Chapter 1 - A girl Alone
Submitted January 10, 2005 Updated January 11, 2005 Status Incomplete | These are poems about my feelings so don't laugh at them or i'll...KILL YOU!
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Chapter 1 - A girl Alone
Chapter 1 - A girl Alone
Thispoem was made because I always feel alone.
A girl who once lived in akingdom strong and bold.
The girl looked at the wallsof her kingdom, they were weak and old.
She was scared so she criedher heart out for help, but no one heard the girl’s cry.
She came to a room with theones she loved, but they didn’t notice the girl’s pretty face at all. As if shewere a ghost.
So she blew her last kiss tothem and walked quietly away.
A girl who once lived in akingdom strong and bold.
The girl looked at the wallsof her kingdom, they were weak and old.
She was scared so she criedher heart out for help, but no one heard the girl’s cry.
She came to a room with theones she loved, but they didn’t notice the girl’s pretty face at all. As if shewere a ghost.
So she blew her last kiss tothem and walked quietly away.
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NekoHellAngel on September 8, 2005, 4:48:47 AM
Hope you didn't feel too lonely when you wrote this. Good poem nonetheless though! ^^NekoHellAngel on September 8, 2005, 4:48:17 AM
Hope you didn't feel too lonely when you wrote this. Good poem nonetheless though! ^^Yamikitten4390 on August 31, 2005, 11:28:55 PM
thats good i always find it hard to think up poems but u've done it quite good.Redneck_Anime_Gurl on July 28, 2005, 10:51:36 PM
I know how you feel.And your poetry is 100 times better than mine.WingedDragonOfRa on July 27, 2005, 9:30:44 PM
not badi almost cryed
i'm going to add it to my favourites
Vampire_King_Gothika on July 22, 2005, 5:49:49 AM
Heh, not bad! I liked it.Bakura_Lover on July 22, 2005, 3:51:49 AM
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awww i know the feeling but i also just like drama and sad stuf keep it up girl ^^Kirara on July 21, 2005, 5:43:22 PM
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awwwww...the loneliness...this is great,great job!Baby_Girl9168 on July 6, 2005, 7:06:00 AM
i like it a lot do more do moreMidnight_Chaos on April 11, 2005, 10:31:28 PM
I love this!!! A lot of talent you've got there. I didn't laugh, so don't worry. I thought it was quite sad to be honest, but it was a nice poem. Being lonely is one of the worst things in this world...