PennyxDreadful

yes, well...that's just something that I'll have to edit out...I'll have to do that right now or else I'll never do it...^-^;

Yes, well...Draco's birthday has yet to prove itself importantin the books. He would still have his "duties" no matter when his birthday is. And yes, I guess it matters his AGE in the sisxth book (when he wasn't able to take the test for the Apperating thing) But the way I have it set up all of that still works, he's just a few mounths younger. If the EXACT date of his birth is important in the last book, well, I'm screwed. I just read the books; she nees to specify certain dates in there is there for me.
WEll, I read your story and now I'm off to make comments on the correct chapters. ^-^

Heh, yeah. He was meant to be a girl but then I changed my mind and was too lazy to redraw him and he was already inked. I'm gonna draw a better one sometime where he'll look more like a guy. Thanks for the comment.

I started reading them in the late 90's too (actually, my dad had to read them to me because my mom thought they were too hard for me to read. Ha.) But that's why I was convinced it was later than that. *sigh*
I looked at the thing for Draco and it says his birthday is in the summer. Crap. oh, well, I can change that, and whatnot. It is MY fan-fic, after all. And none of that is important to the actualy HP book and neither are the a...*cough* I can't give away that. THat would ruin it. Crap. Now you know that there is something that is not particularly accurate that I ahve changed and it will give away something. Okay, maybe that's not much to go off of.
The pic on here, is that you? If it is, I like your outfit. I'm just as pale, pretty much, (except for the fact that you're...glowing...) I don't glow, really. Only in the dark.

yes, but in the books, it doesn't say it's in the 90's. I have never read the website and I don't thinkI plan to. Great. Now I have to change the years. But that's okay, it would be 1994 when this year happened and it's passed April 5, so Kurt is already *sniffle* dead.
JKR really needs to tell me these things in places where I'll actually read them. Like in the books.
(But all is well, nothing changes, really. It doesn't matter. I'll just back up all of my books by ...eight years. No big deal.)
*Sudden realization* my...plot...fits better in this time....haaa. Now I don't have to find my way around THAT! Haha, thank you.

HOW DO YOU KNOW IT BEGINS IN THE 90'S??? I don't remember that AT ALL. Did I miss something? Well, obviously, I did. Where does it say that in the books? I want proof that it's in the early 90's.

GAH! Why do I always do this? The red dye is growing out, I'm blonde again, that's why.
I can never seem to tell someone everything I want to all at once.
The time issue. Yes. I was too busy babbing about how I love Nirvana and Kurt Cobain and blah blah blahhh...
Sense it is modern times, this is placed in 2002-2003 and is their fouth year, obvoiusly. I don't know when everyone else's is placed, but J.K. Rowling made it pretty clear to me it was recent. (ex. Dudly throwing is Play Station out the window)
Just had to clarify.

WEll Nirvan rocks and I can't just leave it out of my story. As for the time, HP is written in modern times so this means that it is a...modern thing so yes, Nirvana songs are released (I love Kurt!Gahh*fangirl scream*) sorry. It's just impossible to leave out Nirvana...
ANYWAY...ooc. Did I make Hermione say "Bloody hell"? Oops. Profanity got the best of me. I'll have to check that out because I'm not sure where/why I put that.
Oh, yes. She was pissed or something. Who knows, Hermione...could...Ah, damn I'm losing....o-O;;;
for some reason it is taking me forever to read your fourth chapter (you know at the top of your fourth chapter it says "chapter three" right? ) I keep on getting distracted...
But now I go off to finish...chapter four!

highschool...yes, yes you are older than me. I'm 14...But that's okay. I hope you don't feel stupid you're talking to a 14-year old. (Most people think that I'm 16-17 when they meet me, though, it's rather...odd.)
Okay, I will tell you where they are. Here let me go back and look.
*looks*
This is what you have:

The relief Harry had been hoping for finally showed itself “You talked to Lupin?!” Is he all right?! Where is he?”

You are missing a comma and there are quotes that I'm assuming that you just accidentally placed there. Like I said, nothing major. I'm slightly dyslexic so my errors are usually more noticeable...
And yes, I agree that a fan-fiction is just a story of how the reader would like the series/book to go. So don't get angry with me in other chapters and be like "Gahhhhh damn you ruined it!" but it fits. Oh, and one of my favourite words is "dog" so don't get too wound up on that...'-';;; You may say that Draco is out of character a bit, but he's a teenaged guy he can't be an @$$ all the time to everyone.
I am off to read...CHAPTER THREE

Yes, yes, sixth gader minds are rather amusing. I find myself giggling at parts I had forgotten about....
OCs...you really have a problem with them, don't you? Nah, just kidding. And yes, Amy is in there, but you have to realize that in the books, not all of the Gryffindores are mentioned (Amy is American) and once you get to the Beauxbatons, there HAS to be more OCs because Fleur is the only know Beauxbatons student and Andrée isn't particularly fond of her (even being related to her) so she tends not to hang around with her. And lets see...Hogwarts. Yes. Sense the book doesn't specify all of the Slytherins either, I have taken the liberty to have some more or else I'd be stuck with Crabbe and Goyle and a sappy plot line. They are in it, yes, but Draco HAS to have more friends that that...I think? so yes, there are more. Sorry.
As for spellcheck...I'll have to go back in and look through it and read it to make sure about sentence structure and spellings....and to make sure I gave Andrée her Frech accent the whole way through. Thank you for the advice, I'm assuming you're quite a bit older than I, taken your talent at writing.
Well, I am off to read once more!

Yes yes....Original characters....Andrée...I made her up in the fourth grade, know? Yah, me and my friend Katie were playing Harry Potter and she was Fred and I was a girl named Jessie (DBZ OC...O.o) So Fred ends up dying or something and them the only way to bring him back to life was to kill his worst enemy: DRaco Malfoy. Thus Andrée was born! And so Andrée had a HUGE crush on him but Draco didn't like her (or someting) and so It ended up I fell in love with Draco; the sexy beast...
Don't know why I just told you that. That has NOTHING to do with my story of course... Though my fic may have equally cheezy parts.... But all in all, I think that it may give me more freedom, if you will, to use her and this story wasn't ever really supposed to make it to public, I don't think. At least not when I was writing it. lol
*cough* yahhhhh
Spellcheck...*thinks* yes, yes... My computer is dumb. for example: In the Yule Ball chapter, the comp tried to tell me that a sentence was written wrong and it told me to put this:
"Little round were the ones of the replacing the long tables"
YAH. If that makes any sense, please tell me how....
Spellcheck is worse.
I'm just ganna email you the rest of my debate... It's ganna be rather long...^-^

Yesh...sixth grade...you're reading a story by a sixth-grader.....gahhhhh. But I'm no longer in the sixth grade (thank you Lord) I thought I was ganna fail the sixth grade...O.o Because of that book. I would writ in it during calss and at home and not do my homework so I would be failing a lot....
Mid you, I am cutting out all of the pointless sixth-grade bullshoot I put in it... Oh, and don't mind my type-o's. Every once in a while they show up and then I'm just too lazy to fix them online....I'll have to do that eventually...
And for your arguement (yes, I am a Christian) this is what I believe:
in Romans chapter 1 it says that "Therefore, God gave them over in the sinful desires of their hearts to sexual impurity for the degrading of their bodies with one another." (Romans 1:25) and again in Romans 1:26-27) "Because of this, God gave them over to shameful lusts. Even their women exchanged natural relations with unnatural ones. (27) In the same way the men also abandoned natural relations with women and were inflamed with lust for one another. Men commited indecent acts with other men, and recieved in themselves the due penalty for their perversion."

I don't mean to be preaching at you, I just want you to know where I'm coming from and why exactly I have a firm belief that homosexuality is a sin in itself.
BUT IT'S JUST A STORY!!! I know, and I really enjoy it so far, a bit hard to follow, maybe, but great all the same.

Do you have Yahoo messanger? If you do, I would really like to talk to you, you sound so fun, and I like to debate so if you do to, there we go. ^-^
I hope you don't feel like I just wasted your time... If I did, I'm sorry.
Thank you!

*cringe* you're asking a lot of me. It's not that I don't like homosexual people, I just find it...er...kinda gross and it's against my religion, so...*sigh* But okay, I'll read your fic. I'll read it for...er...writing's sake. ^-^
~Madds
(P.S. the whole 'Drug' thing isn't big in the first one...there's just cigarettes and pot. And...I wrote that one in the sixth grade, so don't be too hash okay????)
Haha. I'll start reading it now. I'll make a comment on each chapter, I think, to tell you how I like it as I go on.
Happy reading...for...ever...with my novel...sixth-grade...novel...*twitch*
It's good though. I think. But I wrote it, so that doesn't count...my friends like it!
Ah, shoot, I'm rambling....daaammmnnn I do that alot...

thanks for the comments about my colouring...I'm not so...great at it yet. I'm really starting to enjoy ith, though. And about our...er...despute about Draco; YOUR Draco can be gay (and that's fine with me) and MY Draco can be straight (And I'm assuming that can be okay with you) ^^ There. That is settled. lol.
I'm more into the drug scene than the gay scene...as you may have been able to tell....
Well...write back whenever, I'm cool with comments! lol.
~Madds

Hey, thanks for the comments! I'll bear that in mine lol Althought I don't draw much, to be honest, but I'm trying to draw more. Anyways, thanks for the comments.

Thaks for the comment! And the advice; yah, I noticed that, but I drew that in 6th period when I was supposed to be paying attention to adverbs and whatnot so it's not the best quality.... I looked at your pics, and I really like the one of Tonks and I would like Draco better if you didn't think he should be gay...(I don't like yaoi or yuri...at all...srry, don't hurt me!!!)
Thanks a million (and seven for luck)
~Maddie

...right back at ya...

HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!