altradreamer33
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Username | altradreamer33 | Gender | Female |
Date Joined | Location | New york | |
Last Updated | Occupation | hopefully a writer | |
Last visit | # Pictures | 3 | |
# Comments Given | 18 |
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I'm still working on my profile....
-I will be more then happy to do requests (they may take time to complete because i am quite busy latelly)
She stepped out looking towards the falling horizan with its beutifully painted colors melting away behind the etched moutains. Nothing would ever again be as it should be or as it once was....
-I will be more then happy to do requests (they may take time to complete because i am quite busy latelly)
She stepped out looking towards the falling horizan with its beutifully painted colors melting away behind the etched moutains. Nothing would ever again be as it should be or as it once was....
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kitsunelover25 on January 27, 2005, 5:27:20 AM
Ok, thank you. I'll do it when I can^^
kitsunelover25 on January 26, 2005, 2:42:00 PM
kitsunelover25 on January 26, 2005, 2:22:26 PM
altradreamer33 on January 26, 2005, 1:05:59 PM
Brianhjh on January 25, 2005, 4:27:00 PM
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Brianhjh on January 25, 2005, 4:25:02 PM
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Oh my dear lord
I just skimmed through your literary works that you've posted...
... How should I say this in the nicest manner?...
If you force yourself to use capitals and apostrophes, you have 10 years to go, as the writing you have shown everybody looks like it was from an eight-year old. There is absolutely no diction, paragraphing, flow of thought and you misspelt every words that exceed 5 letters.
I am not trying to be offensive. I am rigorously typing away my Grade 10 culminating English Essay as I sidetrack. The point is, if you are really 15 like me, this level of writing is pathetic. Better to be turned down now than later because the publishing editors are HIRED to laugh at writers like you.
I just skimmed through your literary works that you've posted...
... How should I say this in the nicest manner?...
If you force yourself to use capitals and apostrophes, you have 10 years to go, as the writing you have shown everybody looks like it was from an eight-year old. There is absolutely no diction, paragraphing, flow of thought and you misspelt every words that exceed 5 letters.
I am not trying to be offensive. I am rigorously typing away my Grade 10 culminating English Essay as I sidetrack. The point is, if you are really 15 like me, this level of writing is pathetic. Better to be turned down now than later because the publishing editors are HIRED to laugh at writers like you.
Brianhjh on January 25, 2005, 3:55:54 PM
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kitsunelover25 on January 25, 2005, 3:05:19 PM
Kami_no_Tsubasa on January 24, 2005, 3:36:59 PM
Cara on January 24, 2005, 2:48:34 PM
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O_O You want a request?
Don't get me wrong I'll be happy to do it I'm just a little shocked. I warn you that it may be awhile my scanner and computer are still acting up, so I don't know when I'll get it up. I have a hotmail address wolfsrain_doughnutholes@hotmail.com if you want to contact me there.
Don't get me wrong I'll be happy to do it I'm just a little shocked. I warn you that it may be awhile my scanner and computer are still acting up, so I don't know when I'll get it up. I have a hotmail address wolfsrain_doughnutholes@hotmail.com if you want to contact me there.
Kami_no_Tsubasa on January 24, 2005, 6:15:48 AM
Kami_no_Tsubasa on January 23, 2005, 6:15:38 PM
Kami_no_Tsubasa on January 22, 2005, 3:29:29 PM
inuyashas_girl179 on November 15, 2004, 3:41:23 PM
can you make me a picture of my character?she looks like sonic(same spiky hair)but shes purple and has two long bangs!she wears a blue ruffle skirt with a light blue stapless top!and shes wearing boots like amy rose but there light blue!and she also has white gloves and she has light green eyes!her name is katrina the hedgehog!thanx!my email adress is bella12004@msn.com if you want to contact me!and my user name from fan art central is inuyashas_girl178!well bye bye!