Temari
Temari
Temari by PhoenixBird
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Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Characters & Fanart » Temari
Date Submitted
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Favorites... 14
Vote Score 9
Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Characters & Fanart » Temari
Date Submitted
Views 2218
Favorites... 14
Vote Score 9
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14
Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken a lot
Reference Naruto series
Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken a lot
Reference Naruto series
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Tuntun422 on June 27, 2008, 5:35:05 AM
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SunaNoFara on December 20, 2007, 10:34:29 AM
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Okay, I guess I'm here to make some (hopefully helpful) critique. >_<
I must say you've got some pretty awesome pics up. ^^ There's something that has me say, "Holy crow! This is awesome!" But there's something that makes me think you could have done better. I'm jealous of how well you draw poses. ^^ I love it. You do really well with photoshop colors and shading, too.
The only thing that looks a little weird in this picture is Temari's face. A suggestion I might make there is to make it a little narrower. Temari's not very plump, so yeah. Her nose is strange too. once it slants down from the eyes it stays narrow and doesn't broaden outward a little and I'm sorry to say it looks a little deformed. You might want to try curving the eyebrows more to fit her eyes, so it looks more natural.
I love the little Shikamaru doll she's holding in her hands^^ I think that's the best part of the picture. It looks so real. You had me convinced that it was real. ^^
I'm sorry I'm not very experienced in the critique area. But if you're ever in need I know that Trinity_Fire gives some great advice. :D she's much better than I am (and probably more experienced /\_/\') You are an amazing artist, and I really admire your work. ^^
I must say you've got some pretty awesome pics up. ^^ There's something that has me say, "Holy crow! This is awesome!" But there's something that makes me think you could have done better. I'm jealous of how well you draw poses. ^^ I love it. You do really well with photoshop colors and shading, too.
The only thing that looks a little weird in this picture is Temari's face. A suggestion I might make there is to make it a little narrower. Temari's not very plump, so yeah. Her nose is strange too. once it slants down from the eyes it stays narrow and doesn't broaden outward a little and I'm sorry to say it looks a little deformed. You might want to try curving the eyebrows more to fit her eyes, so it looks more natural.
I love the little Shikamaru doll she's holding in her hands^^ I think that's the best part of the picture. It looks so real. You had me convinced that it was real. ^^
I'm sorry I'm not very experienced in the critique area. But if you're ever in need I know that Trinity_Fire gives some great advice. :D she's much better than I am (and probably more experienced /\_/\') You are an amazing artist, and I really admire your work. ^^
SakuraBlossom on December 7, 2007, 4:52:47 AM
Chikacookie on December 6, 2007, 5:01:55 AM
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meepedpeep on September 7, 2007, 10:26:37 AM
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SilverSea0413 on June 11, 2007, 3:39:39 AM
Kwazi on May 10, 2007, 3:32:21 PM
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demoninuyashachick on May 9, 2007, 2:56:10 AM
sasukeXsakuraforever on May 6, 2007, 11:35:20 AM
GeneralOnion on May 6, 2007, 9:06:24 AM
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Your talent art art is unbelivable