Black Wings
Submitted April 8, 2004 Updated April 8, 2004 Status Incomplete | i find this really kewl and i hope you do too. it is very easy to understand
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Chapter 1 - Black Wings
Submitted: April 8, 2004 • Updated: April 8, 2004
Word count: 54 • Size: <1k • Comments: 13 • views: 317
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xxKILLtheSYSTEMxx on January 2, 2006, 12:11:21 AM
xxKILLtheSYSTEMxx on (Chapter: 1)
angel_writer on September 18, 2005, 9:43:20 PM
angel_writer on (Chapter: 1)
i liek the death i worship it^^weewoo on April 13, 2005, 7:35:52 AM
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YAY! you rymed!!Lanfear on March 22, 2005, 5:36:08 AM
Lanfear on (Chapter: 1)
super, inspiring poem.poems don't have to rhyme, that just the typical thing we think of when we think of a poem, none of mine do but they have rhythm. l8er LanfearcptShort on September 8, 2004, 7:29:59 AM
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It doesn't have to ryhme to be good, I like this cause it's awesome, But it's actually better because it doesn't all ryhme. It seems to give it more meaning, it would seem less serious and more silly if it ryhmed.pained_immortal on August 24, 2004, 6:08:48 AM
pained_immortal on (Chapter: 1)
wow- im sorry for bugging you so- but i cantsee these great poems and not leave a comment! ^^;Zeke_hieis_girl on June 30, 2004, 7:45:31 AM
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you have talent *bows* keep on writing i like the angel of death stuff moon_child2000 on June 26, 2004, 5:04:28 PM
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I've seen him all too often this spring. I think I'll see him again too.BlackWolf on June 26, 2004, 1:10:15 PM
BlackWolf on (Chapter: 1)
awesome poem :)Slippingthroughreality on June 12, 2004, 8:07:59 PM
Slippingthroughreality on (Chapter: 1)
Simple yet very effective. I like the concept of the angel of death. Its amazing.
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