altradreamer33
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Username | altradreamer33 | Gender | Female |
Date Joined | Location | New york | |
Last Updated | Occupation | hopefully a writer | |
Last visit | # Pictures | 3 | |
# Comments Given | 18 |
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I'm still working on my profile....
-I will be more then happy to do requests (they may take time to complete because i am quite busy latelly)
She stepped out looking towards the falling horizan with its beutifully painted colors melting away behind the etched moutains. Nothing would ever again be as it should be or as it once was....
-I will be more then happy to do requests (they may take time to complete because i am quite busy latelly)
She stepped out looking towards the falling horizan with its beutifully painted colors melting away behind the etched moutains. Nothing would ever again be as it should be or as it once was....
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kitsunelover25 on January 27, 2005, 5:27:20 AM
Ok, thank you. I'll do it when I can^^
kitsunelover25 on January 26, 2005, 2:42:00 PM
kitsunelover25 on January 26, 2005, 2:22:26 PM
altradreamer33 on January 26, 2005, 1:05:59 PM
Brianhjh on January 25, 2005, 4:27:00 PM
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Brianhjh on January 25, 2005, 4:25:02 PM
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Oh my dear lord
I just skimmed through your literary works that you've posted...
... How should I say this in the nicest manner?...
If you force yourself to use capitals and apostrophes, you have 10 years to go, as the writing you have shown everybody looks like it was from an eight-year old. There is absolutely no diction, paragraphing, flow of thought and you misspelt every words that exceed 5 letters.
I am not trying to be offensive. I am rigorously typing away my Grade 10 culminating English Essay as I sidetrack. The point is, if you are really 15 like me, this level of writing is pathetic. Better to be turned down now than later because the publishing editors are HIRED to laugh at writers like you.
I just skimmed through your literary works that you've posted...
... How should I say this in the nicest manner?...
If you force yourself to use capitals and apostrophes, you have 10 years to go, as the writing you have shown everybody looks like it was from an eight-year old. There is absolutely no diction, paragraphing, flow of thought and you misspelt every words that exceed 5 letters.
I am not trying to be offensive. I am rigorously typing away my Grade 10 culminating English Essay as I sidetrack. The point is, if you are really 15 like me, this level of writing is pathetic. Better to be turned down now than later because the publishing editors are HIRED to laugh at writers like you.
Brianhjh on January 25, 2005, 3:55:54 PM
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