Rosemary
Submitted March 9, 2005 Updated March 9, 2005 Status Incomplete | A young hare is taken as a slave and this is her story of survial.
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Chapter 1 - Capture
Submitted: March 9, 2005 • Updated: March 9, 2005
Word count: 1857 • Size: 10k • Comments: 3 • views: 193
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Pennybrite_Moonsparrow on January 31, 2006, 9:00:43 AM
Pennybrite_Moonsparrow on (Chapter: 1)
Great story! But, like Aaron said, remember, calling a hare a "bunny" is quite the insult. :DAarontheWanderer on November 11, 2005, 7:28:44 AM
AarontheWanderer on (Chapter: 1)
Also, I noticed how you switched back and forth between the words "hare" and "bunny". If a hare were to notice that it was called a "bunny", you'd be in trouble. lol Still a good read.AarontheWanderer on November 8, 2005, 11:05:20 PM
AarontheWanderer on (Chapter: 1)
Don't worry, I've only read three books and I've got some stories up, too. I like the chapter and the character development and description. But I was at first confused at why Dill and Rosemary said "Yuck!" I thought they were talkin about Sage at first. I guess they were talking about the food. All and all, great chapter.