A new Teen Titan?!? by Diamond

A new Teen Titan?!?

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I work real hade I hope you guys likes it^.^

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Category Cartoons » Teen Titans
Date Submitted January 27, 2005, 8:50:52 PM
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little_romy_fan on April 15, 2006, 6:11:47 AM

aw, i think its cute. and she has a dog, u cant go rong with a dog. nd i like the name. `bluestar`. has a nice ring 2 it.

Trigons_apprentice on February 11, 2006, 7:53:08 AM

You got some good talent, but with a little more pratice,you can do better.I'm sorry if I'm being offensive to you.

DarkKrystal on January 27, 2006, 4:26:27 AM

Wow, um... I'm gonna guess your age now.

I'd say eightish. My nine-year-old cousin draws better than that.

No, I'm NOT sorry for what I said, because it's the truth. It's harsh, but it's the truth.

Practice and come back.

vampire_girl_666 on January 23, 2006, 12:51:06 PM

it's cute but, what does she do?

bloo180 on January 10, 2006, 8:35:08 AM

WOW!!! COOL!!! Does she have a boy friend,or some one she likes? ^_^

Light_Ki on November 9, 2005, 8:14:52 AM

ummm...how old are you? just wondering.
You actually draw better than i do, and im 17. thats why I write stories. :D
I'm thinking you should too.

Luke_Lombard on October 26, 2005, 1:43:05 PM

BB fan, u have made a good point. i didnt know that i could just put notebook doodles up as fanart! now u shall all witness my titan drawings! YAY

BBfan on October 14, 2005, 11:38:19 PM

now HOW old are you?

teen_titan on July 27, 2005, 5:34:04 AM

yeah i agree w/ silverfox....the hands are a bit small....and (i kno i sound like an art teacher) but to get protions right put the eyes in the middle of the head....if you look at yourself in the mirrior, or another pic normally the eyes are always in the middle of the head.

silverfox on March 26, 2005, 11:56:04 AM

I s'pose she's alright, but yes, she is a ripoff of Starfire. Titans Tower is definitely off, and her head seems pretty flat. Overall not terrible, but not the best I've seen.

I'm being very blunt here because a lot of people only say the good stuf about it, but I'm going to tell you the stuff that needs work:

There needs to be a horizon. Any art teacher will tell you that on every picture, a horizon needs to be present, because otherwise it just kinda messes the veiwer's eyes up... The sun just kinda seems to melt into the water.
Her face is good, really, and I wouldn't change a whole lot about it, only that her nose... erm... I dunno, just doesn't seem... right.
Her entire head is kinda big, and she doesn't have ears... Her bangs are fine, but I'm thinkin' there need to be hair on the sides of her face, too.
Her body is pretty out of proportion. Her arms need to be longer, she kinda needs more of a waist, and unless she's younger than 12(which I kinda doubt she is, but I dunno) she could use some more curves. I'm not talkin' HUGE curves, but some.
Her feet are nice, and her legs are pretty good, but be sure to keeps joints and how the leg bends in mind for future drawings.
I like the puppy, it's cute. I can't draw dogs for bacon(I'm pretty much limited to cats, foxes, octupi[since they're a blob with tentacles], rabbits, and the occasional hampster), so it's pretty good. The umbrella seems a bit-- off-- but is alright nonetheless.

Well, there's my critique. I don't want to come across as mean or degrading, more as constructive?...

I think you do have some big potential in you, so keep practicing and I know you'll get very good in a hurry.

^^

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