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Username altradreamer33 Gender Female
Date Joined Location New york
Last Updated Occupation hopefully a writer
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I'm still working on my profile....

-I will be more then happy to do requests (they may take time to complete because i am quite busy latelly)

She stepped out looking towards the falling horizan with its beutifully painted colors melting away behind the etched moutains. Nothing would ever again be as it should be or as it once was....

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kitsunelover25 on January 27, 2005, 5:27:20 AM

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kitsunelover25Ok, thank you. I'll do it when I can^^

kitsunelover25 on January 26, 2005, 2:42:00 PM

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kitsunelover25Oops, forgot to ask a few questions:

Race:
Age:
Lenth of her hair:
Can the skirt go down to her feet? (I suck at legs! Grr...)
Shoes: (Or does it matter?)

I think that's it for now...

kitsunelover25 on January 26, 2005, 2:22:26 PM

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kitsunelover25Yip, yip. I'll get to it when I can. Just remember, all of my drawings that I have done lately, have made me want to hide in shame. So if it comes out terrible, blame and yell at me all you want^^

*Ahem* ...I'll do it when I can...

altradreamer33 on January 26, 2005, 1:05:59 PM

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altradreamer33alrighty well thats lovelly isnt it nice to meet you to!

Brianhjh on January 25, 2005, 4:27:00 PM

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BrianhjhI am hoping that you write like this only on the net.

Brianhjh on January 25, 2005, 4:25:02 PM

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BrianhjhOh my dear lord

I just skimmed through your literary works that you've posted...

... How should I say this in the nicest manner?...


If you force yourself to use capitals and apostrophes, you have 10 years to go, as the writing you have shown everybody looks like it was from an eight-year old. There is absolutely no diction, paragraphing, flow of thought and you misspelt every words that exceed 5 letters.

I am not trying to be offensive. I am rigorously typing away my Grade 10 culminating English Essay as I sidetrack. The point is, if you are really 15 like me, this level of writing is pathetic. Better to be turned down now than later because the publishing editors are HIRED to laugh at writers like you.

Brianhjh on January 25, 2005, 3:55:54 PM

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BrianhjhParlez-vous francais madmoiselle?

politcally correctness aside, are you sure that your grammar and spelling of English language is up to the publication standard?

Anyway, I will take all the pre-pubescent boys you've got.

kitsunelover25 on January 25, 2005, 3:05:19 PM

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kitsunelover25Sure, I could try at it. I'm pretty good at female characters.

A warning: Don't be mad/sad if it comes out horrible^^ Most of my drawings do.

So, bring on the request!

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