Kaley??
Submitted May 19, 2009 Updated June 15, 2009 Status Incomplete | I had an urge to write something like this...so i did lol enjoy.xx it's about twins (boy and girl). they went into what they thought was their garden when they were 13. 6 years later, they were still stuck in it.
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Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapter 0 - Prologue
Submitted: May 19, 2009 • Updated: May 19, 2009
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Chapter 1 - Chapter One
Submitted: May 19, 2009 • Updated: May 19, 2009
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Chapter 2 - Chapter Two
Submitted: May 19, 2009 • Updated: May 19, 2009
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Chapter 3 - Chapter Three
Submitted: May 20, 2009 • Updated: May 20, 2009
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Chapter 4 - Chapter Four
Submitted: May 20, 2009 • Updated: May 20, 2009
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Chapter 5 - Chapter Five
Submitted: May 21, 2009 • Updated: May 21, 2009
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Chapter 6 - Chapter Six
Submitted: May 21, 2009 • Updated: May 21, 2009
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Chapter 7 - Chapter Seven
Submitted: May 21, 2009 • Updated: May 22, 2009
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Chapter 8 - Chapter Eight
Submitted: May 22, 2009 • Updated: May 22, 2009
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Chapter 9 - Chapter Nine
Submitted: May 31, 2009 • Updated: May 31, 2009
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Chapter 10 - Chapter Ten
Submitted: May 31, 2009 • Updated: May 31, 2009
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Chapter 11 - Chapter Eleven
Submitted: June 2, 2009 • Updated: June 2, 2009
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Chapter 12 - Chapter Twelve
Submitted: June 15, 2009 • Updated: June 15, 2009
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liggybird on June 27, 2009, 9:58:27 PM
xxnataxx on June 27, 2009, 10:08:56 PM
liggybird on June 28, 2009, 4:10:55 AM
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It was very nice of you to jog my memory today. I've really enjoyed bringing myself up to date with Kaley's and Jason's adventures. I'm a bit of a romantic, so I'm interested in the 'who's fancying who' aspects of the story as well as the rest of the drama.
I just read two chapters of 'Tia??' and love it so far btw. Keep up the good work. This is some of the best writing I've seen. It's hard to believe you're only fourteen.
Thanks for sharing these stories.
xxnataxx on June 28, 2009, 5:07:17 AM
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thanks for all the compliments (: give me a little critism from time to time, so that my head doesnt get too big lol xx
liggybird on June 28, 2009, 10:16:02 AM
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Your boarding school sounds cool. Sounds like it's probably a good environment for literary creativity. Have a fabulous summer vacation soon.
xxnataxx on June 28, 2009, 7:34:59 PM
Kaley on June 5, 2009, 6:30:36 AM
xxnataxx on June 5, 2009, 8:18:11 PM
blackcatcurse on June 2, 2009, 7:57:35 AM
xxnataxx on June 2, 2009, 6:11:15 PM
xxnataxx on June 2, 2009, 2:47:41 AM
Kaley on June 1, 2009, 6:59:02 AM
xxnataxx on June 1, 2009, 8:06:00 PM
Konohasdarkshadow on May 21, 2009, 2:15:23 PM
xxnataxx on May 21, 2009, 6:05:20 PM
xxnataxx on May 21, 2009, 6:03:25 PM
liggybird on May 21, 2009, 8:35:20 AM
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Wolves, clandestine journeys (between various tents and elsewhere), rides on ligers, scrolls, surrogate and biological mothering and so on.
I also find it cool how you use plenty of little interpersonal dramas (like Alex accusing Jason of being lazy at the start of this chapter) to bring out your characters' natures.
My understanding of the story's far from perfect - but it's a highly enjoyable ride all the same.