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well u did too

Experimental Danny Chp.1
In a lab up in the far mountain a scientist ad captured on of the Alternate Universe Danny Phantoms he had changed him to be better stronger faster built to last longer than life itself.But the problem was a rebellious teenager poor Danny didnt want anymore expermints performed upon his body.He had had it the scientist has peeled away down to danny's last nerve!He was being held down by two retraintss two tubes were on his back that trave;ed over his shoulders into his breathing chest a metal patch was on his side a mechanical eye was on the left side of his face both his feet were mechanical but his whole right leg was metal and his left hand was mechanical aswell.the scientist walked in the room and he said "its time for your daily check up daniel..... " danny didnt like the sound of that at all he knew it meant more experiments upon his suffering soul.He cried out Physically and mentally to be free his body was sore from so many mechanical exirments he wished he would jus never wake up soemtimes he cried out loud for help to be free hed been stuck there ever since he was 4 10 years he spent alone in the deep dark lab heknew he seemed like a mechanical misaph if others had ever seen him while he was out.He couldnt take it anymore he was going to break free if it was the last thing he did of his most likely verlasting life his saddened soul made the decision to break free one day he would indeed get his wish.The sun rose he was in the lab sitting on his bed which was a hard metal teable which gave him sharp pains in the back. "are you ready......?" said the scientist with his tools ready for more experiments to go danny answered him merely with a mumble of disapproval the scientist said "what did you say young man?!" danny replied after about 2 or 3 day's of silence "Im not letting you pull anymore of your screwed up experiments on me!!!" he shouted.He began breaking his restraints to the table "I wont stand for this anymore!" he shouted.The restraints shattered freeing himself from the table he headed for the window but the scientist sent two of his Dobermans to grab ahold of his human leg before he could get away.To his dismay he had forgotten danny's strength and his remaining ghost powers danny phased through the dobermans mouths and shot at them with his ghost ray near killing them. "i am a slave no longer!!!!" danny yelled to the heavens as he flew away "freedom is sweet!" he said happily as he flew away from the mountain he had so desired to be free from after 10 years of being trapped inside a cold lab.He was finally free from the torment but what adventure lie ahead for this innocent 14 year old who hadnt been free for 1 years of he harsh enviroments that were in the lab?He had not known what adventuure he created for himself when he first tasted fresh air.
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thats the way its supposed to be its not the normal roleplay way

but there is no spacing it makes it hard to read

you mean

like this

because i cna fix it that way if it makes it easier

for you

thanks

ok the first few chapters are spaced

cool^^

((

Fox Vs Crow For The Love Of A Cat^^

Polly was brushing her hair

and getting ready for a date

with the former villain The Big Cheese.

When all of the sudden a surikun came out of nowhere and broke the light in her room.

She gasped as she felt felt feathered hands bound and gag her.

Then they were gone but a note was left in her place.


Big Cheese had arrived and noticed the door was off it's hinges.

he was worried so he ran up to Polly's room.

He found a flashlight since it was to dark to see.

and he found the note.

It said To Big Cheese you traitor if you ever want a chance to be with Your beloved Pizza Cat Polly again.

you will have to beat me in a martial arts match.

with no weapons.

but only our bodies minds.

and the will of the warrior.

You have one week to train.

And build up whatever strength you can muster up.

That is if you can which I highly doubt.

And we will meet at the warehouse that I am mentioning in The note with the address too.

Your Former Henchcrow Bad Bird.

PS I may kill Polly but perhaps I will keep her for myself.

She is one hot looking cat after all.

PPS Ha Ha Ha Loser.

The Big Cheese fumed but did not explode.

Instead he dropped to his knees and yelled "NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Polly!"

"I have to save her even if it costs me my life

I will kill Bad Bird If I have to!

but I hope it won't come to that"

he decided to go to Guru Lu for the same special training that Speedy had done before.

Guru Lu was skeptical cuse Cheese was a former villain but he did not wish to see Polly hurt by bad Bird.

So The ridiculous vigorous training came and went and Cheese was no stronger in body and mind with the will of a warrior.

(I left out the training cuse I don't recall the training Speedy did from the series lol^^)

He yelled "Bad Bird I will not rest until I have freed Polly From your evil talons."

Guru Lu thought oh great not Another Speedy.

then he went to hit the booze that he frequently gulps down.

Cheese ran very fast now cuse his speed had increased.

As well as his physique.

He was Shirtless with his muscles showing

and wore the black pants part of his gie.

He entered a Warehouse where Bad Bird Mentioned in the letter to meet at.

A Bunch of saw blades appeared out of nowhere and cheese easily dodged each one and landed in another room.

and fell through a trap door but grabbed the floor.

and he did a slight front somersault flip to right him self back on the floor to proceed to the next area.

Darn Bad Bird thought from the control room he must have gotten training from Guru Lu to get so good so quickly.

"I will have to take care of him myself."

Heh Heh Heh this should be more fun than I thought.

"Sit tight my pretty kitty"

He removed her gag but not her ropes in order to kiss her.

Polly did not like this and after the kiss she spat in his face.

"You little bleep! He said "You will be mine or you will die by my hands"

She said "Bad Bird untie me right now so I can kick your butt and if I don't do it He will."

"He may have gotten stronger but he will never beat me."

Big Cheese entered the room and yelled "WE will see Bad Bird".

"Not so fast Fox Boy" then a hard steel wall came down in front of the fox.

He punched kicked and grabbed at the wall

But to no avail.

He remembered a technique he learned to turn steal into wood

Well Not exactly but it was part of a state of mind over body.

He did a yoga stance the lotus and breathed in and out with eyes closed then got up opened his eyes and tried again

He tore part of the wall with his hands and kicked part of It away with one of his feet.

Pretty soon the wall came tumbling down leaving Bad Bird Face to Face with Big Cheese.

Bad Bird yelled "Bring It!" he was shirtless and wearing black pants too.

Polly yelled "Help!"

Big Cheese yelled "I'll save you Polly!"


Big Cheese made an unexpected move.

and he was so fas.

It was almost as he had telaported to Polly, and untied her.

Then he used a device to enclose her in a force field.

Big Cheese said "It's you and me Bad Bird.

And I do not want Polly to get hurt by our clashing here today."

"You've gone soft Big Cheese there is no way you can beat me with those ways of thinking."


Then They both went into fighting stances

Big Cheese side swept Bad Bird With his left leg.

And then he threw a punch at him with his right fist

Bad Bird flew up to avoid the kick.

Then he flew to the side to avoid the punch



But then he Noticed Big Cheese was now above him.

So he quickly moved away from a pile driver type move.

Not bad Cheesy you've improved from a nothing to a slight something.

Then Big Cheese noticed some surikun being thrown but not by Bad Bird.

"What the" they both said as they got out of the path of the surikun.

It was Jerry Atric who said "That's enough Bad Bird.
You need to let your jealousy go

So what if Big Cheese has reformed it's his choice.

You need to stick to your honer code and let bygones be bygones."

"I know but he gets a girl and I lose mine."

"But Birdie" a voice cried out you didn't lose me.

"I just needed time to think.

And now I think we should get married and have kids together.

I was a bit nervous about it at first.

But now I'm all for it."

"Carla you've come back to me I'm sorry honey.

I should have remained good bird no matter what.

Now I have dishonored myself."

Jerry Actric said Well you can redeem your self by apologizing to those you have wronged.

He knelt down and said "I hope you all forgive my humble heartfelt apologies.

I will now remain good bird once again and for always more after that."


"WE Forgive you."

"Oh and Cheese can ya let me out of this bubble please."

"Oh heh sorry Polly."

Then He pressed the device and the force field disappeared.

She ran to him and kissed him.

And Carla ran to and kissed Good Bird too.

Jerry Atric said "Ahh now that this is over.
I can retire to the Ninja Crow Village"

all of you visit when you can.

"Will Do Jer" Big Cheese said "Will do."

Big Cheese said "Polly will you marry me?

"Of course I will after that heroic rescue how can I refuse."

Bad Bird Said "I know I did some awful things.

But I hope you will still want to marry me Carla."

"I forgive you Birdie you were just confused and angry."

"And do you forgive me for kissing Polly?"


She and Big Cheese Said said "you did what!?"

They said "Well this hot head needs a dip so they threw him In the vat of kitty litter"

"We still forgive ya Bad Bird but you needed a sort of Punishment."

Then they laughed and helped Good Bird out of the Kitty Litter.

"Phew" they went "ya need a shower "Birdbrain."

After you get unstinkafied we will get some Pizza and tell the others the good news that all the fighting is over.

I guess I deserved this he thought hopefully I can make it up to Carla One The Wedding night.

The End

sort of like this^^

bad birdy!

LOL^^

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-695276.html

Moondance^^

cooleio

thanks

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-695067.html

Choboco

cute

kay

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-694884.html

Wilt and BLOO

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-695275.html

LOl heh

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-695068.html

LOL

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-694886.html

Gir Bloo and Mac^^

did you see the links i sent

yes they were all cool!Im working on ANOTHER story XD

i did not hear back from you so i did not know

why is your story all a jumble of words i can't read it

there is no spacing at all what happened

there is in it when i read it O_O

not on the Danny experiment one chapter one is all a jumbles for me

they are jumbled but when i read there are spaces O_O

weird

there is in it when i read it O_O