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Username Living_Dead_Girl Gender Female
Date Joined Location Atkins-Ellis
Last Updated Occupation Creative Writing major/ Art minor
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My five strengths:
Ideation
Positivity
Futuristic
Belief
Includer
https://www.strengthsquest.com/

I lurve to write and I lurve to comment on writing; if there is a particular work you want me to look at, don't be afraid to let me know and I would love to comment on it. Though I'm not a poet and, therefore, do not write poetry, I have knowledge of the basis of poetry and what has worked for great poets. In prose, I tend to mark on grammar, organization, and style. In return, I'm hoping about 20% of the ppl I check for will read at least part of and comment on my Sanctuary Dark . . . after I'm done doing MASSIVE edits XDDD!

Don't you agree that this is a great quote? ^^

"Today, when I awoke, I suddenly realized that this is the best day of my life, ever!

There were times when I wondered if I would make it to today; but I did!

And because I did I'm going to celebrate!
Today, I'm going to celebrate what an unbelievable life I have had so far: the accomplishments, the many blessings, and, yes, even the hardships because they have served to make me stronger.

I will go through this day with my head held high, and a happy heart.

I will marvel at God's seemingly simple gifts: the morning dew, the sun, the clouds, the trees, the flowers, the birds.

Today, none of these miraculous creations will escape my notice.

Today, I will share my excitement for life with other people. I'll make someone smile.

I'll go out of my way to perform an unexpected act of kindness for someone I don't even know.

Today, I'll give a sincere compliment to someone who seems down.

I'll tell a child how special he is, and I'll tell someone I love just how deeply I care for them and how much they mean to me.

Today is the day I quit worrying about what I don't have and start being grateful for all the wonderful things God has already given me.

I'll remember that to worry is just a waste of time because my faith in God and his Divine Plan ensures everything will be just fine.

And tonight, before I go to bed, I'll go outside and raise my eyes to the heavens.

I will stand in awe at the beauty of the stars and the moon, and I will praise God for these magnificent treasures.

As the day ends and I lay my head down on my pillow, I will thank the Almighty for the best day of my life.

And I will sleep the sleep of a contented child, excited with expectation because I know tomorrow is going to be the best day of my life, ever!"

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Link_the_hedgehog_magician on September 30, 2009, 12:46:55 PM

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Link_the_hedgehog_magicianWhat iz goin' on? 8D

Link_the_hedgehog_magician on September 30, 2009, 12:38:03 PM

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Link_the_hedgehog_magicianHey 8D

quake0099 on September 30, 2009, 5:43:22 AM

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Living_Dead_Girl on September 30, 2009, 12:56:05 PM

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Living_Dead_GirlOhhhh now I've got it! Yupyup, I think I've got the whole solution right here.
The solution is:
I never said a poem had a specific form.
I gave suggestions on what great poets have done and what usually works as well as ideas to consider.
You thought my comments implied that I thought all poems must have a form.
No.
That does not reflect my oppinion at all.
Yay for solutions! =D

quake0099 on September 30, 2009, 6:44:10 AM

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Living_Dead_Girl on September 30, 2009, 12:44:19 PM

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Living_Dead_GirlWell, it's hard not to take a little offense at the first part, but I forgive you. True, I have a loooong way to go, but you do not know why or how.
Also, how do you know you are so correct. -.^
And . . . I never said a poem had to be a specific way.
Tell me where I said "had." XDD!
I only wish to convey that a poem can, indeed be a mass of random words, but good poetry requires more than that, yupyup! I am not a poet and my creative writing major is based on story telling, not poetry.
Therefore, I have a long way to go, indeed, but not for the reason you think I do.
If I did not have so much left to learn, why would I be in school? If I could write a best selling novel at this moment, I would not need to go to school. The point of going to school is to accept that one has much to learn, one is willing to learn it, and one usually wrong about . . . pretty much anything and everything.
The faster one accepts this, the better one's life becomes. I may be wrong about what a poem requires. I am simply vomiting information I deduced from studying and closely reading poetry. I know a poem can be a mass of words. However, if it is only a mass of words, is it really a poem? -.^
I do not mean it in a way that, "Oh, it's not a poem if it's blah blah blah." I simply mean that one does not have as much control over their writing as they think. How do you know your poem does not want to be a short story? Or a long story? How do you know your short story doesn't want to be a poem?
I merely give suggestions. A critique on any writing isn't about fixing to make it better. It's about suggestions. Suggesting this and suggesting that. If you don't make suggestions or recieve them, how does one improve?
Yay! =D
By the way, if you recieved many comments from me as your Email states, it's because I decided to sum them all up into one. I promise they weren't mean XDD! I merely wanted to put them together into an easier to reach format with more smiley faces WOO!
I look forward to your reply, I love talking to people about writing!

Esshole on September 27, 2009, 4:39:36 AM

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EssholeHello!

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