Username   Password  
Remember   Register   |   Forgot your password?

Living_Dead_Girl

Home » Users » Living_Dead_Girl

Living_Dead_Girl's Profile

Living_Dead_Girl's Profile
Living_Dead_Girl's avatar
Username Living_Dead_Girl Gender Female
Date Joined Location Atkins-Ellis
Last Updated Occupation Creative Writing major/ Art minor
Last visit # Pictures 509
# Comments Given11359

Member Info

Member Info
Living_Dead_Girl's picture
My five strengths:
Ideation
Positivity
Futuristic
Belief
Includer
https://www.strengthsquest.com/

I lurve to write and I lurve to comment on writing; if there is a particular work you want me to look at, don't be afraid to let me know and I would love to comment on it. Though I'm not a poet and, therefore, do not write poetry, I have knowledge of the basis of poetry and what has worked for great poets. In prose, I tend to mark on grammar, organization, and style. In return, I'm hoping about 20% of the ppl I check for will read at least part of and comment on my Sanctuary Dark . . . after I'm done doing MASSIVE edits XDDD!

Don't you agree that this is a great quote? ^^
"Today, when I awoke, I suddenly realized that this is the best day of my life, ever!

There were times when I wondered if I would make it to today; but I did!

And because I did I'm going to celebrate!
Today, I'm going to celebrate what an unbelievable life I have had so far: the accomplishments, the many blessings, and, yes, even the hardships because they have served to make me stronger.

I will go through this day with my head held high, and a happy heart.

I will marvel at God's seemingly simple gifts: the morning dew, the sun, the clouds, the trees, the flowers, the birds.

Today, none of these miraculous creations will escape my notice.

Today, I will share my excitement for life with other people. I'll make someone smile.

I'll go out of my way to perform an unexpected act of kindness for someone I don't even know.

Today, I'll give a sincere compliment to someone who seems down.

I'll tell a child how special he is, and I'll tell someone I love just how deeply I care for them and how much they mean to me.

Today is the day I quit worrying about what I don't have and start being grateful for all the wonderful things God has already given me.

I'll remember that to worry is just a waste of time because my faith in God and his Divine Plan ensures everything will be just fine.

And tonight, before I go to bed, I'll go outside and raise my eyes to the heavens.

I will stand in awe at the beauty of the stars and the moon, and I will praise God for these magnificent treasures.

As the day ends and I lay my head down on my pillow, I will thank the Almighty for the best day of my life.

And I will sleep the sleep of a contented child, excited with expectation because I know tomorrow is going to be the best day of my life, ever!"

faves_faves

MORE

Favorite Artists' Recent Submissions

Comments

Comments (3,428)

You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment

DocOck on November 12, 2008, 1:56:57 AM

DocOck on
DocOckmaybe the way the teacher, teaches it, sucks. maybey she/ he cant teach

DocOck on November 11, 2008, 3:01:47 AM

DocOck on
DocOcksrry for the late reply

DocOck on November 11, 2008, 3:00:00 AM

DocOck on
DocOckHey how r u doing today?

DocOck on November 9, 2008, 4:12:25 AM

DocOck on
DocOckHey how are you

Darkecho on November 7, 2008, 6:05:48 AM

Darkecho on
Darkechoyou're welcome

and thanks

DocOck on November 7, 2008, 3:42:33 AM

DocOck on
DocOckWell he doesnt know about the species thing, until a year after they meet, but she has told him that whatever happens, she took the job, and she will stay with him. Well, heh, he thinks he going to outerspace on his own, but his team, and his step nephew goes with him...

and hes a bit like doctor who, he gets into relationships with human beings all the time....but what if later on in the story he grows to close to her...im thinking hes going to find away to fix the cant transform issue, but he doesnt want to use it, becasue it may hurt her...(theres more to this to.)he doesnt want anyone else besides his family to know about the past...
im trying to figure out if the two should like each other or not, i got my grandmother to read it. well what i have, and she says she wants them to....so idk....

DocOck on November 7, 2008, 3:46:06 AM

DocOck on
DocOckwell actually i think they are of the same species, well kinda, theyre just more evolved than humans, they dont need as much sleep, they dont need to eat as much, they only have on set of teeth, they learn quicker, and they dont have anything in their body organ wise that is not needed.and they can use up to 80 percent more of their brains....

DocOck on November 7, 2008, 4:02:02 AM

DocOck on
DocOckThank you for all youre help:D
i gotta go
srry for annoying you

Living_Dead_Girl on November 7, 2008, 4:10:56 AM

Living_Dead_Girl on
Living_Dead_GirlAwwww you aren't annoying! It was fun helping you and I should prolly leave too. See you later! ^^

DocOck on November 7, 2008, 3:25:29 AM

DocOck on
DocOckthey have to get long gone, becasue if they find out they were their, they would die. So he doesnt get to meet them before he wakes up. so im thinking theyre going to give him a ship that has a video on it somehow...and so it wont be so big, im thinking of doctor who/harry potter type thing where stuff is bigger on the inside than outside, or dragonbally z where everything can be put into capsule...ecept im not going to use capsules...idk about that yet.

so what do you think i should do about the couple situation?

thanks for helping:D

DocOck on November 7, 2008, 3:32:39 AM

DocOck on
DocOcki mean dragonballZ...................

Living_Dead_Girl on November 7, 2008, 3:37:46 AM

Living_Dead_Girl on
Living_Dead_GirlXDD I know what you meant.

DocOck on November 7, 2008, 3:03:46 AM

DocOck on
DocOckOkay this is going to be a bit difficult to explain. so ill try.

okay the main character is a shapeshifter from another planet (this planet doesnt have a gender. because if your constantly changeing shape, who knows what gender you are, and this planet doesnt have the same ways to behave as earth) he doesnt know he is from this planet, he doesnt know hes an alien, but before his parents sent him to earth because of a war, they enjected him with something to keep him as one form. so this character grew up as a girl on earth. (his planet is way advanced compared to earth and they learn alot quicker and can use up to 80 percent more of their brains that a human can) later she noticed guys got treated differently than girls, so used the shape shifting as a advantage(to study this theory) so she was two different people. Alexandra as a girl. Jesdon as a guy.
Jesdon was known as a great scientist, and one day got shot, and had they had to put him under cover and hide him.(this shot kept him from transforming,i have a reason for this, cant tell you unless you really want to know) He came back 7 years, because he only has a year left to live, he has to pic a team, one of them developes a crush on him, but he doesnt feel comfortable, because of earth's customs and the injection his parents gave him in order to feel normal. so he doesnt know what to do. he will live past the year, because his parents comes back knowing he is about to die, and cures him, but he has to leave earth, because if he doesnt the earth would be in danger. He is the youngest of their kind before the war, and according to the tells on their planet, he will be the one to save them all. Hes the youngest by at least 300 years....

DocOck on November 7, 2008, 3:04:10 AM

DocOck on
DocOcksrry about that there was more to it than i thought

DocOck on November 7, 2008, 2:44:35 AM

DocOck on
DocOckthanks:D
can i tell you somethings about it, so you could tell me what you would do

DocOck on November 7, 2008, 2:35:12 AM

DocOck on
DocOcktrue too:D

heh my story im writting is at a bit of a standstill, because im trying to see if the main character should act around this girl that likes him, that works on his staff, and how if they do or do not get together. and if they do what would happen, and if they dont what would happen....im so confused
Go to page:

Featured

Featured

Yukizu On the Wall

Yukizu On the Wall

Fave Users (83)

Fave Users (83)
MORE
cute-strawberry-nekoVictoriaZepedaGartenschlauchscooter_girl_HarukoCandycane9Hawiian_TigertailsdareaperDisneyDorkKitsuneAscendantanimefangirl1234shiny_angelPiquantOrochimarusGalGreykittykitty0lost0club

Fans (111)

Fans (111)
MORE
livingdeadguyglennbeck25ShadowPrincess1982NokutankisuMKroneGartenschlauchRockerGirl1AvatarFanZukoFanTOOdoublej21Hawiian_TigertailsdareaperdaiKitsuneAscendantkitty0lost0clubPiquant