toxic_dreamer

whoa ur a really great artist!! i love all the zim art and u colored them very well! wonderful job overall ^_^b thumbs up

*winks* i hope we can chat some time! It will be great!

Sorry it took so long to post, but my dad's computer was being rude and not letting me look at anybody's profiles - even my own! So I had to wait until Monday.

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You'll love this new chapter! It takes a different look at what happened back in 2250. And it has a bit of humor!! GAH!! NOOOO!!! But it's still serious. And interesting.

Okay, I'll stop before I make you too interested. No, really, it's boring. ^^;

I MOOST say this before my head blows up! It's not going to be as easy as "I'll tell you what I did, so here it is!" with Jiss and Zim. No. Knowing me, you should have predicted that! It's gonna be much more complicated. And --GUH!! Um, this book's gonna be pretty much flashbacks. Sorry. ^^;; heh heh... but there's a lotta good information -and twists- in flashbacks. Plus I take a lick at humor in this book! ^_^ But not stupid, not-worthy-of-DCTR-humor like Chapter 4 in the last book. *cough* *cough*

AAAAAAnyway, normally I wouldn't be able to say anything about what happens in the story -considering it writes itself and I'm just the soul with the hands to type it- but I'm almost done with this one and now I just have to go back and finish chapter 10 and then post 'em.

My sorries for keeping you in suspence. Oh, and just wait until book 4!!

You: OH GOD NOT ANOTHER ONE!!!

Me: Oh yeah. Another one.

People: WHHHYYYYYYY?!!!!

Me: 'Cause I felt like it, and the story don't end at book 3!!

Danny Phantom: Why don't you write a story about me? Huh?

Me: 'Cause I tried that and it turned out horrible. Sorry. :(

Lord Of The Cheese Bits: WHEN WILL YOU MAKE YOU ANIMATED SERIES ABOUT LIN?!!

Me: Uhhh, when I can animate? Guh. Anyway, glad to see you commented . . . I was waiting for dat! XP And I'll post the third chapter tomorrow. And then I'll wait until Friday to post another, and then post the rest on Fridays. Sound good? Just gimme a post-it on my profile and I'll know your eyes have looked at this. Heh.

And so, ending with a dramatic conclusion like all of my chapters...
l8er!! *snicker*

Just wanted to tell ya that chapter two's up.... finally. I don't know why I waited so long to post it. Sorry. ^^;;;

Anyway, it's up, and hopefully chapter 3 will be up next week. L8ter

"Prepare your brain, filthy beast of meat and hair... the magical love adventure begins NOW!!!"

XP Now sure if you got that one, but here's the best news ever: DCTR3!!!! First chapter!!!! XD I'm so excited - I can't believe this is happening!! Anyway, I'm looking forward to another book with comments from you! *hugs* Can't wait to hear what you think of this new NEW twist!! *Gasp* Yes, another twist ALREADY. You should have been expecting that from me.

Love and peace and some of that other junk! L8r!

As my absolute favorite commentor on DCTR1 & 2, I would like to ask you a question about the finalized version. I'd perfer an e-mail responce, if you can, but a profile comment will do just fine.

You remember chapter 4 in DCTR2? With Johnny? I wrote that when I was at my very worst writing ability, so I think it completely sucks. Do you agree? Does it not have that "Down Came The Rain"-ee feel? Because if I'm right about it being horrible and out of place, I'm just going to delete it and add some stuff onto chapter 5. Not here, of course.... on deviantART, where I'll submit the completely perfected version.

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In fact, that whole "Heaven" segment just sucked. Why did I write that to begin with? IT MAKES NO SENSE!!!!

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Then again, it WAS all a dream of some sort... though Zim still thinks part of it was real. Oh, choices, choices...

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Maybe I should just delete the entire second book. *gasp* No, I'm kidding. I like the second half of it, but the first half... *sigh*. I don't know what happened. I need to rewrite the entire first half of book 2, in my own opinion. Then again, I'm my biggest critik... and I can't spell that word...

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Oh, please, lord of the nice comments... please give me some insight on my writing. And chapter 4... that evil chapter. Should I rewrite the Heaven sequence?

OH I KNOW!!! I'll make the entire thing into a one-page comedy called "Down Came The... Whatever". It's ingenius!!! XP Again, I kid. Drama's not comedy. It's just not.

i'm not into zim, but you draw it real well!!! keep it up!!!!!!

You'll never believe what I've been up to!!!!! GUESS!!!!! Okay, no, I'll just tell you. I just COMPLETED DCTR2, with a surprise twist at the end. However, the story is nowhere near over. OH NO. I'll be writing a... THIRD!!!! (dun dun dun!)

So get ready for another wild ride on the insanity roller coaster! AND TRIPLE-THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS!!!!!

L8ter, GalaxyDancer