Chapter 2 - My Black Stallion
Submitted January 10, 2005 Updated January 11, 2005 Status Incomplete | These are poems about my feelings so don't laugh at them or i'll...KILL YOU!
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Chapter 2 - My Black Stallion
Chapter 2 - My Black Stallion
I don’treally own a horse. So I just hope you like it. Oh this is for ainemangaloveras a thank you for the picture.[/i][/b]
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His coat isas black as night[/i][/b]
His mane isas cold as getting frost bite[/i][/b]
His eyesshine like the north star[/i][/b]
But fromaffar, he’s still in my heart [/i][/b]
Althoughwe’re apart, I still remember the day I bought him[/i][/b]
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When I wouldride him constantly[/i][/b]
His coat wasas soft as silk [/i][/b]
And when Ifed him milk, he kissed me[/i][/b]
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Ever sincewe’ve been apart I’ve dreamed about riding him once more.[/i][/b]
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His coat isas black as night[/i][/b]
His mane isas cold as getting frost bite[/i][/b]
His eyesshine like the north star[/i][/b]
But fromaffar, he’s still in my heart [/i][/b]
Althoughwe’re apart, I still remember the day I bought him[/i][/b]
[/i][/b]
When I wouldride him constantly[/i][/b]
His coat wasas soft as silk [/i][/b]
And when Ifed him milk, he kissed me[/i][/b]
[/i][/b]
Ever sincewe’ve been apart I’ve dreamed about riding him once more.[/i][/b]
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Vampire_Maiden on April 6, 2005, 11:25:03 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwBlack_Breeze on April 4, 2005, 11:06:30 AM
Black_Breeze on
Good, nice way to show the relationship between a horse and its owner. Yet again, I think that there would have been better use of words in the story, but it's nice. A little editing here and there, and it will be perfect. ^_^DemonTheifQueen on April 4, 2005, 6:25:35 AM
THis is REALY NICE! I WUV HORSIES! ^-^pwees write more! ^-^
majinvegetamarik on February 14, 2005, 7:00:46 AM
you are a very good poet! you should become professinal!^^ never stop writing, your to good to stop! +favs!^^Sexy_Bishi_Queen on January 16, 2005, 12:10:35 AM
LoVELY DISCRIPTION OF HORSE! I ACCTUALLY HATE HORSES AND THEY TASTE NICE WHEN YOU GO TO FRANCE CAUSE THEY DON'T EAT STEAK THEY EAT HORSE! NICE POEM ANYWAYS!
SailorMars on January 15, 2005, 12:14:52 AM
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I like the first one a lot more...your a good poet ^-^AnimeMangaLover on January 14, 2005, 8:58:13 AM
It's good! I love horses! ^^ And I got a perfect image of the horse because of the way you described him. Great poem! ^^xomarikzsweetzox on January 14, 2005, 8:54:56 AM
animemangalover if you are reading this you must comment it and soory if your user name is spelled wrongVampire-Queen-Gothika on January 11, 2005, 7:46:42 AM
i like the 1st 1 more, but this is good too. AnimeMangaLover should read this, she loves horses ^^