Iradaries

(It was a pretty good story... I feel like playing through all the Halos again now)

"Oh? She better be a very nice girl then." Ariana said with a smile.

Shal started to hand the cream over before pulling it back. "Though, seein' how well ya' keep yer body how do I know yer going to go a good job puttin' this on?" He asked with a girn.

(Aw, why not?)(Sounds like work man D:)

I'd look so sexy in a Spartan suit.
o3o

(I guess that's a fair point)

Ariana shrugged. "Maybe I don't want you dragging some girl I don't like back with you." ("Which ones would that be?" "All of them.")

"Heh, so much to lookin' forward to this part." Shal said. 

(*pokes*)(So what'll did you have to do?)

Yup. ^^ Being different is good.

Not to me.

(Haha, I wish her death was slightly less um... Random?)

Ariana grinned and walked over to Akade. "What can I say, you just got that look to you." She said with a wink. (Hm... Have her say something like, "Maybe I want to be sure you don't bring some girl I don't like back with you."?)

"Oh, you can huh?" Shal said with a small smile.

(It happens, welcome back! :D)(Welp, I can't think of a reason for Shal to do this part :D)

;-;

(Kat dying caught me completely off guard)

"What can I say? You just look like a trouble maker." Ariana said playfully as she pushed the trunk open and started to place the books inside. 

"When I said sit still I meant sit still. So I'm going to get t'is done and wrap ya' back up." Shal said with a shrug as he dipped his finger into the cream. 

(Allright, I'll be... here probably haha)

(It's alright, Reach has a very good campaign... And I'm watching the West Wing so I'm pretty slow too :D)(All right!.)

"Of course I'm coming with you. Don't want you getting into trouble." She said with a wink. Carefully Ariana pulled out a few books from the pouch. "You don't mind if I put these in the chest do you?" She asked. 

"Ok, I need ya' to sit as still as you can while t'ointment soaks into your skin. He said picking up the cream and stepping around her, he sat down infront of her and popped the lid of the cream off.

(I'll just tell you that it is a very good story!)(Haha, I know that feeling.)

Hey
Really did try but i cant always see problems in writting least not till ages later , I'm still trying to work at improving it o,o  Last one i realize was  rp reply awful becuase i did that late and was tired then..But i didnt notice mistakes at time.   But nevermind anyways