Racing a Cyclone

Chapter 1 - Racing a Cyclone
Submitted: January 16, 2005 • Updated: January 16, 2005
Word count: 634 • Size: 3k • Comments: 10 • views: 241

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Grey_Wolf on December 19, 2005, 5:25:31 AM

Grey_Wolf on December 19, 2005, 5:25:31 AM (Chapter: 1)

Grey: thats a really gay comment superdude, the story tells why she hates jak... geesh...dumbass...

wolfy on May 13, 2005, 6:59:24 AM

wolfy on May 13, 2005, 6:59:24 AM (Chapter: 1)

if you had half a brain you'd know

superdude5000 on May 11, 2005, 12:46:12 PM

superdude5000 on May 11, 2005, 12:46:12 PM (Chapter: 1)

if u hate jak why did u put him in half of your pics

weewoo on January 20, 2005, 8:23:41 AM

weewoo on January 20, 2005, 8:23:41 AM (Chapter: 1)

:B

wolfy on January 18, 2005, 6:12:58 AM

wolfy on January 18, 2005, 6:12:58 AM (Chapter: 1)

the ship? the chaos ships of course

Deadly_Lycan on January 16, 2005, 11:59:55 AM

Deadly_Lycan on January 16, 2005, 11:59:55 AM (Chapter: 1)

YAAAAAAAAAAAYYY!! I LOVE IT!! awww *snuggles Jak* EEP! o0o u have 2 do MORE and SOON! *starts foaming at the mouth* o 1 thing, wut was the ship? sorry i get confused easily

wolfy on January 16, 2005, 5:08:25 AM

wolfy on January 16, 2005, 5:08:25 AM (Chapter: 1)

kk ^^

Deadly_Lycan on January 16, 2005, 5:02:23 AM

Deadly_Lycan on January 16, 2005, 5:02:23 AM (Chapter: 1)

YAY IT WORKS!!! sorry havent read it yet cuz im on the run, i printed it out. u can count ill comment it later

wolfy on January 16, 2005, 4:57:28 AM

wolfy on January 16, 2005, 4:57:28 AM (Chapter: 1)

NUUUU I SPELT SPARGUS WRONG!!!!!!!!

wolfy on January 16, 2005, 4:55:50 AM

wolfy on January 16, 2005, 4:55:50 AM (Chapter: 1)

YEY IT WORKS!!