where it's going. Keep sending me the stuff.MiaEmber on March 4, 2008, 7:22:41 AM
I like it.MiaEmber on March 1, 2008, 11:21:12 PM
If only I could help you. There's a lot of stuff that needs to be fixed. But other then that I like it.Oh, B.T.W. Tinker's and Destiny's father died when his car exploded. Just so you know.
umitara on March 2, 2008, 3:54:31 AM
Yeah. I think we talked about that. So that's the reason I didn't talk about a father.MiaEmber on March 1, 2008, 11:12:58 PM
Funny. Very very funny.umitara on February 29, 2008, 9:47:37 AM
Sorry it's so short. But the next one is a lot better. Posting soon.MiaEmber on February 28, 2008, 10:11:26 AM
Good. Need some spelling work. Grammer needs a little help too. If you want I can help with that.umitara on February 29, 2008, 9:41:47 AM
I know the first part dose but the last part I used the spell checker. But if you want to help shur. I'll get the second chapter up.MiaEmber on March 1, 2008, 11:11:26 PM
Alright. Why don't you uh...how can we do this? See if you could send the second chapter to me and I'll give it back to you to post it up? how's that?MiaEmber on February 28, 2008, 8:36:38 AM
Good. Just need to work on the spelling.umitara on February 13, 2008, 10:49:52 AM
I'll finish latter.umitara on February 26, 2008, 12:54:14 PM
I'm done now. It took me long enofe. Gosh.