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The Ancient One

A vampire reflects on her values and lose of power, ulitmatly leading to her lose of life.

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Chapter 1 - The Ancient One
Submitted: March 3, 2008 • Updated: March 3, 2008
Word count: 373 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 640

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SunaNoFara on March 22, 2008, 10:42:06 AM

SunaNoFara on (Chapter: 1)
SunaNoFaraThank you for your entry! I only ask that you would edit a little and separate it into paragraphs. It would make it a lot easier to read ^^' Thanks again! ^^