Chapter 1 - A girl Alone
Submitted January 10, 2005 Updated January 11, 2005 Status Incomplete | These are poems about my feelings so don't laugh at them or i'll...KILL YOU!
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Chapter 1 - A girl Alone
Chapter 1 - A girl Alone
Thispoem was made because I always feel alone.
A girl who once lived in akingdom strong and bold.
The girl looked at the wallsof her kingdom, they were weak and old.
She was scared so she criedher heart out for help, but no one heard the girl’s cry.
She came to a room with theones she loved, but they didn’t notice the girl’s pretty face at all. As if shewere a ghost.
So she blew her last kiss tothem and walked quietly away.
A girl who once lived in akingdom strong and bold.
The girl looked at the wallsof her kingdom, they were weak and old.
She was scared so she criedher heart out for help, but no one heard the girl’s cry.
She came to a room with theones she loved, but they didn’t notice the girl’s pretty face at all. As if shewere a ghost.
So she blew her last kiss tothem and walked quietly away.
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Wild-Card-KKC on April 8, 2005, 8:59:15 AM
it's beautiful.Vampire_Maiden on April 6, 2005, 11:23:54 AM
r we twins cuz im also always ignoredBlack_Breeze on April 4, 2005, 10:56:55 AM
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Hmm, how interesting. This reminds me of those 55 fiction stories, which has to get the plot and everything down in 55 words. It's nice, and the ending's bittersweet. Try and extend your choice of words a bit and then the poem will be perfect.Anime_Dude_0 on April 4, 2005, 6:35:28 AM
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oh yeah....dont kill me.Anime_Dude_0 on April 4, 2005, 6:33:45 AM
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AHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHa...no im just joking its good real good, i should've asked you to help me w/ my poetry project.DemonTheifQueen on April 4, 2005, 6:22:11 AM
THis is nice!You're a good poet and you didn't know but you're feet show it cause they're long fellows!
sorry....my english teacher said that to me a few days ago!
keep it up!
YamiTenshi on March 26, 2005, 10:18:35 AM
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*sniff* SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!keirei on March 21, 2005, 1:45:02 AM
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is this a poem? eh...maybe more stanzas please? i don't understand. it's like a story with no climax...sort of boring. (but i am not laughing.)majinvegetamarik on February 14, 2005, 6:59:36 AM
this is a very good poem! it really expresses a lot. awesome job!^^+favs!Sexy_Bishi_Queen on January 15, 2005, 11:59:35 PM
You do have a really nice way of doing things here. Your language is very puntual and have you read any of my stuff? If not, please do!