A cool as Dragon
A cool as Dragon
A cool as Dragon by Marik_and_Bakura_lover
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This is a dragon. Ignore the back leg that's further back, it started as a dif pose and then changed at the last second, so it's too sall, but ignore that.. Animel pointed out afew stuff, but the only one that i agree with is the wings leather, there should be some wrinkles of some sort to show that they aren't fully out stretched, they look tight as right now.<br />
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Ani says- It's awesome, the wings just need wrinkles. I' so jealous of my little christy :B And i am beautiful and sexy, i ake peoples ears bleed when i sing :D
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Ani says- It's awesome, the wings just need wrinkles. I' so jealous of my little christy :B And i am beautiful and sexy, i ake peoples ears bleed when i sing :D
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ChibiSess on March 30, 2005, 1:32:34 PM
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Dark_Phoenix on January 24, 2005, 1:13:30 PM
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sooty on October 23, 2004, 2:11:47 AM
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Lucky-Dragon24 on August 6, 2004, 11:42:59 PM
MoOoOoOo on July 31, 2004, 7:06:57 AM
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Marik_and_Bakura_lover on July 27, 2004, 8:07:08 AM
A_dork_you_dont_know on July 25, 2004, 8:59:43 AM
animel on July 1, 2004, 1:55:23 PM
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Stratadrake did an awesome comment, i love it when people are full honest :D I've never had one, cos, if they pointed out every mistake in my art it's take days to type out .-. -ahem-<br />
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Awesome, stratadrake pretty much covered everything, awesome as Christy, i'm so evvious, but. I have tin foil! :D -runs away luaghing hysterically-
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Awesome, stratadrake pretty much covered everything, awesome as Christy, i'm so evvious, but. I have tin foil! :D -runs away luaghing hysterically-
0ash0 on June 29, 2004, 11:59:56 AM
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Stratadrake on June 29, 2004, 5:35:06 AM
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What should I start with, the things I like about it or the things I don't?<br />
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Hmm, I'll pick the latter first today. (Prepare yourself!)<br />
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The dragon's wings seem a little too short from shoulder to palm, giving me the impression that either this is a small dragon, or he(?)'s not built for much flying (mostly gliding/diving).<br />
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Also, the dragon's right wing is bent at a peculiarly odd angle compared to his left wing -- wings are generally held at symmetrical angles. And the dragon's cranium looka a bit big. Maybe it's because of hos it's decorated, but that blank space between the eyes and crest-horns looks a little large for my tastes.<br />
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But don't let those things get ya down, because you got yourself a nicely proportioned dragon there! The body's lithe (that's how I like them, the neck and tail aren't super long, and I think you actually did a good job on all four legs. Is that a dewclaw on the back of its left hind leg? You may want to make it the same size as the other claws.<br />
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All in all not bad. Many dragons are rendered as either really round/fat or really serpentine, two extremes I don't care for, and this one's somewhere in the middle ground, just how I like them.
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Hmm, I'll pick the latter first today. (Prepare yourself!)<br />
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The dragon's wings seem a little too short from shoulder to palm, giving me the impression that either this is a small dragon, or he(?)'s not built for much flying (mostly gliding/diving).<br />
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Also, the dragon's right wing is bent at a peculiarly odd angle compared to his left wing -- wings are generally held at symmetrical angles. And the dragon's cranium looka a bit big. Maybe it's because of hos it's decorated, but that blank space between the eyes and crest-horns looks a little large for my tastes.<br />
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But don't let those things get ya down, because you got yourself a nicely proportioned dragon there! The body's lithe (that's how I like them, the neck and tail aren't super long, and I think you actually did a good job on all four legs. Is that a dewclaw on the back of its left hind leg? You may want to make it the same size as the other claws.<br />
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All in all not bad. Many dragons are rendered as either really round/fat or really serpentine, two extremes I don't care for, and this one's somewhere in the middle ground, just how I like them.
It catches your eye from the thumbnail view, aswell. The big feet and horns are what really attracted me to this pic!
*favs*
And yea, I agree with what StrataDrake said about the one wing. That was the only thing I spotted though! ^_^