SilentSoul92

Thanks for the comment ^___^ evryone elses comment on my pioc was negative so I erased them all. Thanks for not flamin' me!!!!!!!!!!

Don't torment me with your evil ways by saying my artworks legs are too long!! Lol! I'm just kidding, thanx for the tip. Next time I'll try not to make them soooo long.

i never said that she wasnt Good enough.

Hey. I just wanted to let you know that I finally got my story back up and was able to post chapters 1 through 5. Just to let you know. ^^; Sorry for the long wait. ^^;;

Seifer-sama

don't worry, it was really well appreciated. Gah, so many homeworks and project assignments. I haven't had any time to write the next chappie. (Wendy nearly drove me nuts with her shouts of updating. @-@) hopefully I can get the next one up soon. I'll take you adivce, it really does help

Actually, that was a lot of critism, wasn't it? ^^'' Whoo boy. . .

And lastly, your foreshadowing. You know what it is? I'm pretty sure you do, but just in case, foreshadowing is like giving the reader a hint of what's happening next. I noticed (especially in chapter 11), that you completely stopped the story to tell people of a character that wasn't in the little battle at all. That is ineffective because 1) it seems very unprofessional, 2) it takes the moment away for the reader, and 3) you can easily use the method of foreshadowing to tell the readers what to prepare for. Please please please! I find that very annoying as a reader, and you do have some wonderful potential!

I like the story anyway, it has a great concept. But don't worry about all this; not many people on this site are acquainted with the basic writing skills. How should I know? Because that's how I started like. That's why I'm kinda embarrassed about my very first fanfic, the Millennium Ritual. It's so bad. . . --''

Thanks for listening!

Hey Rita. Sorry for not showing up for awhile. Anyway, I just want to give you some critism about your writing, Divination, since you asked me a LONG time ago to read it. (wrote two comments in there, but was too lazy to write anymore)

Anyway, the very first thing I saw that needed improvement was format and spacing. Spacing spacing spacing. You can't tell where the paragraphs brake off, and that's kind of a number one rule when it comes to writing. You MUST have paragraphs and stuff to show when a thought ends or when it begins.

Two, grammer. The concept of your story is very nice, and it is obvious that you have some excellent ideas, but you need to learn the basic ways of writing dialogue, author's craft, foreshadowing, and so on. These are basic tools that are needed to become an exceptional writer. how do I know? Because I'm working on those tools right now.


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yo um rita silentsoul i put a person in kingdom hearts -darkness falls im jus lettin ya know so the wait can be shorter

Hi ^^ i really love your inuyasha pic.i would comment on more pics but i am in school right now. if you want you can check out my gallery if you like.

Hi this is judgementblade0 answering to your question. I used copic sketch markers to color my picture of the angel and unicorn. In the picture with the vampire feeding I used a colorless blender (also a copic marker) to do the woman's skin. I have a question. I'm a little obsesed with finding great anime wallpaper sites. So could you please tell me where you found that picture in your profil "Forsaken Angel"

Well, I'm taking video game designing classes sooo...yeah, that helped. And your donut thing wasn't annoying Cara. IT was like you trademark. And thanks everyone. Hey Maylia, do you still have that lists of names for the characters in the game I gave you. I lost mine T-T If you have it can you email it back to me?

Hello it's me. Hiroshima recently sent me an e-mail about how annoying it was that I did my doughtnut thing so I'm stopping all together. Sorry if it annoyed you or anything. Cara

please don't feel you are obligated to draw my request that would make me feel so terrible if you drew it because you thought you had to

i already told you that i wanted a voice... but i wanna know how are you doing this game???

Just wondering, but what ethnicity are you? ^^

Hi. It's me I wanted to say hi and ask how you're doing? Also I didn't know if you knew this site ( albinoblacksheep.com ) but it has some funny/interesting videos. Here are a few links to ones I like http://albinoblacksheep.com/flash/guineapig.php http://albinoblacksheep.com/flash/badgers.php http://albinoblacksheep.com/flash/ddautta.php http://albinoblacksheep.com/flash/kittycat.php I hope you like them. ^^

-waves- Konichi wa, Soul-chan!! -huggles- I'm doing fine - I got my comp up and running again! ^_^ -cheers happily- What about you?

Eek, what's wrong with your comp? Seems that we're both having the same problem, lol. ^_^;

Actually, I'm twelve. I started Kindergarten late, but skipped 2nd and 5th grade.

Hiiiiii!!!!!!!! ^^ The reason you can't find the post piccie, is because I haven't posted it yet. ^^' Only because I'm having trouble scanning it. You see, I drew the original first 3 pages in my sketchbook, and I can't seem to scan it, without a lot of the picture being cut off. But I'll work on it, and it ought to be up in about 2-3 days. BTW, on the forums, you said you skipped 2 grades and are now in 8th? Does that mean you're 11?

I don't know if someones told you already but Advent Children is the FFVII Spinoff movie coming out soon.

I would've wished to comment more, but I couldn't really. your art is good, so keep drawing!

~(-Talin-)~

Yeah, I do draw stuff other than chibis, but they're waaaaayy out of proportion, I guess I could try again sometime...

thanx for the comment yes i know im desterbing =D

To answer you question on my picture of Shadow link, yes he is my version of the one from Ocarina of time. Thanks for the comment!

~(-Talin-)~

comment response on "Death Cheated":

No prob ^^ don't give it a second thought, no way you could've known, right?


Comment response on "Practice page":

Thanks @.@;; but lol from studying tone-work I *do* need practice ^^ cutting and sticking them on is just step one
o.o there are so many things I have to learn how to use them for.

Also, it's also practice with composition (PP's composition was just aweful, so bland and open for such a non-eventful scene), getting the characters down (the more I draw them, the more they'll stick to their "look" when I actually draw the comic)
not to mention scenary.

I'm terrible with backgrounds and such (especially structured ones like buildings and city-scapes @.@;;; gotta practice with that.



But thanks so much for the kind words!!!! ^^

just to clear up Bullsnake's comment:

Maylia's was putting us on the same "manga-writing-level" (I assume) while Matt (bullsnake) and I have a certain critique of "Ray".

Not so much the art skill, but other aspects of it.

^^ i don't think she was saying one was better than the other; it's just that "Ray" seems to be the manga that rules FAC right now and she was suggesting that mine was interesting enough to "rival" it.

Firstly, thanks for your comment on the Yin Yang piccy!

Regarding your problems with the paper: If you paint something and it soaks through, it could be that the paper is too thin to hold the paint, or it could also be that you've used to much solvent (if it's watercolours, that'll be water). Painting the same area over and over again that can also be a cause. (that happens to me quite a few times ^^.)

I used normal drawing paper for the piccy (they call it cartridge paper in some art stores). You might want to try out watercolouring paper for your paintings, or some other thick paper, but they would be expensive. Another alternative would be to control the amount of paint used.

As for the scanning part, I understand your problem. Me hate my scanner, too. >.< The colours always turn out to be different from the original pic, especially the colour, pink. So all these while, I had to adjust the colour saturation and contrast with Photoshop until I get the a somewhat identical colour....Some scanners might come with CD-ROMs which have some sort of imaging program installed into your PC when you first installed your scanner. Such programs might have a colour adjustment function which allows you to meddle with the colours of the scanned pic. You might want to check out if you have such a program. Hope this helps, and all the best! ^^

wow! thanks for all the really cool comments!! ^^ Glad to see people are interested!!


to answer your questions:

Yes ^^ I wrote the storyline, it's still being written. As soon as I'm completely finished I'll be drawing it out as an online manga.

The site should be up by January 1st (www.gahtlalegends.com) and so far the comic is planned on premiering in June (hopefully sooner, but we'll see)


^^ Thanks again! and I'll be sure to let you know as soon as it starts!

Hi, me again. I wanted to say thanks for the new comment and I finished looking at your pic. I think you are a wonderful artist and hope to see more of your work.

Hi I wanted to thank you for the comment and tell you I'll be looking at your pics as soon as I can. Also, if you would, I would like you to read "For Everyone" another story I put up. I know the story sounds cheesy but I mean it.

Awww....... Thank you! That makes my day ^_^ I love your art too be the way!

COMMENTS!!! YAY!!!

The next time you go to Feudal Japan to mess up the InuYasha show, let me tag along, okay?

*wink*

do you really mean that about my picture? or are you just being sarcastic? just wondering

*evil grin* about that comment on my story 'strange people live near shrines'... u might want to look at the second chapter.... someone dies.... someone we all hate.... hint hint!

^O^ Yes, of course you're still my friend!! -huggles you-

hey! thank you so much for all your lovely comments! i'm going to go check out some of your fanfic now...

Hehe, actually his hair is I really light blonde. Don't worry - I won't kill you. :P Maybe beat you up but..nah, I'm kidding. -hugz- ^_^

OOHH!!! So...many...comments...*faints* THANK YOU TO EVERYONE WHO'S COMMENTED!!!

Hello. Thanks for commenting on my story. ^_^ You have very kawaii art here!

thanx! i'm so glad u added a new chapter on 'divination'!!! i luv it!!!

Deal. And thanks for commenting in my profile...I was expecting it to be blank...hehe...

i have updated chapter 1 of my story 'the wind mage and the silver mage'!

thanx so much for commenting on my YYH fanfic!! all my info that i put in that story is pulled from fanfics i've read. i haven't watched the show cause my stupid parents won't get good tv channels. that was just a random comment... thanx for reading my story!!

i'm an archer too. KILL KAGOME!!!! btw, i now have 6 stories posted! plz read them and comment.

^o^ You're so welcome! I'm glad I could help, and your art is so cute - I'd be stupid to not tell such a great artist how to bless FAC by putting their pics up, ya know? ^-^ And thanks again for the s-w-e-e-t comment!! -hugz-

Tankies for the comment! ^o^ -huggles-

YAAAY! Can't wait to see your pics, I bet they'll be awsome! ^^ -favs artist and gets ready to see your pics-

thankees for the comment ^-^

Oh, sorry! I mis-read your post. -_-' Anyway, to make a pic smaller, just go to MS paint and click resize. Or, if you have paintshop pro or something else - it works alot better. ^^