Poems
Submitted January 10, 2005 Updated January 11, 2005 Status Incomplete | These are poems about my feelings so don't laugh at them or i'll...KILL YOU!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - A girl Alone
Submitted: January 10, 2005 • Updated: January 10, 2005
Word count: 85 • Size: <1k • Comments: 22 • views: 499
Chapter 2 - My Black Stallion
Submitted: January 11, 2005 • Updated: January 11, 2005
Word count: 119 • Size: <1k • Comments: 19 • views: 455
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NekoHellAngel on September 8, 2005, 4:48:47 AM
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Hope you didn't feel too lonely when you wrote this. Good poem nonetheless though! ^^NekoHellAngel on September 8, 2005, 4:48:17 AM
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Hope you didn't feel too lonely when you wrote this. Good poem nonetheless though! ^^Yamikitten4390 on August 31, 2005, 11:29:57 PM
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another good poem u've written :DYamikitten4390 on August 31, 2005, 11:28:55 PM
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thats good i always find it hard to think up poems but u've done it quite good.XxInkfingersxXxRavenbloodxX on August 21, 2005, 10:14:49 PM
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oooooooooooo a pwetty horse!!!!! they rock!Redneck_Anime_Gurl on July 28, 2005, 10:54:10 PM
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Same I said about the first poem,but i agree with Vampire-Queen-Gothika.Redneck_Anime_Gurl on July 28, 2005, 10:51:36 PM
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I know how you feel.And your poetry is 100 times better than mine.WingedDragonOfRa on July 27, 2005, 9:30:44 PM
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not badi almost cryed
i'm going to add it to my favourites
bone_dancer on July 27, 2005, 3:25:56 AM
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i love this poem. great description. continue writing it would be great to see more.Vampire_King_Gothika on July 22, 2005, 5:51:00 AM
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Nice job! Keep it up.Vampire_King_Gothika on July 22, 2005, 5:49:49 AM
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Heh, not bad! I liked it.Bakura_Lover on July 22, 2005, 3:52:55 AM
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Hey good one ^^ not much to say annymoreBakura_Lover on July 22, 2005, 3:51:49 AM
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awww i know the feeling but i also just like drama and sad stuf keep it up girl ^^Kirara on July 21, 2005, 5:46:10 PM
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wat a lovely horsey....this is sooo perfect...yea,i agree with you guys,i think the 1st one is a lot better! ^o^Kirara on July 21, 2005, 5:43:22 PM
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awwwww...the loneliness...this is great,great job!Baby_Girl9168 on July 6, 2005, 7:08:13 AM
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oh my goodness thats so cute!!!:::trys to hold back tears!:::Baby_Girl9168 on July 6, 2005, 7:06:00 AM
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i like it a lot do more do moreMidnight_Chaos on April 11, 2005, 10:34:43 PM
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I liked this one too!!! Perfect description of the horse and the order of words. It's a really nice peice of writing. Well done!!! ^-^Midnight_Chaos on April 11, 2005, 10:31:28 PM
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I love this!!! A lot of talent you've got there. I didn't laugh, so don't worry. I thought it was quite sad to be honest, but it was a nice poem. Being lonely is one of the worst things in this world...Wild-Card-KKC on April 8, 2005, 9:01:07 AM
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Oooh I like, this is good very good!!!Wild-Card-KKC on April 8, 2005, 8:59:15 AM
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it's beautiful.Vampire_Maiden on April 6, 2005, 11:25:03 AM
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwVampire_Maiden on April 6, 2005, 11:23:54 AM
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r we twins cuz im also always ignoredBlack_Breeze on April 4, 2005, 11:06:30 AM
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Good, nice way to show the relationship between a horse and its owner. Yet again, I think that there would have been better use of words in the story, but it's nice. A little editing here and there, and it will be perfect. ^_^Black_Breeze on April 4, 2005, 10:56:55 AM
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Hmm, how interesting. This reminds me of those 55 fiction stories, which has to get the plot and everything down in 55 words. It's nice, and the ending's bittersweet. Try and extend your choice of words a bit and then the poem will be perfect.Anime_Dude_0 on April 4, 2005, 6:35:28 AM
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oh yeah....dont kill me.Anime_Dude_0 on April 4, 2005, 6:33:45 AM
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AHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHa...no im just joking its good real good, i should've asked you to help me w/ my poetry project.DemonTheifQueen on April 4, 2005, 6:25:35 AM
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THis is REALY NICE! I WUV HORSIES! ^-^pwees write more! ^-^
DemonTheifQueen on April 4, 2005, 6:22:11 AM
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THis is nice!You're a good poet and you didn't know but you're feet show it cause they're long fellows!
sorry....my english teacher said that to me a few days ago!
keep it up!
YamiTenshi on March 26, 2005, 10:18:35 AM
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*sniff* SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!keirei on March 21, 2005, 1:45:02 AM
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is this a poem? eh...maybe more stanzas please? i don't understand. it's like a story with no climax...sort of boring. (but i am not laughing.)majinvegetamarik on February 14, 2005, 7:00:46 AM
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you are a very good poet! you should become professinal!^^ never stop writing, your to good to stop! +favs!^^majinvegetamarik on February 14, 2005, 6:59:36 AM
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this is a very good poem! it really expresses a lot. awesome job!^^+favs!Sexy_Bishi_Queen on January 16, 2005, 12:10:35 AM
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LoVELY DISCRIPTION OF HORSE! I ACCTUALLY HATE HORSES AND THEY TASTE NICE WHEN YOU GO TO FRANCE CAUSE THEY DON'T EAT STEAK THEY EAT HORSE! NICE POEM ANYWAYS!
Sexy_Bishi_Queen on January 15, 2005, 11:59:35 PM
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You do have a really nice way of doing things here. Your language is very puntual and have you read any of my stuff? If not, please do!
SailorMars on January 15, 2005, 12:14:52 AM
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I like the first one a lot more...your a good poet ^-^AnimeMangaLover on January 14, 2005, 8:58:13 AM
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It's good! I love horses! ^^ And I got a perfect image of the horse because of the way you described him. Great poem! ^^xomarikzsweetzox on January 14, 2005, 8:54:56 AM
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animemangalover if you are reading this you must comment it and soory if your user name is spelled wrongVampire-Queen-Gothika on January 11, 2005, 7:46:42 AM
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i like the 1st 1 more, but this is good too. AnimeMangaLover should read this, she loves horses ^^Vampire-Queen-Gothika on January 11, 2005, 7:44:36 AM
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hey, that's pretty good ^^ I know how ya feel, sometimes I feel really alone...xomarikzsweetzox on January 11, 2005, 4:56:10 AM
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if you are reading this story you have to comment it