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Volorios on August 17, 2008, 12:34:31 AM
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yep, you did tell me.
Volorios on August 17, 2008, 12:31:31 AM
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Volorios on August 17, 2008, 12:28:09 AM
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Volorios on August 17, 2008, 12:24:13 AM
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Volorios on August 17, 2008, 12:18:12 AM
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I met another person
She came silently,
i always knew her existence,
she just scared me,
but...not anymore now,
her breath seemed so cold,
but really resting, (Is that the word?),
she promise to take all my problems,
all my sadness,
to be mine...forever.
She wore a black robe,
she showed me her hand...
i looked at her...
it was a skull,
maybe u know her,
it was the death!
I just rewrote it and put the changes back. It's a sad poem but I like it. For the most part, it was proper english. You're getting better at this language.
She came silently,
i always knew her existence,
she just scared me,
but...not anymore now,
her breath seemed so cold,
but really resting, (Is that the word?),
she promise to take all my problems,
all my sadness,
to be mine...forever.
She wore a black robe,
she showed me her hand...
i looked at her...
it was a skull,
maybe u know her,
it was the death!
I just rewrote it and put the changes back. It's a sad poem but I like it. For the most part, it was proper english. You're getting better at this language.
Equinoxus on August 17, 2008, 12:17:19 AM
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Volorios on August 17, 2008, 12:06:52 AM
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Volorios on August 17, 2008, 12:04:34 AM
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