power9x

My old story that you complained about is being rewritten, so ENJOY IT WITH FEROCITY.
http://www.fanart-central.net/story-56710.html

Good news, I have started writing a redone version, and that crappy chapter you were so uppity about, yeah well now it's friggin AWESOME.

I can't believe you're just disovering my story. no worries, man. The story gets 10 MILLION times better than it is at the beginning, due to me just starting writing at the time, 2 years ago. Trust me, the beginning was sucky on purpose. it's a prototype, so the beginning will obviously change when I am ready to change it.

Thanks for commenting and nice gallery

Thanks for the comments, and criticize away to your hearts content XD I have nothing better to do either. Plus you have your work cut out for you if you are planing comment on every chapter. Its going to be a long story. X3

Yeah I know. I am planning to read it all, but not comment because if there's problems or things I like I've probably already mentioned them (unless new ones pop up later).

thanks for them comment.
i'm not very good so it helps when i get feed back

Any time.

so you live is roswell?
i live in alb

Cool. Yeah, I've got to update the rest of that area though. It's filled with cheesy in-jokes from 7th grade (when I made the account).

thats cool

Roswell huh? have fun with the aliens *evil laugh*

Yeah, pretty much. :)

51 fics^^

hi^^

Yo. Being nostalgic today, and cleaning up the stuff I'm never going to finish.

okay^^ i deleted some pics before too not too many some and i keep drawing more almost at 2800^^

plus i have almost 50 stories or over

lol i just found u r other coment and i noticed its so true!!
thatnks!

Hello! What's up? I just made new pictures :D

well thanx. im not good at but drawing but i do any ways.
And thanx for the advice^_^

dude i just realized that you live in Roswell I used to live there!!

sup! finally got some internet, so ill re-upload my story 'n' some pics. i haven't talked in a while, considering i have no internet up in michigan...ill have to wait until spring break to communicate again!

hillo

RANDOM HI!!!! can u give my stories a rating like you did with my friend Dani-chan's? id like some creative critisizm.

hey check out my new pics i got better u may remember me with the stupid ms paint drawings

woah, you were depressed? Well, I'm happy your not anymore!! Good luck with the person you "like!"

Thanks Nez. I've been really mood swinging recently, and I'm depressed again, and I know why, and it isn't about her, and you probably don't want to know.

sorry about the whole depression thing, I really hope you get through it. It doesn't sound like much fun.

umm...okay...

Hey man, I know what you saying with that Sonic Unfold so I'm not gonna yell my @$$ off, I don't know how good of a comedy writer i am. The reason I did scripts because I think a comedy deserves script (the lazy thing) If you want to read something better you should try some other stuff of Mine: generation by generation 2, is a better one I guess (however, since FAC removed all sexual items it's prequel was removed and I can't get it back since I deleted it. I'm a dumbass. However if you read Generation by Generation 5 there is a introduction that describes the event that lead up to it, it's a spoiler for some. GBG 1,3 gone.) Well, I'm just saying since I don't want you to think that's my style, it's not. And I don't know if that story will even strike your interest, but GBG 2 is my most popular story.

hey, you stranger out there. i miss u, when are you on now? (central time) ill try and get on when you are cause i have no idea what ur schedule is like. im starting to really get to writing, so hopefully more will come, faster and faster!

Hey, can you critique my story 'Akatsuki Tales'? PLEASE???!?!!

Thanks a lot for the pointers! ^_^ i shall start fixing up my fanfic! *bows head*

Aw, sorry about your contest! <:)
But I am happy I won. Thanks!

Wow, you flatter me so greatly. I am glad oyu enjoy my fanfics.

Sure, I'll critique some of your work.

u know whats wierd? all of a sudden ive been watching A LOT of spongebob, like every morning during breakfast and lunch, i eat and watch spogebob...*-*

http://www.fanart-central.net/story-46534.html

Can you please help me? this is one of my first fanfics and i need some pointers

R U MY LONG LOST SISTER KEVIN FEDERLINE

What the fracking hell!?!?!? You compare me to that piece of shoot? I am completely insulted by you! He is the exact resembelence of what I hate, a complete idiot that thinks they have talent but don't because they have too much support. I'm keeping this, because it's totally idiotic. Bye.

Thanks for the review on my story I'll try and fix it and I hope the second chapter is better then the first

hey hey i need some help  http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-615236.html

ahem hiya!
just wanted to stop by...and say hi!^________^

ya i did go fast but in my defense the marines had to go fast or be discuvered

thanks

dude, i love ur veiws on life.

ummmmmmm i did not join two days ago.....i joined on JUNE 26.....today is JULY 30....not 4 days

Sorry, my mistake. Misread it. Do it all the time. For example, I accidentally thought someone that was a year old was 3 days old once. Still, that's an impressive amount of comments.

THE RETURN:
I'm back! Now, I am going to finish Path To War before school starts, so I've got two weeks to write my @$$ off, so I'll be here alot. I'll still be commmenting and I'll still be reviewing along with writing, though, so I'm not leaving completely. Also, I'm thinking of rewriting the original draft of In The Shadows (yes, I didn't revise any of the work I put up here so far, that's the reason for grammer mistakes and some overly short chapters). Hopefully, I'll also get Enter The Night done. Well, see ya.

about Rikuphantom, she cant log on, shes in trouble...sorry...

News:
I'm Leaving FAC:
Just kidding, though I'll be gone next week at Cedar Point (staying at the Kalihari too. Biggest indoor waterpark and biggest amusement park world wide.). I'll have one more chapter of Path To War up today, and I may comment and other stuff, but no updates to my stories this week.
Zim Quick Fic (Mary Sue):
While my normal fic length is a full fic (around 20-30 chapters) or a oneshot (1 chapter), this next one will be a quick parody of Mary Sue's in fanfiction in the Zim universe. For thoses unequaited with a Mary Sue, its an OC that falls under atleast of these 4 criteria (It still may not be a Sue if it does, but if you want to know for sure, take one of the many MS Tests on the internet):
*Resembles the author in a fashion only appealing to the author
*Is perfect in every way
*Main attraction to all characters of the opposite sex (and sometimes same)
*Steals the spotlight in favor of sharing it with respected characters
Well, I'm going to make a parody fic that I'll probably write in my freetime over vacation. It'll have Zim make a Mary Sue Robot inorder to get Dib's trust and, at his weakest moment, send him to his doom (they use that word alot in the series). Unfortunately, Dib and Zim are both highly annoyed by it's perfection, while the rest of the class swoons over her. So, they have to come up with a way of eliminating the perfect little girl. It's funnier not on paper but in use.
Well, bye.

My real name iz Lindsey Doyle...On you're Break do you miss anybody?.I Doooooooooo.Her name iz WENDY.Im REALLLY SSSSSSSSAAAAAAAADDDDDDDD. I haven't seen her in over 3 YEARZ...Shez comming from CHILE...She iz comming back TOMARROW


I am really SSSAAADDD


By: LINDSEY DOYLE

Not really. Other than in school, I don't talk much to my friends, mainly because one is a super-boyscout (which I am not for in any way, but it runs through the family, so I don't really bug him about it), and the other is this austrian kid that spends 70% of his time doing school work, 29% of his time with family, and 1% of his time with anyone else. My other friends I don't know well out of school or moved (my best friend of all time moved the first semister. Haven't seen or spoken to him since). Here's my main friends over the summer so far. I'm happy with that.

hey thank for the advice ive been working on detailing my pics

News:

Path To War: Well, it's going slower than I thought again. I'll try to write as much as I can today though.

Anyone Good With Flash Animation?: If you are than I need someone that can do animation well. I can do a ton of stuff with flash but I can't concentrate to do this long term project I'm trying to do, so if you'd like to collab on it, or on another project, just post a notice on this page.

That's all for now.

I'm not interested in your contests....sorry.thanks for telling me about them

P.S.nice pic of Jenny or X-J9

News:

Myspacing:
If you have a myspace and know me through fanart, just drop me a link sometime. I'll be friends with anyone there, just no spammers. Every time I check my email, I see some girl trying to bribe me into a spam and virus laden softcore porn live chat site. All fall under hatred class 1: Overly Conforming People, and also usually fall under bonus dislike class 5: Stereotypical Webchat Blondes.

Some Funny Websites:
Here's some stuff for a laugh. Be warned, one of these has Naruto/Yugi-oh parodies, one has explicit content and halo parody, one has ninjas that will kill you, and one, well, has a guy typing with boxing gloves. If you haven't heard of even one of these, you sicken me.

www.homestarrunner.com (The Paper Will Live On, See SBEmail 173)
www.askaninja.com (Ninjas Kick A$$, which contradicts my Myspace url)
www.roosterteeth.com (Check out Red Vs Blue's Last Season)
www.theabridged.com (Naruto Fans, you may be offended. Everyone else will have a good bad humor time)

They're all pretty funny. That's it.

Parabola, The Weirdest/Coolest Music Video Ever:
As I have stated before, Tool is f***ing awesome! Though, this weird music video by them, is acutally not a bunch of random crap. It has a hidden meaning that I know but won't tell. Here's the link:

http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=5054586593358081214&q=Parabola&total=822&start=0&num=10&so=0&type=search&plindex=0

Bye

Yay! saw ur other work, you are great at drawing AND wrting!!!! Lucky U!!!!

Seariousally, U AAARRREEE AAWWEESSOOMMEE...I LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE ur art..If u only could ba mi fan then we could talk allllll day...Ur my only friend... and I have NO friends...I'm really sad...U r my best best best best best best best best best best bestest friend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well, first off, I don't fave people as friends. I'll be friends with people, but I fave people because they're good artists or authors, not as much for friends. If you want more friends and fans here, though, you should really put up your art. I've been trying to get some sketches done, but nothing so far. Oh well. I've been writting though alot. Listening to music too. I'd also prefer not chatting as much here but through email. I take this site very seriously, even though I really shouldn't. Well, nice seeing you. Bye.

Do u know how 2 pt up art? I don't. I only started becuz my older sister told me 2.



Sorry 4 bothering u...I will never bother u again...OK?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BYE 4 ever

thanks for the comments and all. i know the story is really bad in the being but i get better lol later on i know that sounds weird but i have not worked on this story in a long time the first 4 chatpers are bad i understand! lol but thanks again for the comments i look into that! but please dont stop reading! lol thanks again!

[[Morbid]]

News:

To Fans, People Passing Bye, And Friends:
Anyone that's read my stuff or looked at my art here, thank you. I'd just like to say that.

Reviewing:
If you'd like something of yours to be reviewed, please just post a comment here about it. I'll do three types of reviews:
1. My Skill(Default): I'll review based on a comparison to my own skill. The balanced review.
2. Your Skill: I'll review based on the rest of your work. If you want to see personal improvement
3. Master Skill: I'll review it based on you skill compared to the best artists here. If you want a truely honest answer. Be warned, I won't hold back. I can be a real @$$ if I try.

Enter The Night Contest:
The OC Contest is taking entrants still!

Writters Contest:
For other Fanfic writters, your chance to do a great contest for it.

That's it. No more news.

hey power9x thanx for the welcome.its kinda awkward being new to a forum and all.but i'll get started on my gallery(maybe a storie or two[not much of a writer])

HI... i dunno if im gunna write a fanfic,
ill get to ur stroies as soon as i can ^^

News:

Vacation:
I'll be gone next week in Ohio to go to Cedar Point, so I won't update much. I'll be able to borrow my dad's laptop, but I probably won't update my stories at all.

Camp:
The week after that I have camp, so I'll update less, but I'll still be on.

Requests:
I now do requests for stories, so if you have an idea, but can't write it, I'll take it.

Contests:
I have 2 new contests up, so see the contest section here if you want to enter. One is art and one is story.

Path To War:
I'm updating it this week frequently, I may finish it. I'll be here all week long.

whats up
Check out my new pics.
one i shaded quiet alot

Hi ther^^
I just saw ur comment on my story and Id be happy 2 reed urs!
U should try reading my others! My freinds say that they're good too! Especially my Kh2 one!

I think you r a very nice person! wanna b friends?

Yeah whats up
I got a picture with
more shading so it look different
check it out

hay whats up

Ive been reading your work, man, and I love it. My favorites so far is Tears and Tyrant. (The Tears poem really speaks to me.)

Hello i read ur work!!!!!! It wuz athome!!!!

hay what up

Well, I just came back from a long writter's block! Go me! Well, enough self bragging. You still have an entry for the contest?

Thanks! I'd be happy to read ur fanfics! PLease read my stories as well if u haven't alread, well, one is up there, but i haven't started it yet =, so...please?

I also wish to enter an OC.....if I may?

You definately can.

do you know if I should write it on my profile or something?

Just post the OC's bio somewhere on the page. It can be on your profile, on mine, on a story, on someone completely random's profile if you'd like. I'm really lineant on entry, just if I see it sooner, it'll get into my head sooner, and in turn, I'll be more likely to write about it.

alright, I'll do it now....

(Black) Ebi Saru:
eye color: emerald
hair color: Hazel
clothes: a strapless, black top with chains connecting to a collar around her neck, with olive green cargo pants, fingerless(black) gloves, and metal tipped shoes.
weapon: A huge sythe with an extra tip on the blade.
Bio: When she was little she ran away from home,because of a madman that killed her parents, and moved to the mountains.
There she met an old hermit named Kyro, whom had once been a warrior for a dark lord, and taught her to fight with a sythe. Now she roams the country side trying to find the madman and kill him.
I'm sorry if it sucks! I just thought it up!

That's actually pretty good. Just, I've got to think of how I'll impliment it into the universe.

myuu? okay! chu, chu!

Hello u commented on my fake story I just started a new one on my other account tallestpurple101 if you would like you may read it its in Invader Zim OCs and the rest are in Zim Dib or Almighty Tallest

hey i wrote a story read it plz

it's okay sorry^^ and you're welcome

Hello there! I saw you name on gothic0Chikara0Risumo, came over to check out your profile and found your story idea to be so cool! I plan on reading it very shortly! ^_^ I was wondering if you'd let me enter your contest, if you don't mind. It attracted me so easily, I just wanted to make sure. Please let me know when you can!

You can definately enter, I actually need entrants. Thanks for posting here, and I'm always glad to hear from other people on here. Hope you like the story!

that was good i loved it

Bonjour. I'll check some of it out.

sure i'll read some of your stories... i'm on till midnight or 11:00 just so you know....

um not sure if i will read either maybe the pg13 version

if it does not contian to much vilolece

i'm not into the viloent stuff like the gory stuff you mentioned on the unsensored or slightly unsensored version^^

not sure where to read it it's harder to read at fanfiction.net cuse of the white background

here maybe is better cuse i'm not sure how unsensored it is^^

It's uncensored here mostly, I just ommited one scene and rewrote parts of another. I was going to have it uncensored here, but it then would be explicit sexual content, and that is banned here now. The truely censored version is the PG-13 one.

oh that i don't mind it's just not too much into violence^^

i only on ocassion use moderate violence on a pic or

story^^

perhaps i will read your uncensored fic

on fanfiction.net i am a member there and can comment there if you can give me your user name^^

it just might take a while it's kind of long^^

Aidan Aenima is my username.

ah okay

you're welcome sorry it's just i have trouble following some stories^^ so it may tkae a while for me to comment

It's okay. I'm really appreciative of what you've done, and I'm honored that you've spent that much time on me. Well, best of luck on reading all my stuff if you're having trouble keeping up. Bye.

i take it little by little^^

Hey whats up
Thanks for the comments you
left on those picture i wasn't
tring to get realism but I'll put
some on there when i do try
but thanks

Welcome!

No problem, dude!!!!!
And I'll keep reading them, yeah!!!!!!! ^^

you're welcome and thanks

Whats up. this is docOck on another account

Nothing much. Just writting a bit. Chilling.

hey...umm...i don't think i can do your request.i'm having a hard time understanding what the character looks like.sorry, but could you ask someone else?

Okay, thanks for trying.

Thanks!!!And i'll check 'em out right After I sleep *5:00 AM* and still no sleep *falls over dead*

^^
http://shadow2007x.deviantart.com/

Hey i wrote some more poems if you care!

what's yourfanfic account i wanna read the rest of chapter fifteen in your story.

ok....

Thanks for the comment^^
Maybe I will color that butterfly in!

yeah i tend to stay away from shading and backgrounds just because they are annoying like most people do. if i had some computer program like most people have it would definitely make the project easier.  and ill definitely take a look at your stuff

Well thank you very much, I love it when people notice my artwork. And yes I'd love to read your story. I'll get on it when my computer stops being a dog and loads the rest of my story chapters.

Hey power9x,thats all i'm saying for now cause,it's pretty late where i am so i'm gonna hit the sack, see you tommorow, bye!

See ya tommorrow!

your welcome! ^__^

I ll read them when i get the time to ok. ill print them off read them. i do that to everybody its just i dont really like reading thing that is on the computer i have to print them off. and i know what you mean im writting a story right now that i hope i can get published. but i havent wrote in it in awhile. but i am working on a House MD fan fic that im constantly working on for some reason. I wrote at least 30 pages in two days and i only work on it for about and hour and a half or less a day so.yeah. well ttyl

whats up

Not much, outside of the fact that I just wrote 2 new chapters for my fanfic! Also, by just, I mean, like 10 minutes ago I did. It's weird, I can't write for weeks, and then, I write like crazy in about a day for a week. It's useful because then I don't have to think of what will happen in the story next, though it's always a suprise. Originally, the ending to the first one was going to pair Adam and Jenny, untill I wrote Ashley's part in. Well, I'd appreciate it if you read them. Bye.

Thank You! ^.^

I mite get 232,476 gold phrom ur game...u r awesome

Thanks for the comments and i'm not good with shading...i never have been....hee hee hee...

I'm not worried about my writing it's my drawing I'm worried about

It doesn't matter as much. I think your drawing skills are great. Just, with writing, you are too scripted and too unimaginitive in your lines anyways. Your art needs a bit more detail (and I'm a maniac for detail), but that's it on that. Though, I'd still appreciate it if you read my fics. You're really lucky. Sorry, I'm being jealous. Though, I still think you should read my stuff. You may learn something with writing.

ok ^-^,and it's ok to be jealous

Just here, it's all about your story type, not your quality. I'm writting a naruto fanfic, though, it's a oneshot. Ever heard the song John The Fisherman? That's my basis for the fanfic.

I'm a naruto/sonic/pokemon fan..oh what do you mean by work.

You need to keep practicing writing before you post stuff. That's what I meant. Even if you aren't a fan of the stuff I do (I'm not a naruto fan, but I read naruto fanfics anyways), I use a hugely different tone than the series I base it off of. If you look beyond the initial odd series choice and high explicits, you'll find a pretty good story. That's it.

oh

Cool! Thanks for the compliments! My friends say that the poems are kind of scary and they never though i could right things like them....

Not that they're scary as much as dark. Not goth, but not happy anyways. I love poems like that, and I should post some of the poems I've written before here. Well, bye.

and it could be a monster cartoon or a alien cartoon?

I don't care as much. They're guidelines, not rules as much.

what if it is like a cartoon not an classic cartoon

Doesn't matter, those are the prefered types, not required. By Classic Cartoon, I meant like in the style of the show, moreso in eyes than body, and based of simplicity. Though, a modern look for you character isn't discouraged either.

Thanks!

thnx 4 commenting

Welcome!

uuuuhhhh...ok...do you like Naruto?

I don't watch it regularly, but I've seen a few episodes and I like it.

Thanks for dropping by, and for the compliments :D I'll check out your work too.

Thanks for checking out my work, and you're welcome for the compliments.

Thank you very much ^_^ and sure I can read you story

Thanks, and it's stories! I've written/writing 6!

Oh, I did'nt mean by flaming.

How then?

Seriously. I want to know.

Your telling me I'M overreacting? Take a look at your fracking profile! AND you reported me on my pic so now it's blocked! Your going to be very sorry >:[.

Hello!^__^ thanks..
actually I'm not new here....just changed accounts^^
and sure! I'll be glad to read ur fanfics :)

Thanks for reading!

Thankies for the coment!!! ^^

Welcome!

when dues the contest end?????

August, I think. The contest is done when I finish my second fanfic, Path To War, which I have a writer's block, so I'm thinking I should be done by the end of the summer break, which then I'll select the winners.

wat contest r u tak'n 'bout????????????????

See the Contest part of my profile. It's for OCs and for the finale to my Trilogy of fanfics, the Shadow Souls trilogy.

Sorry, but I don't do that anymore :D

oh so you could make up a person

Yeah, that's the entire contest. Make someone up and then draw them.

um hello you there

Yeah, but commenting around, and Gmail responded slowly to your post.

i dont get bio or oc

Bio: Basically, a little paragraph about your character
OC: You make up someone or something as a character. It could be you, someone else, or something completely out of nowhere.
Those are the terms.

hay whats up

Not much. Not much. Currently trying to write my story, but having writer's block. Well, you've read all 6 of my stories, right?

I went on Dream Avatar and I made a girl and I might get 100,032,505 gold... Thnkz for letting me go on Ur gameish website...I love that game and all my friendz du 2...Ur awesome . .
3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'd like to see my OCs in sprite form! That'd be awesome!

You mean my OC, Ashley? I wish...

Hye dude why can't you say 'frack' in the title of art? None of the moderators have a problem with it...
Sorry for coming here and being a dog like this but I just dont get your problem with my friend having the word 'fracking' in her title...

Dude, I'm not complaining about saying frack. I use it all the time, just not here as much as in everyday talking. Just read the fracking submission rules, it says, and I'm copying this from the submission rules:

3 - Other Submission Guidelines
The following is a brief description of the submissions form and the guidelines for each field that appears on it. In order for your submission to be processed, you must fill out all the required fields:

Title - Title of your piece. Your submission's Title must be humanly readable and may not be prefixed with punctuation or symbols. Additionally it must also be appropriate for all ages to view and may not include profanity or swear words.

So it's not that I'm being a complaining whiny dog, I'm just following rules, and if you have a problem with that, you're just a waste of everyone's time.

Sorry, on the second time I read your thing, it sounded less harsh. Just got flamed though by your friend, and I really don't want to deal with it. That's it.

I got a PM about it. Even though it's in the rules, it's just discouraged, not illegal. Sorry I made a big deal about it. I honestly don't care on a personal level.

Hey man thats cool, I never even read the rules myself (so why the HELL am I complaining?) 'Cause I'm jut trying to be a good friend for my friend y'know? Sorry f at first I sounded like a total dog but I'm not a waste of peoples time (to tell you the truh I'd say the same thing if someone was doging to me falsely) but I wasn't trying to be a dog about it.
Glad this is sorted out for now, yeah?
See you around some time

hey I like Sakura & Sasuke on naruto and I think they make a cute couple.

Well, you have your opinions. That's it.

hey ^^
 
thanks for commenting on my picture ^^- i appreciated that

Your welcome. I comment all the time. I'd like it if you commented on my stories though. Well, thanks for coming down. Bye.

Fank cuu for da comment ^.^ I just got 2 questions to ask bout your OC:
1. By being half demon, how are his looks effected?(E.g claws, animal body parts?)And how does he look, fully?
2. When I said in charge of I meant elements ^^; For demons these are taken: fire, ice, poison, shadows, magic, sky.

1. He doesn't have a demonic apperance at all, since he is technically not possesed, just with a demonic like soul.
2. He controls shadows, sky, magic, and time.
I'd also like to note that he's an anti-hero. That means he fights evil and good. He's neutral. He fights whoever is a threat or is aganist him.

Okay, what does he look like in general? Like hair, eyes, clothes? And all of those are taken except time, so he'll be demon of time. Does the demon he's possesed by habe a physical form?

You can take as many liberties as you want on him (he actually isn't as much of a demon as a demonlike being. I usually take something so unbelievable and make it seem real, that's my challenge.), though you can look at the sketch I made of him in his human form in my featured pics.

..what? ok so invader Zim style.. i can do that.. wait it is that right? if not what other zim is it?

Just read. Period.

i meant what does it mean. and do you mean invader Zim? because that's not dark...

I'm probably not that dark. Zimish maybe. Violent, yes, but not nessicarily dark. I can do dark (and a spinoff I'm doing its pretty dark, much more so than my normal series), but not very dark. Just a little bit darker than usual. Though, it is drasticly dark based off of the original series's lightness, so it is dark in a way. Though, you have to read it to see what I mean. Thanks for commenting.

oh well...ok!
nice to meet you! oh and yondaime is the 4th hokage! i call him either yondy or arashi!

Okay, Naruto, should have guessed.

Vasquez?

and i'll have to read some of your writing, to get into the feel.

A little. More on the Zim end honestly. Read a bit more, that's the main key.

wow! what a great comment! thank you!! thanks very much!! I apreciate it!! ^^

whats a OC???
please help dont understand

Original Character. You make up someone that can be in the story.

i guess i'll enter your contest, judging by the name you want something dark? if not, what are you looking for? and i'm sure i'll get it by due date:P.

Something dark would be good. Just in the feel of my stories (dark, yes, but not super dark. A little bit of Vasquez feel would be good).

U should check out Funny Naruto South Park shows (on YOUTUBE.com)

Checked it out. Not the funniest in my opinion, I think that Naruto is unintendidly funny at times (sorry Naruto fans).

Have you seen Yugi-oh Abridged, really funny. It's at
theabridged.com, no "www"

well i'm quite good at fanfics but i'm still learning to be honest

What's that supposed to mean?

yoness

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what is your contest ??????
and i have to get of so comint back on my page and i will chek and the do date
and if i didnt why wold you do that

Read the contest part of my page ^. Due date is when I start writting the 3rd story in my trilogy. You have about till August. That's the deadline. Though, enter earlier, I'll get more ideas going, and you'll have a better chance at winning the prizes. Bye.

hey i replyed to ur comment but i also wanted to say HI! on ur proflie!! u seem like a kewl person and i was hopeing we could be friends!!!??? :)

Sure. Though, read my fanfics first. I'm friends with people that I can bounce off of or I know their work and they know my work.

U Have Really Cute Picks. My Real phone number iz 681-0083. U Kan call me... watz Ur real Name????? Mine'z Lindsey Marie Doyle!!!!!!!

Aidan Aenima, but the last name is obviously fake, and if you don't think it's fake, it means cleansing within (Anima Enima), which I got from the tool album that inspired my OC. If you thought my pics were good, turn up your content ratings and goto the stories page on my gallery. As for calling you, I don't want to be extremely creepy.

Thanks for the complement on my pics though!

hiya want to be friends

Read all 6 of my fanfictions before you decide if you want to be friends with an deranged person like me. ALL 6. If you see less, turn up ALL 6 of your content ratings, except for racism. Then we'll talk. I'm friends with all who haven't gone to Jail yet and shouldn't be in jail, though if you want it to be official, read before you post.

Sorry if I sounded harsh. Though, I don't want spammers. If you really want to be friends, make sure you study up first.

In Reply To Your Question, Well I Don' Know!

It mighty be a while till I get the pic up. My scanner is fudging up. If I don't get it working soon, I'll just take a picture of it x3

hola! they finally added my pics, but i deleted one to refurbish it caused it looked stinky to me... take a look if you want. bye. (:

See ya.

P.S: I'm just suggesting this, but, I think your character should have a masterful construction abilty, and be able to design and build elaborate traps. You know, throw a little bit of Saw in there, I want to make him a villan more fearsome than Dr. Connors. Someone that will strike fear into the hearts of the readers, and will give a real challenge to the readers. Since Dr. C dies at the end of Path To War, we need a new villan. You're winning at this moment. Keep writing.

hehe! i updated Jade, so there are now three new chapters, and i fixed the format so theres no more annoying little squares instead of apostrophies!!! ^.^

o! and if u re-read the end of chapter 2, and the article at the begining of 3, youll see something that might make you happy!! ^.^

Thanks for using my idea! I really appreciate it.

hey, it was a great idea! ^^

Thanks

hey, it was a great idea! ^^

Thanks for the tip.

Welcome!

Thanks a lot for your comment!!! ^_^

Ditto!

Hey i like your story i like witing storys and doodling but i dont want any to see them. HEHE.

whats uuupp

Not much, man. Go read my fics. Bye.

why?
they any good?

Yeah, they are pretty good, not Tolken quality, but good for fanfics. They are, though, well written.

what kind of expicits? maybe that's why i can't read your fanfics.

All, except for sexual content (moderate), and spoilers, wait, yeah, spoilers too. They differ from fanfic to fanfic, though my best one is the worst, and it's even censored for here. Just turn up violence and language for the majority of it, though In The Shadows has a few sexual scenes, giving it a explicit nudity and a moderate sexual content (with the most explicit scene ommited). Well, then you have all 4 of my fanfics, my song, and my blog. Raise the content, read the fics. That's why I put the huge WARNING at the top.

YAY!! im back, and now i feel much better!

but HUMPH!! they still haven't approaved my pics!! T.T

It took me 5 F***ING DAYS for my pics to be approved last time. Good luck at it being today. Since you have my myspace, you can post it in my comments if you'd like. I just want to see it. I don't need it here. I'll put you up on this page with that version if you do win (which, by the looks of it, not only being the only entrant, but also having a great character at that, should put you at grand prize). The contest goes on till I'm done with writing Path To War (which, because even though I have the entire story layed out in my head, as a movie, that I can watch over and over again, I've been busy during the last week and stuff, so I'm waiting till this Monday to continue writing. It's going slower than last time (took me 2 weeks of working about an hour a day on In The Shadows) way slower.), so you have some time. I just also added some tektek versions of my characters. Well, bye.

Sorry for the language. It literally is aggrivating to the point of extreme discontented anguish.

AHHH!!!! WHAT THE F^&*?! THEY REJECTED MY PICS BECAUSE THEY WERE TOO LARGE!!! ARGH!!!!!!!!

(sry, just venting some anger (: )

no prob, hey, if u look under my pics on myspace, the very last one is the pic

hey whats up

Not much man, not much. Say, have you read my fanfics yet?
Well, I just added my tektek versions of my OCs. You posted here a long, long time ago! Well, read it.

Wow I love your stories their awesome keep writing^^

Hi! Thanks for the comments! Sure I'll read your stories, is 'In The Shadows' first? I have actually written a Naruto fanfic but it's on fanfiction.net. It's complete, and I'm doing the sequel now. If you want you could read it and I'll send you a link, but it's yaoi, lol.

I've been a little busy. But I will, I PROMISE!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

Okay! I'm pretty busy too, so I haven't read as much as I want to, but if you do it before I write the third one, I'll be glad.

Okay. ^^

ok...ive got 2 go for now, ill talk l8er... c u!!! (:

See ya!

well thanks for the comment man. if ya like that one, ill be entering more ball-busting babes in the near future, so keep your eyes peeled!! and ill check out some of yer work now

Hey! im entering ur contest right now, itll be up in a sec if my computer cooperates...

Thanks for entering! Good luck (so far, you have a good shot)

OK! look under my pending pics, the one on the right is my entry, thanks!!!! (:(:(:(:

Sorry that I can't see it yet (since your new, I'd like to remind you that pending can only be seen by you), so if you could give me a little description?

well, i sat down a little while again and attempted a mecha pic. it is a robot, and The murderer of his creator, Dr. Wigges. His small concious results in bloodshed, he takes on the side of evil.
ta-da!!

Seems like a key villan role in the series.

!SPOILER ALERT!

If you read the introduction to my first fanfic, that's the ending for my second one. So, I'm thinking he is now out for a quest to power, and stalks the last remaining survivors, trying to sap their lifeforce into his own. Jenny, though, is his main goal. Killing her would make him the last robotic being on earth, and able to rule it as he pleases. Though, he needs to capture Adam's soul in order to obtain that power to do so. So, then, the heroes have to wake Adam from his state and stop the shadow beings to stop your OC from obtaining his soul and taking over the universe. That sound good as a first idea?

wow! excellent, great way to build uip some huge waves of suspense.

Don't thank me. Thank 24 cliches, the soul beings being like a bomb sort of. Only, the bomb is a person, a monster, and a warrior. You're currently getting grand prize, unless someone else enters that gives me an even better OC.

quick question, r u really 23 years old?

No, sorry if you're dissapointed for some reason. I lie.

actually, i was hoping u weren't, cause its kinda of creepy to here about adults watching MLAATR! im guessing ur still a teen. (:

Right!

hey, i'd love it if u could read my story - there's only one and its fantasy. if u dont like fantasy, i suggest you dont read it, but its cool to know someone online who doesn't speak in one word sentences.thx

I'll go read it later today, did you just post it? I love fantasy too, though I don't read much fantasy on here. Ditto on the one word sentence thing. Bye.

Just read it. It was a Masterpiece.

quick question, is this ur myspace?
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendID=189880910

thnx! (:

Yep!

KOOL! add me right now...

Just did, cool myspace by the way. Added you to top friends.

sonicX

ok i made a pic of masterchief its ok but my first one

Heyy, ur Zex? Sweet! U like FAC so far, uve been on for about a month now. ^^

well look i only wrt it at half 9 last night and by the way there will be 5 more chapters on by staurday after noon kk
oh don't be nasty about be nice please
oh i have wrote a book before kk nd it was published

I write my stories through the night, into morning, and it isn't broken. Look, I was being nice. I just was saying that you need some work. It's like telling a 5 year old that they can't play on the high school varsity team, because they aren't good enough yet. I didn't bash you. You just need to write more before you post here.

it may be a week till i get it on but i do have a picture of a ghoust that no one has seen (but me)and its anly my fist time trying masterchief looks hard so i might nevar draw him=(

thanks for the comment, and yeah i don't like the paint ones either, when i scan some more hand drawn  ones I'm gonna delete the paint ones.

Thank you!hi am Shadow and it's called
www.tektek.org

As for your fanfics, will do. ^^

Thnx dude!!!! ^^

You are very good at drawing i see. ^_^ And as well in story writing, very compeling stuff. If you would like to read my saga of stories, go on ahead. lol. There are 12 books total. Each book can range from nine to seventeen chapters. Here's the list, and it's about Naruto:

:STORIES:
BOOK 1 - NARUTO: A HOKAGE’S JOURNEY
BOOK 2 – NARUTO: A HOKAGE’S JOURNEY 2
BOOK 3 – NARUTO: A HOKAGE’S JOURNEY 3
BOOK 4 – A HOKAGE’S JOURNEY-VOLUME 2
BOOK 5 – A HOKAGE’S JOURNEY-VOLUME 3
BOOK 6 – A NINJA’S FURY
BOOK 7 – A HOKAGE’S JOURNEY-VOLUME 4
BOOK 8 – A HOKAGE’S RULE
BOOK 9 – A HOKAGE’S DESTINY
BOOK 10 – A HOKAGE’S LEGEND
BOOK 11 – A HOKAGE’S END
BOOK 12 – A HOKAGE’S MISSION


In order and everything. ^_^ It's a great series, many have read it and enjoyed it. So if you ever got any free time of your own, stop by and read a few chapters. ^_^

Thanks! I don't really have the energy right now, I'm 1/2 asleep right now. I have a concert with my rock band at this camp thing tommorow. Resting up pretty soon. Thanks for reading! I'll read it when I don't have only one eye open.

Not much. I have no self-confidence as usual. If you think I draw well, wait till you see how I write. You should read some of my fanfictions.

Thanks for the comments!
Honestly, I despise almost every story that I've posted on this website...
For some better stuff, I have an account on fanfiction.net, where my username is threat2society.
Thanks again. ^-^

Wait, I think I've read some of your work! It was pretty good. The problem with the one here was that it was too short and fast. It was almost pure dialouge. I got bored actually. I said it was good, because, well, it was a good story! There is a few people that draw purely amazing, some people that draw great, some people that imitate their characters well, and some people who only comment and watch.

I also post on Fanfiction.net, no one comments on me though (I'd prefer being hated to being ignored!), so I'm here more often.

do you like horror and gore, is it in your stories!? I love horror and gore.

Horror: No (I'm not good at horror, I'm trying to go for that feel with my Zim story though)
Gore: Yesish (I do have gore sometimes. I don't try for it. Though, when I do use it, it's bad. For example, one time, my OC's dark entity consumed the flesh of a guy that was trying to take blood from his self mutilated skin ripped off arms from his nightmares, and threw apart strands of muscle and organs into a bloody pulp of destruction, and he was alive to feel the pain, before he completely consumed his body, the man screaming the entire time.)

WOW THATS AWSOME!!!! i do almost anything but as a writer the number one important thing a writer always knows is that write what you know. or it will not be good.

You're probably right on that. Though I haven't really tried horror before, that's why I said it sucked. If I did suck at it, I'd really not go for that feel.

ummmm yha i draw pretty much what i want, thanks for the comment.

Okay. Thanks for the comment here!

kool

Were all fangirls i suppose.

there is a male here that youll think is cool. his name is badartist hes very cool.

so how are you

yeah i like drawing realism to.mostly house/hugh laurie or martin short

Pretty good. I mostly try for my own style, which is represented well in my featured art. The clicked on one sucks though, it made the image way too large. I mostly write though, and in that, I write melodramaticly. Well, I'll check that guy's profile out. Peace

Aidan Aenima, AKA: Power9x

hey you like music

Who doesn't?

Well, I know i'm allowed to draw a picture and put lyrics on it. It's loads of people who have done that XD but i'll delete the other picture now

Random hello.
Lol nice profile!

hey whats up

hey welcome to FAC. and want be friends

Sure!