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Konoha High

A highschool story. The Naruto characters go to Konoha High, a private school in the city of Konoha. They face all the highschool dramas: classes, grades, friends, enemies, and romance. Pairings to be revealed in later chapters.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Prologue
Submitted: February 7, 2007 • Updated: February 15, 2007
Word count: 571 • Size: 2k • Comments: 19 • views: 906

Chapter 2 - chapter 1
Submitted: February 10, 2007 • Updated: February 15, 2007
Word count: 1207 • Size: 6k • Comments: 17 • views: 928

Chapter 3 - chapter 2
Submitted: February 15, 2007 • Updated: February 15, 2007
Word count: 1006 • Size: 5k • Comments: 19 • views: 2213

Chapter 4 - chapter 3
Submitted: February 18, 2007 • Updated: February 18, 2007
Word count: 1129 • Size: 6k • Comments: 17 • views: 1014

Chapter 5 - chapter 4
Submitted: February 25, 2007 • Updated: February 25, 2007
Word count: 955 • Size: 5k • Comments: 10 • views: 1051

Chapter 6 - chapter 5
Submitted: March 2, 2007 • Updated: March 2, 2007
Word count: 1204 • Size: 6k • Comments: 13 • views: 846

Chapter 7 - chapter 6
Submitted: March 5, 2007 • Updated: March 5, 2007
Word count: 1148 • Size: 5k • Comments: 10 • views: 784

Chapter 8 - chapter 7
Submitted: March 11, 2007 • Updated: March 11, 2007
Word count: 1268 • Size: 6k • Comments: 18 • views: 748

Chapter 9 - chapter 8
Submitted: March 15, 2007 • Updated: March 15, 2007
Word count: 1221 • Size: 6k • Comments: 15 • views: 995

Chapter 10 - chapter 9
Submitted: March 19, 2007 • Updated: March 19, 2007
Word count: 1221 • Size: 6k • Comments: 16 • views: 760

Chapter 11 - chapter 10
Submitted: March 23, 2007 • Updated: March 23, 2007
Word count: 1230 • Size: 6k • Comments: 17 • views: 746

Chapter 12 - chapter 11
Submitted: March 27, 2007 • Updated: March 27, 2007
Word count: 1221 • Size: 6k • Comments: 17 • views: 792

Chapter 13 - chapter 12
Submitted: March 31, 2007 • Updated: March 31, 2007
Word count: 1299 • Size: 6k • Comments: 16 • views: 783

Chapter 14 - chapter 13
Submitted: April 5, 2007 • Updated: April 5, 2007
Word count: 1457 • Size: 7k • Comments: 17 • views: 946

Chapter 15 - chapter 14
Submitted: April 9, 2007 • Updated: April 28, 2007
Word count: 1450 • Size: 7k • Comments: 24 • views: 916

Chapter 16 - chapter 15
Submitted: April 15, 2007 • Updated: April 15, 2007
Word count: 1216 • Size: 6k • Comments: 12 • views: 928

Chapter 17 - chapter 16
Submitted: April 24, 2007 • Updated: April 28, 2007
Word count: 1229 • Size: 6k • Comments: 20 • views: 702

Chapter 18 - chapter 17
Submitted: April 28, 2007 • Updated: April 28, 2007
Word count: 1340 • Size: 7k • Comments: 15 • views: 764

Chapter 19 - chapter 18
Submitted: May 5, 2007 • Updated: May 5, 2007
Word count: 1769 • Size: 9k • Comments: 18 • views: 734

Chapter 20 - chapter 19
Submitted: May 13, 2007 • Updated: May 13, 2007
Word count: 1160 • Size: 5k • Comments: 12 • views: 705

Chapter 21 - chapter 20
Submitted: May 21, 2007 • Updated: May 21, 2007
Word count: 1272 • Size: 6k • Comments: 10 • views: 709

Chapter 22 - chapter 21
Submitted: May 30, 2007 • Updated: May 30, 2007
Word count: 1340 • Size: 6k • Comments: 12 • views: 665

Chapter 23 - chapter 22
Submitted: June 13, 2007 • Updated: June 13, 2007
Word count: 1336 • Size: 6k • Comments: 20 • views: 738

Chapter 24 - chapter 23
Submitted: June 23, 2007 • Updated: June 23, 2007
Word count: 1531 • Size: 8k • Comments: 16 • views: 854

Chapter 25 - chapter 24
Submitted: June 29, 2007 • Updated: June 29, 2007
Word count: 1234 • Size: 6k • Comments: 16 • views: 722

Chapter 26 - chapter 25
Submitted: July 1, 2007 • Updated: July 1, 2007
Word count: 1215 • Size: 6k • Comments: 16 • views: 659

Chapter 27 - chapter 26
Submitted: July 4, 2007 • Updated: July 4, 2007
Word count: 1454 • Size: 7k • Comments: 26 • views: 910

Chapter 28 - chapter 27
Submitted: July 7, 2007 • Updated: July 7, 2007
Word count: 1155 • Size: 6k • Comments: 18 • views: 679

Chapter 29 - chapter 28
Submitted: July 12, 2007 • Updated: July 12, 2007
Word count: 1391 • Size: 7k • Comments: 24 • views: 876

Chapter 30 - chapter 29
Submitted: July 18, 2007 • Updated: July 18, 2007
Word count: 1353 • Size: 7k • Comments: 35 • views: 933

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james13 on May 10, 2008, 2:26:00 AM

james13 on (Chapter: 3)
james13i don tthink they have laptops in konoha either.....

winxgirl21 on May 10, 2008, 4:54:04 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
winxgirl21*points to reply below* same here. and thanks for reading, at least...

james13 on May 10, 2008, 2:24:01 AM

james13 on (Chapter: 2)
james13i dont think they have cars and malls in konoha.....but great idea anyway

winxgirl21 on May 10, 2008, 4:53:14 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
winxgirl21in my story Konoha is more modern day. It's like our world, in Konoha. I didn't mean for it to take place the way konoha is in the manga/anime.

NightWing101 on January 26, 2008, 11:53:11 AM

NightWing101 on (Chapter: 30)
NightWing101Awsome! And you have over.... 50 comments on this story alone! Good job! ^^
Cant wait to see the other ideas you have!

winxgirl21 on January 26, 2008, 11:05:37 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

animefreak24 on October 28, 2007, 11:33:17 PM

animefreak24 on (Chapter: 2)
animefreak24nice ideas for the accesories!^^

'faves'

winxgirl21 on October 29, 2007, 7:17:41 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

kogalover2013 on October 27, 2007, 3:16:15 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 30)
kogalover2013OMG OMG dats all i can say

winxgirl21 on October 28, 2007, 10:20:16 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21^-^

kogalover2013 on October 27, 2007, 3:07:18 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 29)
kogalover2013MY INNER SAKURA IS SCREAMING WAT ELES WAT ELES

winxgirl21 on October 28, 2007, 10:18:14 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
winxgirl21I know...Eventually you guys'll find out. ^-^

kogalover2013 on October 27, 2007, 3:00:13 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 28)
kogalover2013my inner tenten is crying acctually im bout to cry my self

winxgirl21 on October 28, 2007, 10:16:42 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 28)
winxgirl21wowz...thanks for reviewing.

kogalover2013 on October 27, 2007, 2:52:52 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 27)
kogalover2013my inner tenten is killing my inner her parents jk but is tootally in love with neji

winxgirl21 on October 28, 2007, 10:14:06 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21haha. ^-^

kogalover2013 on October 27, 2007, 2:37:26 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 25)
kogalover2013lol i whould love to be sakura ... my inner sakura is fainting

winxgirl21 on October 28, 2007, 10:13:02 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
winxgirl21^-^

kogalover2013 on October 27, 2007, 2:29:20 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 24)
kogalover2013lol how sweet my inner hinata is screaming

winxgirl21 on October 28, 2007, 10:12:02 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
winxgirl21^-^

kogalover2013 on October 27, 2007, 2:20:20 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 23)
kogalover2013lol my inner hinata and ino are giggleing like nuts

winxgirl21 on October 28, 2007, 10:10:38 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
winxgirl21lolz ^-^

kogalover2013 on October 27, 2007, 2:08:01 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 22)
kogalover2013lol neji is sooo cute sometimes my inner ten ten is screaming

winxgirl21 on October 28, 2007, 10:08:56 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
winxgirl21ya, he is. ^-^

kogalover2013 on October 26, 2007, 4:20:53 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 20)
kogalover2013kakshies mean

winxgirl21 on October 27, 2007, 1:01:42 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 20)
winxgirl21he can be sometimes...

kogalover2013 on October 26, 2007, 4:14:14 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 19)
kogalover2013now my inner ino is screaming with blushing

winxgirl21 on October 27, 2007, 12:59:39 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 19)
winxgirl21^-^

kogalover2013 on October 26, 2007, 4:02:44 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 18)
kogalover2013my inner saskue is sad

winxgirl21 on October 27, 2007, 12:58:11 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
winxgirl21no! be happy! *tries to cheer up your inner-Sasuke*

kogalover2013 on October 28, 2007, 1:34:14 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: index)
kogalover2013my inner saskue`s cheering up

winxgirl21 on October 29, 2007, 7:24:26 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21that's good! ^-^

kogalover2013 on October 26, 2007, 3:53:50 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 17)
kogalover2013y did she give him her cell better yet y`d he want it

winxgirl21 on October 27, 2007, 12:54:41 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
winxgirl21that's just ino. i can 100% see her doing taht, and no one knows, Sasuke is Sasuke.

kogalover2013 on October 28, 2007, 1:35:31 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: index)
kogalover2013ya right sakue`s tottaly in love with saskura

kogalover2013 on October 26, 2007, 3:44:46 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 16)
kogalover2013my harets pounding

winxgirl21 on October 27, 2007, 12:52:14 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
winxgirl21^-^

kogalover2013 on October 26, 2007, 3:37:45 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 15)
kogalover2013forget sakura my inner hinatas blushing like nuts

winxgirl21 on October 27, 2007, 12:50:48 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
winxgirl21lolz.

kogalover2013 on October 26, 2007, 3:30:14 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 14)
kogalover2013lol lol lol inner sakura & hinata are blushing p.s. my inner hinata is soooooo mad at neji

winxgirl21 on October 27, 2007, 12:49:15 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 14)
winxgirl21ya, I know. He ruins things. lolz.

kogalover2013 on October 26, 2007, 3:14:03 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 13)
kogalover2013hmmmmmmmmm i wish sauske was real then he colud be my bf

winxgirl21 on October 27, 2007, 12:48:02 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 13)
winxgirl21haha, it's too abd the Naruto gang isn't real...

kogalover2013 on October 28, 2007, 1:37:29 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: index)
kogalover2013seriously

kogalover2013 on October 26, 2007, 3:06:56 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 12)
kogalover2013lol my inner sakura is soooooo blushing like badly

winxgirl21 on October 27, 2007, 12:46:12 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 12)
winxgirl21thanks for reviewing! ^-^

kogalover2013 on October 26, 2007, 12:51:50 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 9)
kogalover2013lol inner sakura is blushing

winxgirl21 on October 27, 2007, 12:43:21 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 9)
winxgirl21lolz. ^-^

Luckycat on October 19, 2007, 5:17:18 AM

Luckycat on (Chapter: 1)
LuckycatHeh, I bet the guy with onyx eyes and raven black hair wa seither itachi or sasuke.

winxgirl21 on October 19, 2007, 9:36:51 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
winxgirl21you're a good guesser! lolz!

GreyPichu on October 18, 2007, 10:11:54 PM

GreyPichu on (Chapter: 7)
GreyPichui think i may skim over or read over this series again.btw,cant wait for another chapter of the homecomeing!^^

winxgirl21 on October 19, 2007, 9:35:14 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 7)
winxgirl21ok ^-^ Hopefully, it'll e up 2moro morning. my sis is using the computer with the file on it, so i have to wait. Idt it'll get up tonight, sadly...

kurotsukimi on October 13, 2007, 4:24:22 AM

kurotsukimi on (Chapter: 29)
kurotsukimi...what happened to itachi?

winxgirl21 on October 13, 2007, 6:23:18 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
winxgirl21He's away at college. lolz. he's in the sequel, though, cuz he comes home for a visit. ^-^

kogalover2013 on October 11, 2007, 12:48:38 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 4)
kogalover2013so awsome so awsome

winxgirl21 on October 12, 2007, 6:48:41 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
winxgirl21thankies. ^-^

kogalover2013 on October 11, 2007, 12:33:21 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 1)
kogalover2013its good but i wouldn`t put in every action she dose

winxgirl21 on October 12, 2007, 6:46:34 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
winxgirl21Thanmks. ya, i tend to do that, don't i? lolz.

kogalover2013 on October 28, 2007, 1:38:26 PM

kogalover2013 on (Chapter: index)
kogalover2013a little

winxgirl21 on October 29, 2007, 7:20:40 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21I think I do get somewhat better wiht that as the story goes on. I kind of get bored with the every little detail thing. lolz.

GreyPichu on October 7, 2007, 5:03:18 AM

GreyPichu on (Chapter: index)
GreyPichuokay,i just finished!Onward to the next story!Konoha High:The Homecomeing!

winxgirl21 on October 7, 2007, 7:40:34 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz, wow, you've done a lot of reading!

GreyPichu on October 6, 2007, 5:41:04 AM

GreyPichu on (Chapter: 17)
GreyPichuOoh!ive heard of disturbia.It always looked sorta creepy.Man, i noticed they had that movie at blockbuster when i went yesterday!i could have gotten it!(unless it was rated R)

winxgirl21 on October 6, 2007, 9:44:35 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
winxgirl21It is scary, the first time you see it, lolz. And it's rated pg-13. i would never be able to watch an R rated scary movie. >.< I'd probably run outta the room screaming, lolz.

GreyPichu on October 6, 2007, 12:39:58 AM

GreyPichu on (Chapter: 10)
GreyPichuthanks for explaining the texting language like lygls!^^'

winxgirl21 on October 6, 2007, 12:47:40 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 10)
winxgirl21well, i had to explain that one, because i totally made it up, lolz! XD

GreyPichu on October 5, 2007, 1:44:59 PM

GreyPichu on (Chapter: 2)
GreyPichuOMG!I love Forever21! and Charloutte Rousse is awesome too.

winxgirl21 on October 5, 2007, 10:33:25 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
winxgirl21They're two of my favorite stores! ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on September 9, 2007, 6:42:29 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 30)
Gaarafangirl7789:D I love these stories!

winxgirl21 on September 9, 2007, 6:46:02 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on September 9, 2007, 6:34:42 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 29)
Gaarafangirl7789:O What else did he say?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!

winxgirl21 on September 9, 2007, 6:37:20 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
winxgirl21It'll be revealed eventually, in the sequel I'm pretty sure. ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on September 9, 2007, 5:59:09 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 26)
Gaarafangirl7789awesome.

winxgirl21 on September 9, 2007, 6:01:56 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
winxgirl21Thanks ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on September 9, 2007, 6:06:30 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789omg it's been a while since i read this!

winxgirl21 on September 9, 2007, 6:33:40 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21*nods head* ya, it has been.

zerotimberwolf on September 4, 2007, 11:06:11 PM

zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: index)
zerotimberwolfim writing a book 2, see it if u want

winxgirl21 on September 5, 2007, 7:08:53 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21Really? Is it posted up here? I'll have to try to check it out! ^-^

zerotimberwolf on August 23, 2007, 10:50:30 AM

zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 8)
zerotimberwolfur real good

(I think kakashi can read minds judging by those pairings)

winxgirl21 on August 23, 2007, 12:45:38 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 8)
winxgirl21lolz, he might be able to, but not even i will ever know!

darthexodus on August 23, 2007, 12:33:00 PM

darthexodus on (Chapter: index)
darthexoduswriting a book

winxgirl21 on August 23, 2007, 12:41:13 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz.

darthexodus on August 23, 2007, 12:32:32 PM

darthexodus on (Chapter: index)
darthexodusHOLY CRAP!!!!!!this has alot of chapters.are you book something dont get me wrong im its or anything

winxgirl21 on August 23, 2007, 12:37:49 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21Yea, it is long. ^-^ But I enjoted writing it. I even have a sequel out! lolz.

LuNa200 on July 5, 2007, 1:50:22 AM

LuNa200 on (Chapter: 6)
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zerotimberwolf on August 23, 2007, 10:39:16 AM

zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 6)
zerotimberwolfmine 2 :D

winxgirl21 on July 5, 2007, 1:55:20 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 6)
winxgirl21^-^ They're my second fav couple!

zerotimberwolf on August 22, 2007, 12:42:54 PM

zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 30)
zerotimberwolfHurry up with the new one already
im gettin antsy!!

zerotimberwolf on August 22, 2007, 12:43:42 PM

zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 30)
zerotimberwolfits gonna be awesome i can tell

kagome99 on August 20, 2007, 6:42:10 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 30)
kagome99I luved it!!!!!!!!
srry i haven't been on that much lately.no time.Really good.gonna read the sequel now.
And srry about what happened to your cat.i have a cat too and i don't know what would happen if she died.

winxgirl21 on August 20, 2007, 10:32:55 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21Thanks for the review! And i understand not having time. School starts for me next week, and there's gonna be hardly anytime for the computer. And, yes, I was devastated when Zoe died. A week ago, though, we adopted a new cat. She's very happy here. ^-^

kagome99 on August 21, 2007, 4:44:58 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99No prob.My school started yesterday.Not really happy about it.Hope your new cat is liking your place.


~Crazii

winxgirl21 on August 21, 2007, 7:27:27 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21wow, that's early. My sister goes back tomorrow. Right now my mom's not home, and I'm in charge of my sisters while my dad is gone. And my mom doesn't come home until saunday, so i have a lot of work to do. *sigh*

erandor3 on August 10, 2007, 1:22:30 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 15)
erandor3awww hinata fell asleep with naruto

winxgirl21 on August 10, 2007, 2:20:22 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
winxgirl21Yup! That was one of my favorite parts to write! ^-^

erandor3 on August 10, 2007, 12:54:43 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 10)
erandor3i love ur story!

winxgirl21 on August 10, 2007, 2:19:10 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 10)
winxgirl21Thanks so much! ^w^

erandor3 on August 10, 2007, 12:48:25 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 9)
erandor3are the girls gonna ask naruto so many questions he will not want to answer

winxgirl21 on August 10, 2007, 2:14:56 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 9)
winxgirl21I'm guessing you've already read far enough to know what happened, lolz! ^-^

erandor3 on August 10, 2007, 12:40:35 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 8)
erandor3you should think of publishing a book in real life

winxgirl21 on August 10, 2007, 2:11:47 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 8)
winxgirl21Oh, thanks! ^-^ I've actually thought about it, but it takes a lot of time and effort to make it that far. Although I do have ideas for one, if ever get the time, lolz!

erandor3 on August 10, 2007, 12:33:59 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 7)
erandor3ooooooooooo naruto and hinata in same club

winxgirl21 on August 10, 2007, 2:10:19 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 7)
winxgirl21yup ^-^

erandor3 on August 10, 2007, 12:28:30 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 6)
erandor3ha ha hinata has a crush poor naruto is gonna be so clueless

winxgirl21 on August 10, 2007, 2:08:59 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 6)
winxgirl21^-^ yea, kind of.

erandor3 on August 10, 2007, 12:22:22 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 5)
erandor3it just gets better and better

winxgirl21 on August 10, 2007, 2:04:02 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 5)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks! ^-^

erandor3 on August 10, 2007, 12:17:51 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 4)
erandor3haaaaaa this is a cool chapter

winxgirl21 on August 10, 2007, 2:02:53 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
winxgirl21^-^ Thanks

erandor3 on August 10, 2007, 12:12:49 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 3)
erandor3i bet hinata can't wait to see naruto

winxgirl21 on August 10, 2007, 1:59:26 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
winxgirl21^-^ yup.

erandor3 on August 10, 2007, 12:08:35 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 2)
erandor3awesome story!X3

winxgirl21 on August 10, 2007, 1:58:10 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
winxgirl21Thankies! ^-^

erandor3 on August 10, 2007, 12:02:34 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 1)
erandor3its really good for a first timer

winxgirl21 on August 10, 2007, 1:55:00 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
winxgirl21Thanks ^-^

gaaralover1 on June 20, 2007, 12:32:51 PM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 11)
gaaralover1They are a strange pair Ino and Sakura.

erandor3 on August 10, 2007, 12:59:51 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 11)
erandor3hey i remember you u commented on my stories

winxgirl21 on June 22, 2007, 3:24:38 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 11)
winxgirl21yesh, they are...

AnimeAngel87 on August 9, 2007, 8:35:51 AM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 27)
AnimeAngel87ooohness

winxgirl21 on August 9, 2007, 9:06:16 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21^-^

AnimeAngel87 on August 9, 2007, 5:04:45 AM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 22)
AnimeAngel87WEWT!

winxgirl21 on August 9, 2007, 9:04:44 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
winxgirl21^-^

AnimeAngel87 on August 8, 2007, 5:01:43 AM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 18)
AnimeAngel87Wonder what the bet is...

winxgirl21 on August 8, 2007, 6:39:31 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
winxgirl21I don't know, i never really came up with one...I just thought it sounded good, ^-^;

AnimeAngel87 on August 8, 2007, 5:01:41 AM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 18)
AnimeAngel87Wonder what the bet is...

AnimeAngel87 on August 7, 2007, 1:40:40 PM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 17)
AnimeAngel87♫♪ubervonn Awesome Chappie♪♫<33333

winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 11:01:37 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
winxgirl21Thankies ^-^

AnimeAngel87 on August 7, 2007, 9:51:02 AM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 15)
AnimeAngel87Hiya, um...i was just wondering...can i draw a pic, of Hinata with Naruto's clothes on laying on his shoulder? ppppplllzzzz????

winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 11:31:51 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
winxgirl21Oh, sure! I'd love to see that! ^-^

AnimeAngel87 on August 7, 2007, 1:33:55 PM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: index)
AnimeAngel87THANK YOU!!!<

winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 11:02:56 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz, np! ^-^

AnimeAngel87 on August 7, 2007, 9:39:07 AM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 14)
AnimeAngel87Agrees 
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winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 11:30:58 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 14)
winxgirl21^-^

AnimeAngel87 on August 7, 2007, 9:28:03 AM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 12)
AnimeAngel87I <3 Crashing stuff, i crashed my mom's jeep into the garage b4, i ran and put some guy in it
 
XD
 
i nvr got in trouble

winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 11:29:36 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 12)
winxgirl21lolz, i've never crashed anything other than toy cars XD

AnimeAngel87 on August 7, 2007, 9:23:29 AM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 10)
AnimeAngel87XDDDDDDDD

winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 11:26:33 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 10)
winxgirl21^-^

AnimeAngel87 on August 7, 2007, 9:13:07 AM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 4)
AnimeAngel87*tries to whistle with fingers*
 
Whooot Whooot
 
>:(
 
GJ!

winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 11:24:05 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
winxgirl21Thanks ^-^!

AnimeAngel87 on August 7, 2007, 9:09:21 AM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 3)
AnimeAngel87KAKASHI!!!!<33333

winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 9:11:04 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
winxgirl21lolz ^-^

AnimeAngel87 on August 7, 2007, 9:04:14 AM

AnimeAngel87 on (Chapter: 2)
AnimeAngel87This is So Awesome!
 
*faves  Story*

winxgirl21 on August 7, 2007, 9:09:39 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
winxgirl21Thanks! ^-^

Nekogal411 on July 29, 2007, 8:27:01 AM

Nekogal411 on (Chapter: index)
Nekogal411Nice! ^^
i wish i got here sonner so i could put my charater in it *sighs* oh well! your a very good writer! ^0^

winxgirl21 on July 29, 2007, 10:15:31 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21Thanks! ^-^

Nekogal411 on July 29, 2007, 11:58:37 PM

Nekogal411 on (Chapter: index)
Nekogal411No problem!

hirataitokyo on July 28, 2007, 9:02:56 AM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 30)
hirataitokyoOMG!!! I just CAN'T WAIT!!! ^^ great job ^^

winxgirl21 on July 28, 2007, 11:57:56 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21Thanks! ^-^

hirataitokyo on July 28, 2007, 8:53:17 AM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 28)
hirataitokyoaw poor tenten but great chappi^^

winxgirl21 on July 28, 2007, 11:55:59 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 28)
winxgirl21thnx ^-^

hirataitokyo on July 28, 2007, 7:18:40 AM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 27)
hirataitokyoooo nice chapi ^^

winxgirl21 on July 28, 2007, 11:54:56 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21Thanks ^-^

AmmyK on July 23, 2007, 10:13:12 PM

AmmyK on (Chapter: 30)
AmmyKOMG!!!!!!!!! u have to continue!

winxgirl21 on July 23, 2007, 10:40:57 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21The sequel Konoha High: The Homecoming is up! ^-^

Symphoniaprincess101 on July 24, 2007, 2:44:06 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: index)
Symphoniaprincess101YAY^^

TheBestDamnThing on July 20, 2007, 8:30:15 AM

TheBestDamnThing on (Chapter: 30)
TheBestDamnThingOMG!!!! I CANT WAIT SOOOO GOOD!!!!!I FEEL AN AWARD COMING ON!!

Symphoniaprincess101 on July 20, 2007, 11:31:20 PM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 30)
Symphoniaprincess101i hear ya^^

winxgirl21 on July 20, 2007, 8:59:48 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21Thanks! I'm hoping to get it up by monday! An award? huh? o.o

gaaralover1 on July 18, 2007, 7:56:00 AM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 30)
gaaralover1*sniff* Why finish it here.. Any way... You better do teh sequal or else.... I love it! I wanna know what happens with Hinata and Naruto.... Hinata IS my characters sister and kinds mine.. I feel really close to her...

winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 10:24:32 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21lolz, don't worry! The sequel should be up by monday! ^-^

crazicat06 on July 18, 2007, 7:13:55 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 30)
crazicat06Cant wait!

winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 10:23:08 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21The sequel should be up by monday! ^-^

crazicat06 on July 18, 2007, 10:24:35 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06wOoT! Yay!

winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 10:27:55 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21^-^

Symphoniaprincess101 on July 18, 2007, 3:54:03 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 30)
Symphoniaprincess101AWSOMNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^CAN'T WAIT FOR NEW STORY!!!!!!!!!!^^50 more cookies for u^^

winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 6:48:20 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21Thanks! Yay! More cookies!! yummifulness! Oh, and the sequel should be up by monday! ^-^

Symphoniaprincess101 on July 20, 2007, 11:27:23 PM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: index)
Symphoniaprincess101BOOYAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^

winxgirl21 on July 22, 2007, 1:36:09 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21^-^

AlleyCat17 on July 18, 2007, 3:29:14 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 30)
AlleyCat17i love this story and i can't for the next story i hope it is up soon and this chapter was Awesome :3 ^^

winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 6:46:54 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21Thanks! And the sequel should be up by monday! ^-^

waterbender00 on July 18, 2007, 2:28:34 AM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: 30)
waterbender00Must continue

winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 6:45:50 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21Don't worry, the sequel should be up by monday! ^-^

waterbender00 on July 18, 2007, 7:04:13 AM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: index)
waterbender00KAY

sasukeXsakuraforever on July 18, 2007, 2:18:24 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 30)
sasukeXsakuraforeverAWESOMENESS! I can't wait to see what "Homecoming" is like! *squee* Yayz!^^

winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 6:44:49 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks for reviewing! The sequel should be up by monday! ^-^

finalfantasy on July 18, 2007, 1:46:05 AM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 30)
finalfantasylolz, somebody's probably gonna end up telling sasuke anyways...

winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 6:43:42 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21I'm not sure what'll happen with that yet...it's a possibility...

eelchic on July 18, 2007, 1:09:17 AM

eelchic on (Chapter: 30)
eelchicOMG DID I LUV THAT EXPECIALLY THE PART WITH KIBA THAT WAZ AWSOME NARUTO WAZ ALL FIRED UP!!!!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on July 18, 2007, 1:15:16 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks! I'm glad that you liked it so much! ^-^

SasukesChick on July 17, 2007, 10:57:48 PM

SasukesChick on (Chapter: 30)
SasukesChickAwesomenesssss!!!! I can't wait for the sequel!!!!!!!! Please hurry, I luv dis fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on July 17, 2007, 11:00:38 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 30)
winxgirl21Thanks! And I've already started working on it. It should be up around Sunday or Monday, depending on how tired i am.

SasukesChick on July 17, 2007, 11:04:30 PM

SasukesChick on (Chapter: index)
SasukesChickk

NightWing101 on July 16, 2007, 4:01:43 AM

NightWing101 on (Chapter: 29)
NightWing101<3 the chapter tell me what will happen next!!!

winxgirl21 on July 16, 2007, 8:59:18 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
winxgirl21You'll just have to wait until wednesday! Although I'm not sure it'll tell you what you want to know. That will come in the sequel, probably. ^-^

eelchic on July 16, 2007, 1:24:26 AM

eelchic on (Chapter: 29)
eelchicgreat chapter proboly mite have done the same thing since he doesnt talk that much continue ur doin great!!!! ^-^

winxgirl21 on July 16, 2007, 8:57:32 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
winxgirl21Yea, I would have done the same thing, too! The next chapter should be up around wednesday! ^-^

SasukesChick on July 15, 2007, 10:38:57 PM

SasukesChick on (Chapter: 29)
SasukesChickContinue! Continue! What else is he to say about Sakura!!!???

winxgirl21 on July 16, 2007, 8:56:39 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
winxgirl21You'll fins out, although not in the next chapter! lolz, it'll probably come around later in the sequel! The next chapter should be up around wednesday!

finalfantasy on July 15, 2007, 1:50:29 PM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 29)
finalfantasyNEXT CHAPPIE!!!!!

winxgirl21 on July 16, 2007, 8:55:17 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
winxgirl21The next chapter should be up on wednesday! ^-^

TheBestDamnThing on July 15, 2007, 3:29:27 AM

TheBestDamnThing on (Chapter: 29)
TheBestDamnThingomg!!!!im sooo interested!!!!i've done that to one of my friends i mean read there diary!!she got mad when she found out.NOTE:do not eat peunut butter before reading a persons diary!!!

winxgirl21 on July 15, 2007, 3:33:53 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
winxgirl21What happened because you ate peanut butter before you read the diary? o.o I'm kind of scared now! You have to tell me!!

gaaralover1 on July 12, 2007, 1:43:08 PM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 29)
gaaralover1I like this chapter as much as it's late when I'm reading it... I never knew forehead girl was a snooper...

winxgirl21 on July 12, 2007, 11:34:27 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
winxgirl21Well, she is, lolz ^-^ Who wouldn't want to read Sasuke's thoughts? Thanks for reviewing!

sasukeXsakuraforever on July 12, 2007, 12:18:38 PM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 29)
sasukeXsakuraforeverSakura's a snooper! ....heck, I would do the same thing if I was friends with a human ice-cube and wanted to know his "thoughts". Lets just hope Sasuke doesn't find out! Mwahahaha! Please continue! ^.^

winxgirl21 on July 12, 2007, 11:32:22 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
winxgirl21Yea, i probably would have, too. If he finds out...I'm gonna feel sorry for Sakura. Thanks so much for reviewing! And expect the next chapter around wednesday!

Symphoniaprincess101 on July 12, 2007, 10:54:46 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 29)
Symphoniaprincess101i don't want to be sakura right now.if sasuke finds out that she read his diary OMG never the less awsome^^10 more cookies^^

winxgirl21 on July 12, 2007, 11:30:29 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
winxgirl21Yea, i think Sasuke would kill her if he found out! lolz, thanks for reviewing! Oh, and thanks for the cookies!

waterbender00 on July 12, 2007, 10:42:06 AM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: 29)
waterbender00Ooooooo Sakura read his diary. *shifty eyes*

Must continue. Shpleeeeeee!!

winxgirl21 on July 12, 2007, 11:27:47 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
winxgirl21Yup, she did! lolz, the next chapter should be up around wednesday! ^-^ Thanks for reviewing!

TheBestDamnThing on July 9, 2007, 2:52:53 AM

TheBestDamnThing on (Chapter: 28)
TheBestDamnThingthat is my mom!!!!!she is always like that!!!they always like to question boys and meh friends!it kills meh!but great chappie!!!!write more!

winxgirl21 on July 9, 2007, 7:51:29 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 28)
winxgirl21Thanks! My mom isn't like that, but i have a lot of friend's whos moms are like that ^-^

TheBestDamnThing on July 9, 2007, 2:45:57 AM

TheBestDamnThing on (Chapter: 27)
TheBestDamnThingomgomgomgomg!!! i cant wait till skool starts if skool was like this

winxgirl21 on July 9, 2007, 7:50:22 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks for reviewing! ^-^

SasukesChick on July 8, 2007, 10:09:01 PM

SasukesChick on (Chapter: 28)
SasukesChickmoms can be that way, and i understand tenten getting that way put i don't totally believe that just by wanting to be in her daughter's life is ruining it. My mom was never like that. So, i can't really relate.

SasukesChick on July 8, 2007, 10:09:32 PM

SasukesChick on (Chapter: 28)
SasukesChickOh, and awesome chapter!!!! ^^

winxgirl21 on July 9, 2007, 7:47:18 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21Yea, I just tried to make it like that because i have frineds whose parents are like that...mine isn't, she's in my life, but she's not all pushy. Thanks! ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on July 8, 2007, 5:37:20 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 28)
sasukeXsakuraforeveraww! Poor TenTen. I feel bad for her. And poor Neji has to walk home himself. I hope the next chapter is happier!^^

winxgirl21 on July 8, 2007, 8:40:35 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 28)
winxgirl21I'm not sure how the next chapter is going to turn out, but I hope it ends up happier, too...I kind of just type and the story goes where ever it ends up, lolz! ^-^

Symphoniaprincess101 on July 8, 2007, 2:52:02 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 28)
Symphoniaprincess101my parents let me do whatever i want with my life they only give me advice on how to make it better and they never once embarrased me ever in my life^^ i think ur writting is still awsome keep it up!!!^^10 more cookies^^

winxgirl21 on July 8, 2007, 8:39:18 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 28)
winxgirl21Yea, my parents just embarass me when people are over...but they just give me advice for my life, too

eelchic on July 7, 2007, 9:15:00 AM

eelchic on (Chapter: 28)
eelchicmy mom isnt that bad but my dad is apain in the *ss but great chap i think ur writting is still awsome keep it up!!! ^-^

winxgirl21 on July 7, 2007, 9:16:46 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 28)
winxgirl21Thanks! Ywea, it pretty much is my dad, and then he's just trying to be funny, but all he does is get on everyone's nerves, lolz!

gaaralover1 on July 7, 2007, 9:08:53 AM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: index)
gaaralover1Otay! :D Sorry hyper at the moment.

winxgirl21 on July 7, 2007, 9:10:05 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21np ^-^

gaaralover1 on July 7, 2007, 9:01:37 AM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: index)
gaaralover1Put more chapters.. I wanna keep reading before I forget where I am.... I did that with a friends story and now I have to start all over again.

winxgirl21 on July 7, 2007, 9:05:15 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21Sorry, but another chapter won't be finished until around thursday. ^-^' I've started the next one, but I'm having some friends over in the next couple of days and won't be home much on wednesday, adn thursday is probably the soonest it will be up.

gaaralover1 on July 7, 2007, 7:53:36 AM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 28)
gaaralover1Man Tenten's mom sure is pushy... I don't blame tenten for getting so mad.

winxgirl21 on July 7, 2007, 8:22:32 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 28)
winxgirl21yea, I would get mad if I were TenTen. Thanks for reviewing!

crazicat06 on July 7, 2007, 5:50:38 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 28)
crazicat06Wow.... Ten Ten's mom is a real sweet heart. Not!
Man... I can relate to Ten Ten. My mom sometimes just butts into my life and makes a decision for me. I hate it.

finalfantasy on July 7, 2007, 7:15:27 AM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 28)
finalfantasyoh, yea, my mom just loves to do that! ^.^ i still love her, tho. great chappie, update soon!

gaaralover1 on July 6, 2007, 11:45:04 PM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 27)
gaaralover1Me: * Looks at Tenten* Wow you acctually had the courage to.... ( Inner: Did she ever meet my father)

winxgirl21 on July 6, 2007, 11:46:45 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks for reviewing! ^-^

PinkAngel101 on July 6, 2007, 3:54:38 AM

PinkAngel101 on (Chapter: 27)
PinkAngel101I LOVE IT

winxgirl21 on July 6, 2007, 8:01:55 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

LuNa200 on July 6, 2007, 1:38:04 AM

LuNa200 on (Chapter: 15)
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winxgirl21 on July 6, 2007, 2:47:28 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
winxgirl21thnx! ^-^

finalfantasy on July 5, 2007, 9:36:49 PM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 27)
finalfantasyomg! dont u hate it when parents do that?!

winxgirl21 on July 5, 2007, 10:15:23 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21Yea, it gets on my nerves when my parents do that...>.< and then I do what TenTen did, and try to ditch them....

Symphoniaprincess101 on July 5, 2007, 10:47:55 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 27)
Symphoniaprincess101i'm with waterbender00 and sasukeXsakuraforever this story is getting more and more awsome by the second^^40 more cookies for u^^

winxgirl21 on July 5, 2007, 10:58:37 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21wow, i'm getting a lot of cookies...I'd better go exercise! XD Thanks!

AlleyCat17 on July 5, 2007, 6:55:53 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 27)
AlleyCat17wow that was a great chapter.

winxgirl21 on July 5, 2007, 7:07:56 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21thanks ^-^

eelchic on July 5, 2007, 4:54:42 AM

eelchic on (Chapter: index)
eelchicnaruhina is my absolute fav couple i go crazy when i see astory about them then i HAVE to read it!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on July 5, 2007, 7:06:59 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz ^-^

eelchic on July 4, 2007, 2:01:39 PM

eelchic on (Chapter: 27)
eelchici thought the chapther waz awsome and the forest is so so romantic to be alone together i wonder if they would end up makin out just kiddin but great chapter i love all ur couples!!!!!! ^-^

winxgirl21 on July 4, 2007, 10:25:28 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21Thanks! ^-^ haha, yea I don't think that would happen.

crazicat06 on July 4, 2007, 1:34:30 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 27)
crazicat06Cool!

winxgirl21 on July 4, 2007, 10:23:43 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21^-^

waterbender00 on July 4, 2007, 10:44:27 AM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: 27)
waterbender00I'm with sasukeXsakuraforever.

I love how this Fic is going. ^^

winxgirl21 on July 4, 2007, 11:52:32 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on July 4, 2007, 10:01:56 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 27)
sasukeXsakuraforeverOoooo! Alone in the forest just the two of them. Pretty good way get to know eachother. I like that! I don't think Neji is OOC'ed either, because he was always considerate to TenTen, so I think it turned out well! Very good job, hope the next chapters just as good at this one! ^_~*

winxgirl21 on July 4, 2007, 10:04:54 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
winxgirl21Thanks, I'm glad that you think it turned out ok! I'm hoping to get the next chapter up around friday or saturday!

eelchic on July 3, 2007, 3:34:08 AM

eelchic on (Chapter: index)
eelchicluv Konoha High its totally amazin i relly glad ur gunna do a sequal,and im relly sorry about ur cat ur right she is in a better place with all the tuna she can eat and i know how u feel i had my dog put to sleep when i waz young we had the dog since b4 i waz born but ur cat will always be with u is wat i like to think great story keep on writtin!!! ^-^

winxgirl21 on July 3, 2007, 5:02:33 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21thanks! And yea, she's up there watching me, and eating yummyful tuna. ^-^

gaaralover1 on July 2, 2007, 8:44:02 AM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 26)
gaaralover1Nice chapter.. I love all teh dresses but I love HInata's more.. I wonder if my friend could make me a dress like Hinata's or maybe my cousin has a dress like that for my grad...

winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 9:10:49 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
winxgirl21I'm sure that you can get one like it. All of the dresses are based off of ones taht I saw at Deb when i was shopping for spring formal. ^-^

Symphoniaprincess101 on July 2, 2007, 4:45:03 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 26)
Symphoniaprincess101I have a cat and he always gets cuts and scars so i know how u feel.
This Chapter was AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^10 more cookies for u^^

winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 5:12:37 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
winxgirl21Thnaks! Actually, she had to be put to sleep this morning, I'm still upset about it, but i know that she's in a better place. ^-^

Symphoniaprincess101 on July 2, 2007, 5:26:03 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: index)
Symphoniaprincess101yea^^

winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 5:35:33 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21^-^

AlleyCat17 on July 2, 2007, 4:40:38 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 26)
AlleyCat17i just love this chapter and the dress oh and it's ok if you end this story soon just make sure you make a squle to this story and tell me when you do ok.

winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 4:43:27 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
winxgirl21I definately will tell you when I make the sequel. This story should continue until around chapter 30. then I should start working on the sequel. ^-^

SasukesChick on July 1, 2007, 10:36:52 PM

SasukesChick on (Chapter: 26)
SasukesChickPlease continue soon. It was a very good chapter.
As for your cat, I hope it will get better.

winxgirl21 on July 1, 2007, 10:54:56 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
winxgirl21Thanks! I'm planning to get the next chapter up around tuesday! And thanx, wer hoping she gets better too.

finalfantasy on July 1, 2007, 12:58:36 PM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 26)
finalfantasyyea, the dresses sound totally kawaii!!!! xD looking forward to next chappie!

winxgirl21 on July 1, 2007, 10:53:21 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
winxgirl21thanks! It should be up soon! around tuesday, I'm hoping ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on July 1, 2007, 12:51:15 PM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 26)
sasukeXsakuraforeverOh no! Your kitty!! Do CPR! Take her to a cat hospital! Call Opera!!! Cats are my favorite animal and I can't stand to see or even hear that one is sick. It breaks my heart...

Onto the chapter

Ooooooh! Such pretty dresses! I think my favorite is Sakura's. I always loved crimson red colored things! So beautiful! Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one! ^_~

winxgirl21 on July 1, 2007, 10:52:30 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
winxgirl21thanks, she's in the hospital right now, and we won't know much more until tonight. Thanks! I'm workig on the next chapter now!

crazicat06 on July 1, 2007, 12:25:48 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 26)
crazicat06Nice. Those dresses sound awsomely gorgeous.
Aw.. Poor kitty. I hope she gets better.

winxgirl21 on July 1, 2007, 10:50:08 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
winxgirl21thanks! Yea, we won't know anything until tonight, but thanks ^-^ I hope she does too!

crazicat06 on July 2, 2007, 8:26:58 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06^.^

winxgirl21 on July 2, 2007, 8:32:36 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21they ended up putting her to sleep this morning. The vet examined her tests closer and realized that she was in her final stage of death. I miss her a lot, but I'm glad that she's not suffering anymore.

crazicat06 on July 2, 2007, 1:15:41 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06*nod*

TheBestDamnThing on July 1, 2007, 2:52:51 AM

TheBestDamnThing on (Chapter: 25)
TheBestDamnThingomg!!!!dont end it its soooo good!!!!!sasuke is kinda like me....i talk alot!but only when i get nervas any who this chapter was really good.plez dont stop!

winxgirl21 on July 1, 2007, 8:58:03 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
winxgirl21Don't worry, i'm not going to end it, I'm going to make a sequel that picks up where the story leaves off. ^-^

TheBestDamnThing on July 1, 2007, 12:13:20 AM

TheBestDamnThing on (Chapter: 4)
TheBestDamnThinggreat!

winxgirl21 on July 1, 2007, 8:56:39 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
winxgirl21thnx! ^-^

TheBestDamnThing on June 30, 2007, 11:48:01 PM

TheBestDamnThing on (Chapter: 3)
TheBestDamnThingOk I LOVE IT!!!im serious so u can keep the cookie

winxgirl21 on July 1, 2007, 8:56:03 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
winxgirl21thanks! yay, cookie!

finalfantasy on June 29, 2007, 12:02:55 PM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 25)
finalfantasyman, its just getting good! u cant end now!

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 10:49:53 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
winxgirl21I won't be ending it, I'll probably stop this one around chapter 30 and then pick it up with a sequel. ^-^

finalfantasy on June 29, 2007, 11:52:45 AM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 23)
finalfantasyhehe, those claw machines are rigged, man.

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 11:55:05 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
winxgirl21not really, you just have to nkow what you can and can't get, lolz! My dad wins them all the time,and he's taught my sisters and I how to win them...my mom hates all of the stufed animals from them, though...probably because we insist on keeping all of them, even the scary looking ones...^-^

SasukesChick on June 29, 2007, 11:20:25 AM

SasukesChick on (Chapter: 25)
SasukesChickMaybe you should do a sequel. That way, everyone will be dying for you to finally put it up. I don't think, if you continued it on this one title, it would be too many chapters. But, it'd be kool if you did a sequel.

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 11:25:31 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
winxgirl21thanks! I think I'm probably going to go with the sequel idea, because a lot of people think that's a good idea...this one should go until around chapter 30, though ^-^

finalfantasy on June 29, 2007, 11:06:23 AM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 17)
finalfantasyhey, thats funny, cuz my sis went on her first date with a gut to see Disturbia! xD lol

finalfantasy on June 29, 2007, 11:06:56 AM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 17)
finalfantasyhehe, oops. meant guy. xDDDD

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 11:08:04 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21really? that's a weird coincidence >.< ^-^ lolz!

finalfantasy on June 29, 2007, 10:59:37 AM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 15)
finalfantasyi think this is my favorite chapter so far! ive been reading the story, and i wasnt going to post till the end, but i just had to! thats just too cute! NaruHina 4 Eva!!!

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 11:04:28 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
winxgirl21thanks! I love that chapter too!

NightWing101 on June 29, 2007, 9:09:02 AM

NightWing101 on (Chapter: 25)
NightWing101I agree Please dont end it or ill be really sad!!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 10:49:43 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
winxgirl21I'm not going to end it, there will be a sequel tath picks up around where the story leaves off, I'd never end it where it is now! ^-^

NightWing101 on June 29, 2007, 11:50:24 AM

NightWing101 on (Chapter: index)
NightWing101YAY!! Thank you so much!!!

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 11:53:12 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz ^-^

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 29, 2007, 8:09:22 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 25)
Symphoniaprincess101I have to agree with u ending it and starting a sequel and also THAT WAS ONE OF THE MOST AWSOMEST(if thats a word)CHAPTER EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!20 more cookies^^

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 10:48:31 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
winxgirl21Thanks, that seems to be what everyone thinks once they realize that there will be a sequel, so i think that's what I'm going to do ^-^ yay! more cookies!!

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 30, 2007, 9:53:05 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: index)
Symphoniaprincess101Am i the only person who read the ending notes carefuly?_?You'er welcome for the cookies^^

winxgirl21 on July 1, 2007, 8:58:46 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21ya, i think you are...everyone else just starts freaking out about me ending it -_-'

crazicat06 on June 29, 2007, 6:41:45 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 25)
crazicat06ZOMG!!!! Yay! ^.^
Nyu! Dont end it! Its too interesting!

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 6:44:38 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
winxgirl21I wouldn't be ending it, I'd just be stopping it here and then creating a sequel taht would pick up from where I left off here, or picking up in about a month (story time, not real life) and making it closer to homecoming. i wouldn't stop writing it! ^-^

crazicat06 on June 29, 2007, 6:45:28 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Oh thank gawd.... Thats a releif! ^.^' I like this story a lot and dont want to see it end.

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 6:47:35 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21no, I'd never end it without putting homecoming in it!

crazicat06 on June 29, 2007, 6:48:33 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06lol Yay homecoming!

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 6:59:34 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on June 29, 2007, 5:20:55 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 25)
sasukeXsakuraforeverNo! You can't end it! It's like a perfect Highschool story! I love it so much... *sniff sniff* I don't want it to end. But any who, this chapter was good! Who knew Sasuke was so talkative^^

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 5:26:40 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
winxgirl21Oh, no! I wouldn't end it! I'd make a sequel and pikc it up where the story leaves off, or pick it up in about a month (in story time, not real time) and make it closer to homecoming ^-^ I'm glad that you like it so much, though!

sasukeXsakuraforever on June 29, 2007, 6:01:22 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: index)
sasukeXsakuraforeverREALLY!?!? *phew* Thank goodness! I was getting a little worried there! Ok then! Thats really good!^^

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 6:05:49 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21yup ^-^

NightWing101 on June 29, 2007, 5:20:08 AM

NightWing101 on (Chapter: index)
NightWing101WOW!!! I can'twait to read the next chapter. SO MUCH SUSPENCE!!!!

winxgirl21 on June 29, 2007, 5:23:28 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^ I'm working on the next chapter now!

PinkAngel101 on June 28, 2007, 9:37:11 AM

PinkAngel101 on (Chapter: index)
PinkAngel101COOL

winxgirl21 on June 28, 2007, 10:28:29 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

NightWing101 on June 27, 2007, 1:55:13 AM

NightWing101 on (Chapter: 24)
NightWing101That Was Awsome! tell me when the next chapter is out please!

winxgirl21 on June 27, 2007, 10:54:39 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
winxgirl21thanks! And, ok, I will! ^-^

LuNa200 on June 27, 2007, 1:06:07 AM

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winxgirl21 on June 27, 2007, 1:08:14 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
winxgirl21thanks! I'm glad that you like it! ^-^

LuNa200 on June 26, 2007, 11:59:44 PM

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winxgirl21 on June 27, 2007, 1:07:45 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on June 26, 2007, 4:41:32 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 24)
Gaarafangirl7789awesome chap!

winxgirl21 on June 26, 2007, 5:04:09 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
winxgirl21thanks!

Gaarafangirl7789 on June 26, 2007, 2:59:54 PM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789welcome!

Gaarafangirl7789 on June 26, 2007, 3:04:53 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 23)
Gaarafangirl7789awwww! Kawaiiiii!

winxgirl21 on June 26, 2007, 5:03:55 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
winxgirl21^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on June 26, 2007, 2:56:49 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 22)
Gaarafangirl7789lol when Ino dragged Hinata out the door it reminded me of me and my friend! we were on a double date and when the guys pulled up she practically dragged me out the door!

winxgirl21 on June 26, 2007, 5:02:41 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
winxgirl21lolz, really? I would have been like, stop pulling me!

Gaarafangirl7789 on June 26, 2007, 2:58:28 PM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789meh I wouldn't have moved at all if she didn't though! xD

winxgirl21 on June 26, 2007, 10:59:48 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21then it was a good thing! lolz

Gaarafangirl7789 on June 26, 2007, 2:48:00 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 21)
Gaarafangirl7789cool! Great discriptions by the way!

winxgirl21 on June 26, 2007, 5:01:56 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 21)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on June 26, 2007, 2:59:16 PM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789welcome! ^-^

gaaralover1 on June 26, 2007, 12:15:57 AM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 24)
gaaralover1Poor Hinata.... Really though.. HIYASHI * said in a mean annoyed tone* Is really hard on her... And so is Neji... I like his new additude in the series... He's a lot nicer and so much more fun... And Also... HA HA HA * Laughing at Ino*Ino: Shut up!!! You'd be scared too!!Me: No I wouldn't
In: Yes you would.. Disterbia's very scary at the second part.
Me: Ok I'll go with Gaara and I won't be scard one bit.. * walks off to see disturbia with Gaara* * COmes back out when it's finished.*
Ino: so?
Me: I wasn't scared.
Gaara: It's true..
Ino: *nods*
Naruto: * Creeps up bedhinde me and grabs me by my swides*
Me: * Yawns* oh Hi Naruto..
Ino: * At a lose for words*

winxgirl21 on June 26, 2007, 1:10:31 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
winxgirl21lolz! thanks for reviewing! Yea, i tried to make Neji nicer by making him overprotective instead of being mean...

sasukeXsakuraforever on June 25, 2007, 12:09:01 PM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 24)
sasukeXsakuraforeverBWAHAHA! Poor Ino, she screamed like a little girl...heck, I would scream like a little girl. Very nice! KEEP E'M COMING!!^^^

winxgirl21 on June 26, 2007, 1:08:14 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
winxgirl21Thanks! Yea, i probably would have screamed, too...lolz

waterbender00 on June 24, 2007, 9:40:12 AM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: 24)
waterbender00CUTE. Please update ASAP. ^^

winxgirl21 on June 24, 2007, 9:44:03 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks! And don't worry, I'm working on it!

KinSinja on June 24, 2007, 7:16:42 AM

KinSinja on (Chapter: 24)
KinSinjaI love this story!!!!!!!!!!
But can´t you make so new guys show up, so it will become love problems?
It wold be more fun to read that(it is it already!),
because it is like everyone else not exist.

winxgirl21 on June 24, 2007, 9:43:35 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
winxgirl21trust me, I'm already planning to have some stuff like that happen! Thanks for reviewing!

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 23, 2007, 4:43:48 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 24)
Symphoniaprincess101Awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^10 more cookies for you^^

winxgirl21 on June 23, 2007, 8:45:27 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
winxgirl21yay! more cookies! *eats cookies happily* Thanks for reviewing!

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 21, 2007, 11:05:41 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 6)
Symphoniaprincess101awsome

winxgirl21 on June 22, 2007, 3:26:21 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 6)
winxgirl21thanks!

gaaralover1 on June 21, 2007, 10:48:12 AM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 23)
gaaralover1Naruto's acctually good at something other than being a loud mouth Jerk and my charaters personal punching bag....

winxgirl21 on June 22, 2007, 3:25:55 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
winxgirl21yesh, lolz,he is! it's one of his few talents!

gaaralover1 on June 20, 2007, 11:58:03 AM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 3)
gaaralover1I like this..

winxgirl21 on June 22, 2007, 3:24:01 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
winxgirl21thanks!

gaaralover1 on June 20, 2007, 11:42:35 AM

gaaralover1 on (Chapter: 1)
gaaralover1Raven black hair and Onyx eyes... Would that be Sasuke Uchiha who was described there?? Cool beginning.

winxgirl21 on June 22, 2007, 3:23:27 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
winxgirl21it might be...lolz

hirataitokyo on June 19, 2007, 12:09:00 PM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 23)
hirataitokyooh awesome naruto gave hinata the bear so sweet, and it fits with Naruto being able to do that having it be a special talent! Great job!

winxgirl21 on June 22, 2007, 3:22:29 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
winxgirl21yea, i could totally picture him being able to do that,and I just had to squeeze it in somewhere!

hirataitokyo on June 19, 2007, 11:59:27 AM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 21)
hirataitokyooh woah, that's great, and I love the descriptions! I could actually picture them like how you described them!!! great job! ^^ (and it's a good chapter for me to start back on since I haven't read it in a while)

winxgirl21 on June 22, 2007, 3:09:44 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 21)
winxgirl21thanks! I'm glad that you think so!

PinkAngel101 on June 19, 2007, 5:00:25 AM

PinkAngel101 on (Chapter: 23)
PinkAngel101 awwwwww this is my 1st favorite storie (im new soooo..... ^^) I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!

winxgirl21 on June 22, 2007, 3:08:29 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
winxgirl21thanks! just got home from the beach, but I should get it up as soon as I get my other computer working...

PinkAngel101 on June 19, 2007, 3:51:58 AM

PinkAngel101 on (Chapter: 4)
PinkAngel101THIS IS AWESOME!!!

winxgirl21 on June 22, 2007, 3:06:30 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
winxgirl21thanks!

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 14, 2007, 10:26:13 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 23)
Symphoniaprincess101Awsome the part when naruto gave hinata the bear i could see him blush a little^^you are an awsome writer^^you earned 20 cookies*leaves it with the commet*^^

winxgirl21 on June 14, 2007, 10:51:54 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
winxgirl21oo, yay! cookies! *eats them happily* eheh, thanks so much for reviewing!

AlleyCat17 on June 14, 2007, 1:07:47 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 23)
AlleyCat17wow great chapter and date.

winxgirl21 on June 14, 2007, 4:59:07 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on June 13, 2007, 12:00:59 PM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 23)
sasukeXsakuraforeverAWWW!♥♥♥ Naruto gave Hinata a teddy bear! THATS SO SWEET!!!!! good job again! Loving it!

winxgirl21 on June 13, 2007, 10:48:44 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
winxgirl21thanks! I'm glad that you're loving it! ^-^

kagome99 on June 13, 2007, 11:59:00 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 23)
kagome99That was great!!!I luved the little Naruto has with the claw game.I actually have a talent with those too.
Great chappie!!

winxgirl21 on June 13, 2007, 10:47:30 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
winxgirl21yea, i'm good at them, but my dad is amazing with them...my room has always been filled with stuffed animals from them...Thanks so much for reviewing!

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 13, 2007, 11:05:18 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 19)
Symphoniaprincess101that was so nice what Shikamaru did when he always thinks everything is troublesome.^^*faves*

winxgirl21 on June 13, 2007, 10:46:07 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 19)
winxgirl21thanks so much for reviewing!! ^-^

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 13, 2007, 9:46:32 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 3)
Symphoniaprincess101cOOlNEsS

winxgirl21 on June 13, 2007, 10:45:25 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
winxgirl21thanks!

kagome99 on May 31, 2007, 5:54:22 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 22)
kagome99such a great chappie!!!!!cant wait for the date!!!!!

winxgirl21 on June 13, 2007, 10:42:58 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
winxgirl21thanks!

NightWing101 on May 31, 2007, 4:53:12 AM

NightWing101 on (Chapter: index)
NightWing1014 things. Great job on the stories!!! Hinatas dad's name is Hiashi Hyuga. Does that freshmen tag thing really happen???? I'm on summer break and when its over I am a freshmen in High school.
 
KEEP ON WRITING YOUR STORIES THEY ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on May 31, 2007, 5:47:05 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21thanks, and thanks! And at my school, yes it does happen, I was a Freshman this year...I'm not sure if it happens at other schools or not...it's gotten way better over the years, one of the teachers said that when she went to our highschool, they used to take Freshmen into the senior cafeteria and make them sing "I'm a Little Teapot" while dancing on the lunch tables...

NightWing101 on June 13, 2007, 10:16:13 AM

NightWing101 on (Chapter: index)
NightWing101Hey! what did they make you do for freshman tag?

winxgirl21 on June 13, 2007, 10:44:32 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21I didn't really have anything done to me, but my friends did...we kind of traveled in groups around campus, and then people didn't really want to deal with a big group of freshmen...but someone did try to put spraypaint on my clothes...

1mangalover on May 31, 2007, 12:14:21 AM

1mangalover on (Chapter: 1)
1mangaloverThis is great!

winxgirl21 on May 31, 2007, 5:43:24 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
winxgirl21thanks!

AlleyCat17 on May 30, 2007, 11:10:59 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: index)
AlleyCat17i know how you feel my exams are on the 8 of june until the 15 i tinhk but i only have 3 exams to study for anyways.then school is out on the 21 i think.

winxgirl21 on May 31, 2007, 5:41:46 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21you onli haev 3 exams to study for? you're lucky, I have 7 to study for....my last day of exams is the 8th, but all next week is halfdays so we get more studying time for the exams...

sasukeXsakuraforever on April 24, 2007, 6:14:30 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 17)
sasukeXsakuraforeverOMG I KNOW! I hate it when I get a freaky IM from someone I don't know! Grr! Makes me mad!

Thats enough about me...

GR8 yet again! Luv how you got Sasuke and Sakura to text eachother! And OMG, can't wait for the plan to be put in action! Hinata will FREAK... or.... FAINT!... XD Whichever one comes first I guess! Keep up the good... no... great... no... AWSOME (yeah) WORK! YAY! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE! SUQEEEEEE!♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

waterbender00 on May 30, 2007, 11:59:55 AM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: 17)
waterbender00I once got a call to go hang out at that mall by some guy named Drew that said my boyfriend would be there. It was a good thing I was at a friends house and it was 9 o'clock at night. I'm a goody-goody when it comes to decent hours to be out, and another thing I didn't even know the guy!

I still wonder how the hell did he get my number!
That happened again only this time it was my friend Curt. He was just wondering if me and my boyfriend want to go see Spiderman 3 the next day.
Man this is a long comment...O_o

winxgirl21 on April 24, 2007, 7:45:29 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
winxgirl21thanks! I'm glad that I'm not the only one like that! And I've started the next chapter already, so I'm hoping to get it up by friday or Saturady morning....

abitofdrama on April 26, 2007, 3:13:32 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 17)
abitofdramaWeee!!! Yeah that chapter was "ermosa" meaning beautiful in spainish. I can't wait for the next but till then I will ponder the following: how much I want to see that Distirpia movie, how ec\ach time I see Shila (the main protagonis/ guy from Even Stevens) I want to sing "Digg'n up those holes", whether Naruto is smart evough to figure the plan out, whether Hinata can figure it out for him, what exactlly Shika has been doing in your fic since he hasn't made an apperance since like when?, how cool Sasuke looks with a T-Mobile or Virzion in his hand, and all the other random things I think of, Cha cha cha Charmin! ttfn

waterbender00 on May 30, 2007, 11:53:26 AM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: 17)
waterbender00Chica that would be hermosa...I think... That's at least what my cuz told me and she knows more spanish than I do. And I thought his name was Shia

winxgirl21 on April 27, 2007, 7:18:47 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
winxgirl21lolz, wow! long review, trust me, Shikaamru is there, but he's been sleeping most of the time, lolz, he will make an appearance soon, though! I always wanna sing taht song when i see him, too! And Disturbia is an awesome movie, just really scary! Thanks for reviewing!

14thXBladeXofXTwilight on February 26, 2007, 5:34:59 AM

14thXBladeXofXTwilight on (Chapter: 4)
14thXBladeXofXTwilight"The guy with the girly hair is Neji."
 
ROFLMAO!! Neji does have girly hair. XD

waterbender00 on May 30, 2007, 11:03:54 AM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: 4)
waterbender00Hey he likes to pamper himself

winxgirl21 on February 26, 2007, 5:51:02 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
winxgirl21yea, >.< I was thinking about that, and just had to put it in there! lolz

waterbender00 on May 30, 2007, 10:53:09 AM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: 22)
waterbender00yeah a new chapter. please continue. can't wait for the date. I think you got his name right O_o

winxgirl21 on May 30, 2007, 10:56:46 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
winxgirl21Thanks! I started the next chapter, but I have finals next week, so there's no telling when i'll finish it or get it up...hopefully sunday...Oh, adn thanks! At least one person thinks i got his name right, no one else has said anything....

waterbender00 on May 30, 2007, 11:04:48 AM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: index)
waterbender00Your still in school O_o. I got out last week.

winxgirl21 on May 31, 2007, 5:39:19 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21yea, I have school until the 8th, which is a week from tomorrow, but next week is all half days, thanks to exams...

AlleyCat17 on May 30, 2007, 9:38:13 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 22)
AlleyCat17yeah a new chapter and very great.and i can't wait for there date.

winxgirl21 on May 30, 2007, 9:45:54 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
winxgirl21lolz,thanks! Their date should be the next chapter, I've already started it, but I'm not sure when I'll have time to finish it and get it up since my finals are next week....

kagome99 on May 23, 2007, 10:18:08 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99hope you add another chappie soon!!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on May 30, 2007, 9:44:45 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21Don't worry, i'm working on the next chapter now, and it will be about their date. I'm just not sure when i'll ge tthe chance to update because of my finals that are next week....

waterbender00 on May 23, 2007, 6:53:32 AM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: index)
waterbender00Please Continue I Have to now what is gunna happen on Naruto and Hinata's and Shikamaru and Ino's Date.

winxgirl21 on May 30, 2007, 9:42:32 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21Well, the next chapter is up and the date isn't in it, but the date should be in the next chapter!

waterbender00 on May 23, 2007, 6:17:08 AM

waterbender00 on (Chapter: 13)
waterbender00the diary entry is a good addition, makes it seem more real.

winxgirl21 on May 23, 2007, 6:26:53 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 13)
winxgirl21thanks! I'm glad that you think that, because i was trying to put it in there for that reason! ^-^

kagome99 on May 21, 2007, 11:50:33 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 21)
kagome99so cute.i really want to know what happens on their dates.cant wait!!!!!!
perfect outfits!i can really picture it.

winxgirl21 on May 22, 2007, 11:17:16 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 21)
winxgirl21Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter now!

AlleyCat17 on May 21, 2007, 10:37:36 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 21)
AlleyCat17wow great chapter.man i can't wait for the big double date.i just love this
story :3 ^^

winxgirl21 on May 21, 2007, 11:10:22 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 21)
winxgirl21Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter now, but I don't know when I'll have a chance to finish it cuz I have finals coming up and my teachers are piling on the homework....

sasukeXsakuraforever on May 21, 2007, 9:08:25 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 21)
sasukeXsakuraforeverAwww! So cute! I can seriously picture them looking like that too! Nice job, can't wait for the double date! Yayz! 20/10! GR8 JOB!^^

winxgirl21 on May 21, 2007, 9:12:08 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 21)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks so much! I actually have the next chapter thought up, but i'm not sure when i'm going to haev a chance to get it typed up, since my finals are coming up adn teachers a re giving homework like crazy!

hirataitokyo on May 20, 2007, 1:13:43 AM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 20)
hirataitokyohaha lmao, love the ending, reading a note infront of the class haha!!!!! ^^

winxgirl21 on May 20, 2007, 1:51:49 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 20)
winxgirl21thanks! I'm glad that you liked that, I had a really hard time coming up with it....

hirataitokyo on May 18, 2007, 9:47:18 AM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 19)
hirataitokyooooooo awesomenessS!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ kawaii!!! great job, i've been waiting for the chapters ^^ yaay great job!

winxgirl21 on May 18, 2007, 10:11:15 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 19)
winxgirl21thanks, I'm glad that you think so! I'm actually hoping to update tomorrow, if my little sister will proofread the chapter by then. I'm waiting on her now....lolz

kagome99 on May 17, 2007, 8:26:22 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 20)
kagome99so kewl!!!
i just luv this story!!!!!
i just luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
plz!!!!!!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on May 18, 2007, 6:39:28 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 20)
winxgirl21Thanks! I'm glad that you like it so much! I'm working on the next chapter now. ^-^

kagome99 on May 17, 2007, 8:21:44 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 19)
kagome99so KAWAII!!!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on May 17, 2007, 8:25:58 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 19)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

kagome99 on May 17, 2007, 9:54:59 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99hey!just wanted to tell that i added a new kewl chappie on Konoha High!!!!!!
i cant wait to see what the next chappie is!!!

diva96 on May 15, 2007, 10:28:58 AM

diva96 on (Chapter: 17)
diva96cool! nice plan!

winxgirl21 on May 17, 2007, 8:25:34 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
winxgirl21Thanks, glad that you think so!

diva96 on May 15, 2007, 10:22:44 AM

diva96 on (Chapter: 15)
diva96awwwwww!!! that's cute!

winxgirl21 on May 17, 2007, 8:24:33 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
winxgirl21thanks!

diva96 on May 15, 2007, 10:13:12 AM

diva96 on (Chapter: 13)
diva96nice!!! love it!

winxgirl21 on May 17, 2007, 8:23:40 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 13)
winxgirl21thanks!

sasukeXsakuraforever on May 14, 2007, 4:20:55 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 20)
sasukeXsakuraforeverOMG Kakashi! Your so mean!!! Sheeesh, I would have kicked his buttox for that!! >:D Haha, another awsome chapter! Sorry I didn't comment earlier, I was on a school trip, and when I got home... I GOT SICK!! WHATS UP WITH THAT! -_-' Ok, never mind about that! Can't wait for the next chappie! WRITE! WRITE!! WRITE TI'LL YOUR HEARTS CONTENT!!! WAHOOO! XD

winxgirl21 on May 14, 2007, 7:13:29 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 20)
winxgirl21lolz, I'm actually a little under half way through the next chapter, I want to make it longer since I felt that this one was so short, but We'll see how that turns out....thanks for reviewing!

AlleyCat17 on May 13, 2007, 4:22:55 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 20)
AlleyCat17hey loved the chapter and very funny ending if that happened to me
i think i would die if my teacher read that in front of the class.oh yeah
welcome back!! :3

winxgirl21 on May 13, 2007, 5:50:29 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 20)
winxgirl21thanks! Yea, my teacher's threaten that all the time, but have never actually done that....one teacher(in 7th grade, a while ago, lolz) would take the notes and post them on a bulliten board...but people started writing stupid stuff just so everyone could read it...so she stopped, lolz

Gaarafangirl7789 on May 13, 2007, 3:36:28 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 20)
Gaarafangirl7789Pretty funny how Kakashi read the note to the class.

winxgirl21 on May 13, 2007, 5:47:41 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 20)
winxgirl21yea, I got that from how some of my teachers are...if they see a note, they threaten to read it outload, although no one actually has...

abitofdrama on May 7, 2007, 1:32:44 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 19)
abitofdramaYeah, He's back! You brought him back better than Justin brought sexy back *starts playing song*. I for some weird reason imagined their first date in this story as a bowling date. Don't ask me why it just happens. I'm weird like that. Okay not weird just... yeah anyway sill good story.

winxgirl21 on May 8, 2007, 9:17:36 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 19)
winxgirl21hmmm...a bowling date? Well, I'll definately keep that one in mind for later on in the story!

abitofdrama on May 9, 2007, 11:20:01 AM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: index)
abitofdramaStrike!! Yeah bowling's cool but I suck, I love it though. Because if you know your bad you can always just go gutter on purpose.

winxgirl21 on May 10, 2007, 6:38:50 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21same, I love bowling, but I'm awful at it!

abitofdrama on May 7, 2007, 1:20:42 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 18)
abitofdramaBELIEVE IT! Naruto finally goes on a date with Hinata. About time. Though thinking about it now... Naruto doesn't seem like the type to be able to sit quietly and still in a movie. He seems like the type that would laugh at random times or throw popcorn at the person in the front row. Hopefullly he's better on a date. I hope... still awsome story!

winxgirl21 on May 8, 2007, 9:15:46 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
winxgirl21lolz, well, i havn't written the date chapter yet, so i'm not sure how he'll end up behaving...Hopefully on his best behavior, lolz!

abitofdrama on May 9, 2007, 11:21:28 AM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: index)
abitofdramayeah me too... *thows orvil popcorn for awsome story* Orvil popcorn is probably the best microwave popcorn ever.

winxgirl21 on May 10, 2007, 6:37:26 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz, yes, it is!

digimonlover06 on May 5, 2007, 3:25:55 AM

digimonlover06 on (Chapter: 19)
digimonlover06i can't wait for the next chapter .

winxgirl21 on May 5, 2007, 8:08:58 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 19)
winxgirl21It should be up by tuesday!

sasukeXsakuraforever on May 5, 2007, 2:32:24 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 19)
sasukeXsakuraforeverYAY! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Hehe! I'm lovin' it! (Mcdonalds quote XD) Loving how you set up the story perfectly! *Gives you Lee thumbs up* And no, you didn't make Ino sound like a brat. I liked how you made her upset. That way it's up to SUPER SHIKAMARU to save the day! XD Can't wait for the next chappie! Wonder what it's going to be about?? *SQUEE* I can't wait!!! ^_~

winxgirl21 on May 5, 2007, 8:07:30 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 19)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks so much for the review! I'm glad that you don't think i mad eIno look like a brat, and yes, it was up to Super Shikamaru to save the day! Well, The next chapter should be up by tuesday, so you'll find out then!

Gaarafangirl7789 on May 4, 2007, 11:25:10 PM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 19)
Gaarafangirl7789Awesome chapter!

winxgirl21 on May 4, 2007, 11:36:33 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 19)
winxgirl21Thanks!

AlleyCat17 on May 4, 2007, 11:18:37 PM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 19)
AlleyCat17great chapter.and i can't wait to see their big date.

winxgirl21 on May 4, 2007, 11:36:20 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 19)
winxgirl21thanks! It's going to be one or two chapters until the date, I'm unsure of how many, but I'm hoping to get them up soon....I'm making a deadline for myself now...Next chapter must be up by Tuesday....

kagome99 on April 30, 2007, 8:06:59 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 18)
kagome99That was so good!!!!!!!
Cant wait for the next one.
I luved the part when Sasuke and Shikamaru were placing bets.Good job!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on April 30, 2007, 8:08:47 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
winxgirl21thnx! I was hoping that people would like taht part ^-^

DragonGirl1136 on April 30, 2007, 5:41:07 AM

DragonGirl1136 on (Chapter: 3)
DragonGirl1136Coolness!

winxgirl21 on April 30, 2007, 6:25:35 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
winxgirl21thnx!

hirataitokyo on April 29, 2007, 8:58:43 AM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 18)
hirataitokyoZOMG great chapi! ha, guess what Im working on my chaper 12 for my story ~Coming~ it's been like forever, I'll tell you when I get it up, hopefully today or tomorrow ^^

winxgirl21 on April 29, 2007, 10:39:37 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
winxgirl21I can't wait!

hirataitokyo on April 29, 2007, 8:44:51 AM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 17)
hirataitokyowoooooooow!!!!!!!!! great chapi! loove it haha

winxgirl21 on April 29, 2007, 10:39:10 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
winxgirl21thnx! glad you loved it!

hirataitokyo on April 29, 2007, 8:39:10 AM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 16)
hirataitokyogreat chapi! hinata adn naru haha! ^^

winxgirl21 on April 29, 2007, 10:38:37 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
winxgirl21thnx! ^-^

AlleyCat17 on April 29, 2007, 6:40:50 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 18)
AlleyCat17great chappy and i can't wait to see them on a date.that would be even
better on tv maybe one day it will.until then.

winxgirl21 on April 29, 2007, 6:43:35 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
winxgirl21lolz, yea, I hope they do make an episode like that, that would be ko0l!

sasukeXsakuraforever on April 29, 2007, 12:29:56 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 18)
sasukeXsakuraforeverHehe! I wonder what Neji is going to do to poor little Naruto! lolz! If I were that protective around my cousin, I would smack Naruto around with a wet noodle! XD kidding kidding! Gr8 Chappie.. again... for the hundreth time in a row! *give you the Lee thumbs up* woot! I hope Sasuke isn't mad about Sakura post-poning the project. -_- Anywho! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE! WOOT! DOUBLE WOOT!

winxgirl21 on April 29, 2007, 3:37:01 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
winxgirl21lolz, yea, I think Neji is pretty mad right now, but he won't do anything unless Naruto hurts hinata in some way....Thanks so much! I havn't started the next chapter yet, but i'm hoping to start it as soon as I finish a Church history assignment I have to do...the fun...lolz , thanks again!

AlleyCat17 on April 24, 2007, 6:51:39 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 17)
AlleyCat17wow i loved that chapter and i really like that text thing.and i would
freak out to if someone i didn't know text me.

winxgirl21 on April 24, 2007, 7:46:21 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 17)
winxgirl21I'm glad I'm not the only one like that! and I'm glad you liked it!

kagome99 on April 23, 2007, 5:16:58 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 16)
kagome99AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!
That is so KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i cant wait for you to update again!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on April 23, 2007, 6:39:34 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
winxgirl21thanks! I'm trying to write the next chap[ter, but I have kind of a writer's block....I still sit down and type out a paragraph or two every night, but it doesn't really go any where....hopefully tonight I can get rid of it and finish the chapter!

kagome99 on April 24, 2007, 4:28:28 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

abitofdrama on April 15, 2007, 1:48:38 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 16)
abitofdramaWee *spins in spnny chair* Great Chappie. I laughed realy hard at the whole I've never read a book in my life thing. and gosh Naruto don't be so dumb she likes you get got good. If only it was that easy... Update soon I'll be reading

winxgirl21 on April 16, 2007, 9:00:41 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
winxgirl21lolz, yea, I figured that Naruto would be that kind of person, the kind taht never reads books...I'm working on the next chapter now ^-^

abitofdrama on April 15, 2007, 1:41:21 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 15)
abitofdramaAww! But what's Sakura and the gang gonna say when they see her in Naruto's clothes. Or what about Neji *runs to next chapter and trip between the lines*

winxgirl21 on April 16, 2007, 8:58:54 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
winxgirl21lolz, yes, what will they say!

abitofdrama on April 15, 2007, 1:34:04 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 14)
abitofdramawEE! Who cares about getting fat? It's hard dodging the half of easter candies alrighty. *cough cough* yeah even if it was a filler it was still good. I cracked up with the whole Kakashi thing. Loved it *runs to next chapter panting*

winxgirl21 on April 16, 2007, 8:58:21 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 14)
winxgirl21lolz, yea I know..>.< I have so much Easter candy left it's not even funny! But it's sooo good, who wouldn't eat it all?

abitofdrama on April 15, 2007, 1:26:18 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 13)
abitofdramawhoot! Ilove the diary entry thingy. I used to have one but then I forgot about it one day and then I sorta gave up after a while... yeah 8runs to next chapter again and take a drink of gatorade for thirst*

winxgirl21 on April 16, 2007, 8:56:22 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 13)
winxgirl21lolz that's how I am with my diary..I forget about it....but then I'll write an entry about once every two months...

abitofdrama on April 15, 2007, 1:16:20 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 12)
abitofdramaYes laughter rocks! Do not feel as though you are the only one we are all stupid- I mean unique. *runs to next chapter again*

winxgirl21 on April 16, 2007, 8:55:00 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 12)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks ^-^ ANd yes, laughter does rock!

abitofdrama on April 15, 2007, 1:02:14 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 11)
abitofdramaOkay yeah I totally have friends like that too! But ti's still fun. *runs to read new chapter*

winxgirl21 on April 16, 2007, 8:54:08 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 11)
winxgirl21yea, it is ^-^

AlleyCat17 on April 15, 2007, 10:52:44 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 16)
AlleyCat17great chappy.and poor naruto he can be so clues about hinata.(and other things;3)

winxgirl21 on April 16, 2007, 8:53:39 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
winxgirl21lolz, yea he is clueless!

sasukeXsakuraforever on April 15, 2007, 9:32:02 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 16)
sasukeXsakuraforever*squee* Hinata knows that Naruto likes her! ♥o♥ hehe, soooo cute! Man, they better hook up soon!^^ Gr8 story, can't wait ti'll the next chappie! Hehe, you better update soon or else I'll have to sit here waiting until you update!! ^_^

winxgirl21 on April 15, 2007, 10:43:49 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 16)
winxgirl21I'm glad that you like it taht much ^-^ I'm working on the next chapter now, but it might be a little while because tomorrow is the first day of school after break, and I'm sure that they'll be lots of homework assigned. But I'm working on it!

Gaarafangirl7789 on April 14, 2007, 5:33:41 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 15)
Gaarafangirl7789again! I quote McDonalds! I'm lovin' it!

winxgirl21 on April 14, 2007, 5:35:05 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks! ^-^

kagome99 on April 10, 2007, 4:49:19 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 15)
kagome99AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!How cute!!!!I cant wait for the next chappie!

winxgirl21 on April 10, 2007, 4:55:23 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
winxgirl21Thanks, I'm glad that you thought it was cute!

kagome99 on April 10, 2007, 5:46:18 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99I wonder if Hinata's dad will get mad.probaly.that's so like him.

winxgirl21 on April 10, 2007, 6:41:42 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21you'll just have to wait and find out! ^-^

kagome99 on April 10, 2007, 7:08:13 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99*acting like a baby*AHHHHHHH!yur right!i guess.cant wait.

winxgirl21 on April 10, 2007, 9:34:58 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz, I've started the next chapter, so you should see what happens soon...

kagome99 on April 17, 2007, 10:46:49 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!TACOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kagome99 on April 11, 2007, 4:31:01 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99YAY!
*making siren sounds*
WHEEEEEOOOOOOOOEEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOEEEEEEEOOOOOO!

winxgirl21 on April 11, 2007, 7:17:51 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz!!

hirataitokyo on April 9, 2007, 1:06:55 PM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 15)
hirataitokyoAWWW! OMG so cute! i just love NaruHina!!! ^^ great chappie, can't wait!

winxgirl21 on April 9, 2007, 10:53:44 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
winxgirl21thanks! I'm glad you liked the NaruHina part ^-^

AlleyCat17 on April 9, 2007, 9:28:38 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 14)
AlleyCat17i love it

winxgirl21 on April 9, 2007, 9:33:19 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 14)
winxgirl21thnx^-^

winxgirl21 on April 9, 2007, 9:31:33 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 14)
winxgirl21thnx ^-^

AlleyCat17 on April 9, 2007, 9:27:49 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 15)
AlleyCat17omg i love this chappie but i really loved the end of the chappie.x3

winxgirl21 on April 9, 2007, 9:30:04 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on April 9, 2007, 8:56:17 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 15)
sasukeXsakuraforeverAwww! ♥ You made Hinata sooo cute to Naruto! *Squee* I'm LOVING this story more and more each chapter! "Splash war!" hehe! GR8 chapter! Keep it up! ^^

winxgirl21 on April 9, 2007, 8:59:35 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 15)
winxgirl21Thanks! ^-^ I'm glad that you liked the splash war part, lolz

hirataitokyo on April 8, 2007, 10:08:29 AM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 14)
hirataitokyoOH yay!!!! man haha that's how i use to be, eating cookies and pizza everyday for lunch i could tell i got bigga T^T but my friend gets that like everyday!!! but she's like really skinny T^T damn her -curses under breath- well i'll stop my ranting now, Great chapter! can't wait til the next one!!!

winxgirl21 on April 8, 2007, 10:44:33 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 14)
winxgirl21Thanks! I'm going to start the next chapter tomorrow ^-^

kagome99 on April 6, 2007, 8:17:56 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 14)
kagome99still very awesome!keep up the good work!more soon!

winxgirl21 on April 6, 2007, 2:23:32 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 14)
winxgirl21Thanks, I'm hoping to update soon, but i havn't even started the next chapter yet ^-^' I havn't had time...

Gaarafangirl7789 on April 6, 2007, 7:36:04 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 14)
Gaarafangirl7789I LOVE IT!!! ^^

winxgirl21 on April 6, 2007, 2:21:28 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 14)
winxgirl21Thanks so much! ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on April 5, 2007, 1:14:43 PM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 14)
sasukeXsakuraforeverOMG still awsome!!!! Hehe, thats just like me at lunch, I say im going to get fat if I eat something, and the next thing I know, everyones grabbing my food! ^^ Luv it!! Once again, don't change a thing!

winxgirl21 on April 5, 2007, 10:28:00 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 14)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

hirataitokyo on April 3, 2007, 12:28:06 PM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 13)
hirataitokyoI like the diary entry, it was good, can't wati til teh next chappie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^0^ WHOOOOOOOOP!

winxgirl21 on April 4, 2007, 5:28:13 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 13)
winxgirl21thanks, I'm going to hopefully finish up the next chapter by tomorrow and put it up then ^-^

kagome99 on April 2, 2007, 5:35:04 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 13)
kagome99it was really good.plz rite more soon.
i liked the diary part.

winxgirl21 on April 2, 2007, 7:53:08 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 13)
winxgirl21thanks, I'm glad that you liked it, i think I'm going to do more diary parts, and I'm working on the next chapter now, but I'm not very far yet...

kagome99 on April 3, 2007, 5:59:54 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99k

Gaarafangirl7789 on April 1, 2007, 9:42:03 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 13)
Gaarafangirl7789bada ba ba ba I'm lovin' it! (lol)

winxgirl21 on April 2, 2007, 7:52:03 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 13)
winxgirl21lolz, my friend was singing that on the bus today! thanks!

XxKayxKayxX on April 1, 2007, 5:32:36 AM

XxKayxKayxX on (Chapter: index)
XxKayxKayxXtell me when u get more chapters up mmkay?

winxgirl21 on April 1, 2007, 7:17:21 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21ok, I will ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 31, 2007, 6:28:13 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 13)
sasukeXsakuraforeverWRITE MORE! I'M LOVING IT! (did I quote from Mcdonalds again?) Luv the Diary entry, don't change a thing! I wish I could have a thousand dollars right now... -_- oh, well. What would I do with that much money anyway.... Knowing me, I would spend it all on snacks and gumballs! haha! KEEP WRITING, DON'T STOP! Yay! Can't wait for the next chappie!!!!

winxgirl21 on April 1, 2007, 7:16:51 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 13)
winxgirl21lolz, I'm glad that you liked it! ^-^, I'm hoping to update soon, but I'm not sure when yet, since I only have about 200 words done for the next chapter...

kagome99 on March 29, 2007, 4:37:01 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 12)
kagome99YAY!U updated early!I luv it!keep up the good work!

winxgirl21 on March 29, 2007, 9:13:43 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 12)
winxgirl21thanks ^-^ I'm glad that you like it, adn don't worry, i will!

AlleyCat17 on March 28, 2007, 10:03:25 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 12)
AlleyCat17good chapter i can't wait to see wait to see what
happens next ^-^

winxgirl21 on March 28, 2007, 10:11:25 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 12)
winxgirl21thanks, I'm glad that you liked it ^-^

AlleyCat17 on March 28, 2007, 10:10:12 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 9)
AlleyCat17omg i loved this one

winxgirl21 on March 28, 2007, 10:11:05 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 9)
winxgirl21thanks ^-^

AlleyCat17 on March 28, 2007, 10:07:48 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 6)
AlleyCat17good chapter

winxgirl21 on March 28, 2007, 10:10:47 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 6)
winxgirl21thanks ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 28, 2007, 4:58:49 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 12)
sasukeXsakuraforeverSWEET-NESS!! I have been waiting for this moment...for a long....three..days....-_- What can I say, I'm egar! ^_^ CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!! KEEP UP THE GOOD..wait...no...KEEP UP THE AWSOME WORK!!!!

winxgirl21 on March 28, 2007, 6:34:58 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 12)
winxgirl21loz, thanks! I'm glad you look forward to it so much! ^-^ The next one should be up by Saturday ^-^

XxKayxKayxX on March 27, 2007, 9:51:13 AM

XxKayxKayxX on (Chapter: 12)
XxKayxKayxXmoree :o

winxgirl21 on March 27, 2007, 9:53:02 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 12)
winxgirl21lolz, I'm hoping to update again by Saturday ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 27, 2007, 10:49:22 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789YAYYYYYYYY!!!!!

winxgirl21 on March 27, 2007, 11:02:55 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 27, 2007, 9:41:22 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789Totaly loved your latest chapter!

winxgirl21 on March 27, 2007, 9:44:56 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

hirataitokyo on March 27, 2007, 9:21:35 AM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 12)
hirataitokyoOMG! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAAAY! whoop ^0^ nice saku and sasu whoop haha -.- Great chapter!

winxgirl21 on March 27, 2007, 9:23:31 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 12)
winxgirl21thanks, I'm glad that you liked it ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 8:03:00 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 11)
Gaarafangirl7789ME Wanna read more!! Can't wait 'til wedensday!!

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 8:05:45 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 11)
winxgirl21lolz, I can't wait to finish the chapter! I'm glad that you look forward to it! ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 8:08:16 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789I always look forward to reading, drawing, and writing no matter what...BUT THIS IS AWESOME SO I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THIS NEXT CHAPPIE!!! :D

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 8:09:36 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz,thanks, adnthat's the same with me! ^-^ I look forward to that stuff, too!

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 8:13:07 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789-runs around in circles- can I have a cookie?

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 8:15:05 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21sure! *gives cookie* here ya go!

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 8:20:42 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789Thankies! -nibbles cookie like a squirell- (I dun feel like checking my spelling right now)

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 8:21:38 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz, don't woory bout it, i ahte spelling >.<

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 8:23:28 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789And I made my piccy! -pokes avatar-

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 8:24:48 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21really? It's really good! I was wondering if you had made it or not

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 8:28:00 AM

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Gaarafangirl7789Yeah I used MS Paint! I submitted it a few min ago so I could have a piccy up in my Gallery! Check out my Gallery 2morro after skool or sumthin' -doesn't feel like talkin' like not on PC- YAY 4 CHAT-SPEAK! -is off topic-

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 8:30:03 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz, I definately will check out your gallery tomorrow after school ^-^ and, yea, i love chat speak!!

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 8:33:08 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789I wish that we could just mail each other instead of comments...

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 8:35:12 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21ok, that's fine by me, my e-mail address is Meghanlee5@aol.com

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 8:35:54 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789mines shelikgirl66@yahoo.com

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 8:37:15 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21ok ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 7:54:34 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 10)
Gaarafangirl7789I know who Sakura's crush is ;) It's really easy to tell when inner Sakura keeps saying he's a hot jerk...

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 8:01:58 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 10)
winxgirl21yea, lol, I figured it would be easy to tell. ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 8:04:09 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789lol note the word hot. That kinda sets off the crush signal (I just made that up :P)

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 8:06:29 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21yea, it does! lolz

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 7:45:06 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 8)
Gaarafangirl7789AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 7:46:57 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 8)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

14thXBladeXofXTwilight on March 25, 2007, 7:31:32 AM

14thXBladeXofXTwilight on (Chapter: index)
14thXBladeXofXTwilight Yay!! You updated!

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 7:33:09 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21yup, and I'm hoping to update again by wednesday at the latest. ^-^

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 7:01:15 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: 2)
Gaarafangirl7789I HAERT THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 7:16:18 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks! I'm glad you do!

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 7:37:52 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789I mean heart** lol typo's suck!

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 7:39:22 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lozl, don't worry, I knew what you meant, it happens to me all the time, and yea, typos do suck!

Gaarafangirl7789 on March 25, 2007, 7:45:26 AM

Gaarafangirl7789 on (Chapter: index)
Gaarafangirl7789lol

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 25, 2007, 3:12:36 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 11)
sasukeXsakuraforever*squee* more more MORE!! hehe, thats how my friend and I fight all the time! ^_^ Were hopeless I tell ya!

winxgirl21 on March 25, 2007, 5:56:24 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 11)
winxgirl21lolz, everyone at my school knows that their fights will be over by lunch, so noone pays any attention to their arguments, lolz >.< I'm working on the next chapter now, and the latest it will be up is Wednesday. ^-^

diva96 on March 24, 2007, 11:54:11 AM

diva96 on (Chapter: 11)
diva96funneh!!! cannot wait till the next chappie!!!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on March 24, 2007, 12:04:07 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 11)
winxgirl21I'm hoping to get it up by wednesday! ^-^

AlleyCat17 on March 24, 2007, 7:53:27 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 11)
AlleyCat17wow great chapter :3

winxgirl21 on March 24, 2007, 7:58:07 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 11)
winxgirl21thanks! ^-^

hirataitokyo on March 23, 2007, 11:42:40 AM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 11)
hirataitokyoNicE! Ha ino and sakura forgeting why they were fighting lol nice chapter ^0^ whoop, can't wait til the next one!

winxgirl21 on March 23, 2007, 11:45:10 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 11)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks ^-^ I'm hoping to get it up around wednesday ^-^

kagome99 on March 23, 2007, 7:57:59 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 11)
kagome99YAY!You updated.Can't wait for next chappie.
My friends and i aren't like.since were all used to being around drama,fights usually last days maybe even weeks.I just got out of a fight with my friend.We've been fighting for about 3 weeks.we're friends again!oh,i'm getting way off the subject.really good!

winxgirl21 on March 23, 2007, 8:00:12 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 11)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks! And that's only with two of my friends >.< When I'm mad at one of my friends, I won't even sit with them at lunch, I'll move to sit with other friends, and I won't talk to them for a couple of days, normally, but a couple of weeks is a long time o.o

diva96 on March 22, 2007, 8:38:54 AM

diva96 on (Chapter: 10)
diva96can't wait till da next chappy

winxgirl21 on March 22, 2007, 8:40:17 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 10)
winxgirl21I'm working on it now, and it should be up by tomorrow night! ^-^

kagome99 on March 23, 2007, 4:28:50 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99do you know what time tonight?

winxgirl21 on March 23, 2007, 5:45:56 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl218ish? I'm working on it now, but it's hard to guess....

kagome99 on March 23, 2007, 5:56:39 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99k.thnx!cant wait for the next chappie!

winxgirl21 on March 23, 2007, 6:01:42 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz, well, as soon as I'm done I'm going to post it ^-^

kagome99 on March 23, 2007, 7:26:54 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99k.
im bored. there arent any good stories to read but yours.i guess ill look for a story to read till you update.*surfs the web*

winxgirl21 on March 23, 2007, 7:32:08 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz, I just have to add the author's note, then I'm posting it up ^-^

kagome99 on March 20, 2007, 5:31:14 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 10)
kagome99YAY!I cant wait for the next chappie!you have to write more!

winxgirl21 on March 20, 2007, 5:56:41 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 10)
winxgirl21don't worry, I will! I'm hoping to update by Friday night or Saturday morning at the latest ^-^

blueeyesgirl3 on March 20, 2007, 3:19:07 AM

blueeyesgirl3 on (Chapter: 8)
blueeyesgirl3OMG i have a girl OC called suki! this is so cool! nice story!!^^

winxgirl21 on March 20, 2007, 5:55:54 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 8)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks! That's ko0l!

hirataitokyo on March 19, 2007, 1:19:37 PM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 10)
hirataitokyoOMG!!! Can't wait til the next one!!! ^^ YAY!

winxgirl21 on March 20, 2007, 5:52:50 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 10)
winxgirl21lolz, thanks! I'm hoping to get it up by Friday night, or Saturday morning at the latest ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 19, 2007, 8:21:56 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 10)
sasukeXsakuraforeverYAY! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! It's so kool how you put them IM'ing eachother! SO KOOL!! Can't wait ti'll the next one!! *SQUEE* SO CUTE!!!

winxgirl21 on March 19, 2007, 8:25:37 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 10)
winxgirl21lolz, I'm glad that u like it! ^-^ I'm hoping to get the next chapter up by friday night ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 19, 2007, 12:29:55 PM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: index)
sasukeXsakuraforeverFRIDAY!?!?!?!? I CAN'T WAIT THAT LONG!!! I'll die of excitement by then!!! -_-\ZZzzzz

winxgirl21 on March 20, 2007, 5:58:02 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21sorry, it's the soonest I can have it done, I can't start working on it until thursday night because of tests and projects >.<

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 19, 2007, 6:39:58 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: index)
sasukeXsakuraforeverHEY HEY HEY!! It's Monday!!! Where is the next chapter!? I wouldn't keep your audiance waiting.....C'MON I CAN'T WAIT!!........ZZzzzzzzzz......

winxgirl21 on March 19, 2007, 8:03:38 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz, I'm posting it now! ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 19, 2007, 8:04:59 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: index)
sasukeXsakuraforeverYAYZ!!!! *gets blanket and popcorn* another chappie!! SO EXCITING!!!!!

winxgirl21 on March 19, 2007, 8:14:49 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz, it's up! ^-^

WolfAngel on March 17, 2007, 2:15:30 AM

WolfAngel on (Chapter: index)
WolfAngelNice job! I love it!

winxgirl21 on March 17, 2007, 4:14:21 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21thanks, I'm glad you like it, and I'm glad that you took the time to comment! ^-^

diva96 on March 16, 2007, 1:11:37 PM

diva96 on (Chapter: 8)
diva96awesome!!!! i've been having the same problem wif homework...-_-"

winxgirl21 on March 16, 2007, 10:43:20 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 8)
winxgirl21yea, teachers really need to lighten up the load that they give us...>.<

diva96 on March 16, 2007, 1:18:49 PM

diva96 on (Chapter: 9)
diva96awesome! I CANNOT WAIT TILL THE NINTH CHAPPIE!!!!*shakes you*

winxgirl21 on March 16, 2007, 10:40:18 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 9)
winxgirl21it should be up by monday! ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 15, 2007, 11:47:00 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 9)
sasukeXsakuraforever*SQUEE* YAY, another chappie is in!! THAT WAS SOOO CUTE! Luv it when you got all the couples sitting next to eachother! ^_^ ....UH? That never happens at my school...why...OMG did that happen to you!?!?!?....geez....OK MAKE ANOTHER MAKE ANOTHER!!!! CAN'T WAIT!!! WHEN IS IT GOING TO BE DONE!?!?!?!

winxgirl21 on March 16, 2007, 10:25:31 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 9)
winxgirl21Actually, taht didn't ahppen to me, i got lucky, but it did happen to some of my friends. It wasn't fun for them to walk around school wearing other classes colors.

abitofdrama on March 15, 2007, 1:19:01 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 9)
abitofdramaYEE!! *spins aroung in spinny chair* So cool! Can't wait for the next one, also that never happens at my school but at my sister I think it did. Oh well, if it happened to you remember it only one day. Can't wait for update.

winxgirl21 on March 16, 2007, 10:20:38 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 9)
winxgirl21Actually, i was one of the luckier kids who ddin't get tagged, but some of my friedns did. It weasn't very fun for them, because they had to walk around all day wearing other classes colors...I'm hoping to update by monday ^-^

hirataitokyo on March 15, 2007, 12:18:44 PM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 9)
hirataitokyoOMG YES! another chapter! I can't WAIT til more!!! ^-^ this is turning out as such a good story! great job!

winxgirl21 on March 16, 2007, 10:14:04 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 9)
winxgirl21lol, the next chapter should be up by monday, I'm actually working on it now. ^-^

kagome99 on March 14, 2007, 5:37:52 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 8)
kagome99this is SOOOOOOOOO good!you have to keep writing!*favs*
by the way I have a story called "Konoha High" too. but its different.just wanted to let you know if youre interested at all.please comment if you happen to read it.and maybe give me some tips?thnx for reading it if you do!

winxgirl21 on March 14, 2007, 6:15:19 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 8)
winxgirl21I'm glad you like it, and as soon as I get some free time, I'll definately check out your story and leave some comments! ^-^

hirataitokyo on March 12, 2007, 1:10:16 PM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: index)
hirataitokyoOMG!!! ^-^ I'm so faving this! XD squweee! Great job so far, i really like it!!!

winxgirl21 on March 13, 2007, 6:07:06 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21I'm glad that you like it! ^-^ and I hould be getting the next chapter up on thursday, just to let you know! ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 12, 2007, 6:53:12 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 8)
sasukeXsakuraforeverOMG what happens next!?!?!? I wanna know what happens when Sakura goes to Sasukes house!?!? **Squee** I"m so excited..... WRITE MORE.....please!

winxgirl21 on March 12, 2007, 6:56:29 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 8)
winxgirl21I'm writing the next chapter now, it should be up son, but it'll be like 2 chapters before he goes to her house....>.<

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 12, 2007, 7:00:54 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: index)
sasukeXsakuraforeveryay! I can't wait! ..........is it done yet?? .... How about now? ...... Now??? ....OMG how about now???...... is it done now? .......... HEY GUESS WHAT? ........Is it done yet? .........EEEK how about now ....... *huddles in a corner and waits for it to be done*

winxgirl21 on March 12, 2007, 7:03:58 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz, I'm typing it...>.< it might take a little bit of time, because I have like three projects to work on >.<

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 12, 2007, 7:05:24 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: index)
sasukeXsakuraforeverLIKE LIKE LIKE HOW LONG!?!?! An hour, a day, a WEEK?!?! *squee* I can't wait...ok I won't bug you.. JUST KEEP WORKING ON IT!

winxgirl21 on March 12, 2007, 7:08:47 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21like, maybe wednesday, or thursday, at the latest. ^-^

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 12, 2007, 7:10:31 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: index)
sasukeXsakuraforeverYAY! *puts date on calender and sets timer on phone*

winxgirl21 on March 12, 2007, 7:11:37 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz

shadowwolf44449 on March 11, 2007, 4:05:43 AM

shadowwolf44449 on (Chapter: 4)
shadowwolf44449GIRLY HAIR YAYNESS!!!!!!!

winxgirl21 on March 11, 2007, 7:43:38 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
winxgirl21yea XD

AlleyCat17 on March 11, 2007, 3:40:01 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 8)
AlleyCat17that was a great chapter.i loved it.

winxgirl21 on March 11, 2007, 7:43:17 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 8)
winxgirl21I'm glad you did! ^-^

shadowwolf44449 on March 11, 2007, 4:22:22 AM

shadowwolf44449 on (Chapter: 8)
shadowwolf44449could i borrow your idea....? plz.... =/
*puppydogeyes*

winxgirl21 on March 11, 2007, 7:42:56 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 8)
winxgirl21which idea? the story idea, or the girly hair one?

abitofdrama on March 8, 2007, 12:27:34 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 7)
abitofdramaCool! Pairing off everybody huh huh? *nudge nudge* My old school had a simalair system to that, but only simalair. I'll be waiting for the next chapie.

winxgirl21 on March 9, 2007, 10:42:18 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 7)
winxgirl21yea, lolz. And the next chapter should be up today or tomorrow, I'm working on it now.

crazicat06 on March 6, 2007, 10:34:19 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Are you done with the next chapter yet?

winxgirl21 on March 7, 2007, 6:53:59 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21not yet, but I'm working on it, I'll let you know when i update!

crazicat06 on March 7, 2007, 6:54:46 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06*grins* Yay!

winxgirl21 on March 7, 2007, 7:06:48 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lolz

crazicat06 on March 7, 2007, 7:24:49 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06^.^

AlleyCat17 on March 6, 2007, 4:22:31 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 7)
AlleyCat17wow Awesome i can't wait for the next chappy.

winxgirl21 on March 6, 2007, 7:29:16 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 7)
winxgirl21I'm workng on it now ^-^

crazicat06 on March 5, 2007, 11:37:00 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 7)
crazicat06Awsome! I luv this story! Write more please!

winxgirl21 on March 6, 2007, 7:28:57 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 7)
winxgirl21I'm glad that you like it, adn i'm currently working on the next chapter! ^-^

crazicat06 on March 6, 2007, 7:44:45 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06wOot!

theluverofanime on March 4, 2007, 12:23:45 AM

theluverofanime on (Chapter: 6)
theluverofanimei love this story so far. i also love naurto x hinata ^_^

winxgirl21 on March 4, 2007, 2:37:02 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 6)
winxgirl21I'm glad you like it! I love that pairing, too, it's my second favorite! ^-^

diva96 on March 3, 2007, 7:48:16 AM

diva96 on (Chapter: 6)
diva96awesome! the basketball game didn't sound weird.
plz write soon! ~da Divah

winxgirl21 on March 3, 2007, 7:59:41 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 6)
winxgirl21thanks, I'm glad that you think it didn't sound weird...I had trouble writing that part...and i'm working on the next chapter right now ^-^

diva96 on March 2, 2007, 9:05:01 AM

diva96 on (Chapter: 1)
diva96AWESOME!!!! VERY descriptive! I really want to read this story now! ~~~~*favez*~~~~

winxgirl21 on March 2, 2007, 9:06:05 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
winxgirl21lol, thanks! I'm glad you like it!

14thXBladeXofXTwilight on February 26, 2007, 5:38:24 AM

14thXBladeXofXTwilight on (Chapter: 5)
14thXBladeXofXTwilightNice job! Hope you get more up soon. ^-^
 
((Anyone else notice that the squares went away?))

winxgirl21 on February 26, 2007, 5:53:02 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 5)
winxgirl21I'm hoping to get more up by Friday at the latest, and I found out that choosing the type into the site ussing a BB code formating ( I think that's what it is...)lets you get rid of the squares...i've just been copying and pasting the chapters into that, and the squares are gone!

AlleyCat17 on February 26, 2007, 5:25:30 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 5)
AlleyCat17nice chapter and i hope something go happens soon in it
and i know what you mane when you have alot of projects,
homework plus i have two test to study for this week too and
alot of other stof to do yet.so i wont be on the computer much
or for long.

winxgirl21 on February 26, 2007, 5:49:58 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 5)
winxgirl21I'm hoping to have something good happen in it soon...in either the next chapter, or the one after that....^-^ one of the pairings is going to show up soon....

abitofdrama on February 25, 2007, 11:49:27 AM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 5)
abitofdramakeep on writing. you do good :D

winxgirl21 on February 26, 2007, 5:47:34 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 5)
winxgirl21thanks so uhc for the comment! ^-^

abitofdrama on February 26, 2007, 10:52:37 AM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: index)
abitofdramait's on my fav *gives aporcot for awsomeness*

winxgirl21 on February 27, 2007, 5:37:04 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21lol, yum!!

abitofdrama on February 28, 2007, 1:17:21 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: index)
abitofdrama*gives fruit basket then realizes wallet is out of money*
Also I'm gonna post a new story up (just to let you know) should be up around this weekend. It'll be called "Now For Your Featured Presentation"

winxgirl21 on March 1, 2007, 4:31:14 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21ok! I'll definately check it out! And thanks, yummy fruit! *gives some money* Now you have more in your wallet! lolz

abitofdrama on March 4, 2007, 10:49:05 AM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: index)
abitofdramaIt is up now just to let you know!

winxgirl21 on March 4, 2007, 11:07:48 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21ok, I'll check it out! ^-^

abitofdrama on March 4, 2007, 1:30:36 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: index)
abitofdramathankies and when are you gnna update (doesn't matter when as long as your not giving up on your story.)

winxgirl21 on March 4, 2007, 9:03:18 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
winxgirl21soon, I'm writing the next chapter now! ^-^

digimonlover06 on February 25, 2007, 9:34:01 AM

digimonlover06 on (Chapter: 5)
digimonlover06good job write more plz

winxgirl21 on February 26, 2007, 5:46:55 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 5)
winxgirl21Thanks! ^-^ I'm hoping to get the next chapter up by Friday at the latest

AlleyCat17 on February 19, 2007, 3:27:11 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 4)
AlleyCat17great chapter.and i don't think sakura seems really childish for holding
a grudge besides if that happen to me i would hold a grudge.

winxgirl21 on February 19, 2007, 6:16:29 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
winxgirl21lol, thanks, I'm glad you think that! ^-^ I probably would too...

AlleyCat17 on February 15, 2007, 9:09:15 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 3)
AlleyCat17wow i loved this chapter(i wonder who the guys are wink ;) ).and i cant
wait for the next chapter :)

winxgirl21 on February 15, 2007, 9:37:42 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
winxgirl21ooo and *gives cookie* ^-^

winxgirl21 on February 15, 2007, 9:36:25 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
winxgirl21yea, lol, i wonder...Oh wait! I know! And they're revealed in the next chapter! i'm hoping to get it up by Sunday! ^-^ I'm glad you liked it!

14thXBladeXofXTwilight on February 10, 2007, 8:00:08 AM

14thXBladeXofXTwilight on (Chapter: 2)
14thXBladeXofXTwilightYOU UPDATED!!! (ultimate happy dance) I really liked this chapter!! I can't wait till they're in school! One thing though..... Is it a boys and girls school or just a school for girls? Cuz if it's boys&girls i can't wait to see Naruto in a uniform!! XD

winxgirl21 on February 10, 2007, 10:35:07 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
winxgirl21It's a boys and girls school! And, I'm looking forward to writing that part! XD I'm glad that you like this picture!!

AlleyCat17 on February 10, 2007, 6:45:10 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 2)
AlleyCat17i liked this chapter and i liked there uniforms and there jewelry too.i
hope the next chapter is going to be great.

winxgirl21 on February 10, 2007, 7:41:39 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
winxgirl21thanks, I'm glad you liked all that stuff! I'm working on the next chapter now, but I'm not sure when it'll be done, hopefully soon ^-^

winxgirl21 on February 9, 2007, 11:28:08 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
winxgirl21uggh! I still can't get rid of the boxes!! Does anyone know how to get ris of them??

14thXBladeXofXTwilight on February 7, 2007, 8:23:18 PM

14thXBladeXofXTwilight on (Chapter: 1)
14thXBladeXofXTwilightI really like the fic! Hope you add more soon. XD

winxgirl21 on February 8, 2007, 7:11:07 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
winxgirl21I'm glad you like it! ^-^

AlleyCat17 on February 7, 2007, 9:23:07 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 1)
AlleyCat17wow I'm likening it so far i hope there will be more chapters in it.

winxgirl21 on February 7, 2007, 9:28:30 AM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
winxgirl21I'm glad you like it! ^-^

winxgirl21 on February 6, 2007, 11:39:03 PM

winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
winxgirl21ok, what's with the squares instead of quotatin marks and apostrophes? >.< it won't let me fix them....