Aaedien

Dearest love,

My name is Grace and my email address is( gracebeker@yahoo.com) i saw your profile in this site and become interested in you. I am a loving lady who is seeking for my true love, I want to end my loneliness, and my mind tells me that you are the kind of person i want in my life. I am very romantic, caring, honest and faithful. True love is hidden in every heart and it continue for life time. For more details about me, kindly reply me AT( gracebeker@yahoo.com) i'm waiting earnestly for your reply,then i will give you my picture.
I CHERISH YOU
GRACE.

Hello
my name is Miss Vivian sanka,after viewing your profile in this site,then i feel like dropping this massage to you, please i will like to know more about you and if you can send an email to my email address i will give you my picture because i have something important which i will like to share in common with you. Here is my email address (vivian_1sanka@yahoo.com)
vivian.

I'm in a simmilar situation to you, though I draw a bit. I read your story so far, it has a good plotline, but too dialouge based for my tastes. Maybe that was just the prolouge, mine are usually in first person, though, I personally suggest reading some of my narrative oriented fanfics on my page. Might help a bit. Not saying I'm amazing, though I haven't gotten anything based on improvement yet, just positives (that kinda does follow this site's trend of postitive only). Just check out my page. Good to chat with a fellow writer.
Aidan Aenima, AKA: Power9x

P.S: My best fanfics are explicit in almost everything, so if you'd like to read them, turn up your content ratings. I don't try for explicit, I always seem to get it though anyways.

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Freaky.
I was just looking here again for the first time in, uh, months.

No, trust me.

The only thing that I do at all well is shading things.

And even then...

Thanks for the advice I know my writing ability sucks but I do what I can for a southern boy. lol ^_^

Also is it really incorrect to use thru instead of through cause if it is that means that none of my english teachers ever caught it. ^_^

what do you mean by ...ooooookay... O.o