Really Really Cute
Really Really Cute
Really Really Cute by TheGameArtCritic
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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Hybrids
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Views 14622
Favorites... 2
Vote Score 5
Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Hybrids
Date Submitted
Views 14622
Favorites... 2
Vote Score 5
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Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 2 hours (i hate beds)
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Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 2 hours (i hate beds)
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mechadragon13 on October 23, 2008, 9:25:22 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 23, 2008, 12:41:39 PM
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 6:48:42 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 8:38:58 AM
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:13:02 PM
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Skye: *facepalm* *thinking* looks like she hasnt changed XP
Me: chill, twilly.
Lightning: you seriously need to cool it.....
Twilight: ..... *deep breath*
Me: it takes lightning to get her to chill.... XD
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 12:32:39 PM
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mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:56:50 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:00:22 PM
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mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:00:16 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 8:04:11 AM
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Me: awwww... she blushezzz....
Skye: ugh, leave me alone..... this is exactly why i didnt wanna tell anyone!! GAWD.
Me: reminds me of the Mobius: 25 Years Later comic when lara su (knux's kid) and riki-lee (i have no idea who's kid totally spilled that salma (espio's kid) had been going out with rutan (lien-da's kid) XDDDDD it was FUNNY..... and in the one before that, lien-da had gone ballistic when she found out. apparently neither of them told their parents XDDDDD
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 10:41:25 AM
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Luminos: *IS SUDDENLY RIGHT BEHIND ME* i DON'T...LIKE...BEING...HIT WITH BASEBALL BATS!
Me: hiiiii Lumieeee.... heheh...
Luminos: Critic! You are guilty for child abuse!
Me: aww... dang...
Policemen: RAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH *foam* *takes me away*
Me: DON'T WORRY GAIS!!!! I'LL BUST OUT EASILY FROM TELEPORTATIOOOOOOON!!!
mechadragon13 on October 27, 2008, 2:23:27 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 27, 2008, 9:00:19 AM
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Rosette: *snicker*
meanwhile
Policeman: you are guilty of CHILD ABUSE!
Me: but i didn't MURDER hiiimmmm....
Policeman: BUT YOU COMMITED CHILD ABUSE.
Me: well i -
Policeman: CHILD ABUSE!!!
Me: YOU BOTHER ME!!! AND THIS PLACE BOTHERS ME!!! RAAAAAAAAHHH!!! *turns everyone into pre-evolved rabbits, then teleports back*
mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 7:51:22 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 8:49:34 AM
mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 9:04:28 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 9:40:46 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 3:09:47 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 9:09:09 AM
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 10:20:55 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 10:30:43 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 11:13:04 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 11:41:49 AM
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 11:58:21 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 12:10:46 PM
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meanwhile
PE Wolf: *leaps out of the brush with a snarl, baring it's gleaming yellow fangs, ready to sink them into the warm flesh of a mobian*
Luminos: SKYE! *irises NOT EYES turn red, and in the same time it takes someone to blink, he carries skye out of the way*
PE Wolf: *smashes his head into a tree, then turns around and snarls*
Luminos: *growls scary-low back at the wolf, his fur bristling. His hands turn into Vorace claws*
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 12:23:42 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 12:39:06 PM
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meanwhile
PE Wolf: *charges at Luminos*
Luminos: *catches the wolf easily, and throws it to the side. He snarls at it with a scary double-voice, but still seems to have just enough control over himself to know that he should be protecting Skye, and not hurting her*
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 12:45:14 PM
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MEANWHILE!
Me: lol she's just like twilly.... skye and her mental arguments...... rawr
TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 1:46:26 PM
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 2:19:02 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 2:22:43 PM
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 12:33:16 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 11, 2008, 3:34:42 PM
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G. Eclipse: *GUILT from the "inherited" part*
mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 11:10:22 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 12, 2008, 11:39:21 AM
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Me: Yes. Mikenno. Also, it's not too bad for Luminos because he doesn't remember anything that happened during his transformation. It would be just like being normal one second, then waking up somewhere else with aching arms, legs, and a really bad headache.
Luminos: *stirs a little* nnnnngh...
mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 11:51:33 AM
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Twilight: eclipse........
Lightning: *goes to put a hand on eclipse's shoulder but hesitates because he's not sure if it will go through him or not. then he does it anyway* eclipse.... you need to understand that not everything is your fault.
TheGameArtCritic on October 12, 2008, 12:16:03 PM
mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 12:19:53 PM
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mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 11:06:11 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 17, 2008, 3:19:01 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 19, 2008, 9:26:01 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 7:17:02 AM
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Me: yeah, knux. he was unfortunately in the vicinity when he heard mostrous roars from her house. he went over there to check it out and nearly got his head bitten off. him and sonic both!! you'll see when i get to the fanfic...
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 8:48:30 AM
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 8:50:57 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 9:11:00 AM
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 9:41:26 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 10:17:38 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 10:05:37 AM
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meanwhile
Me: I fear Luminos may become more like his father, and grandfather if he lets himself get eaten away by guilt for any murders he may commit in the future.
Alt. Dimension Eclipse (we'll see more of him later): but murder is FUN!
Me: *pushes him off Twilly*
mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:13:22 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 11:16:35 AM
mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:33:39 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 5, 2008, 10:05:01 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 11:36:06 AM
mechadragon13 on October 6, 2008, 7:25:23 AM
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Twilight: *spindashes into fira, knocking her into blizagga, which in turn, knocks her out from under condemned* you're welcome!!!
Fira+Blizagga: *are now in a pile*
Fira: grrrr... *is trying to get blizagga to stop stabbing her* STOP THE FUR SPIKING!!
Blizagga: so-ree. *unspikes*
twilight: seriously, these two are REALLY uncoordinated. even heard of teamwork?
TheGameArtCritic on October 6, 2008, 8:38:31 AM
mechadragon13 on October 6, 2008, 8:41:43 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 6, 2008, 9:03:30 AM
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 3:26:45 AM
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Fira: you did NOT.
Blizagga: you have asked for your destruction, condemned!!!
Fira: we will not let you escape with your nonexistent life.
Twilight: what?? summoned who?? who's vorace?? whats going on???
Me: ...umm.... you know luminos?
twilight: yeaaaah...... what about him?
Me: umm.... *voice cracks* critic?
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 9:56:04 AM
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Condemned: he's hear... *nasty laugh*
Luminos: *walks in like a zombie, eyes full of fear* i... i don't know why I'm here... why did i...?
Condemned: kekekeke... *eyes flash brighty*
Luminos: *yelps and holds his head in pain. His eyes suddenly glow red and bleed. His mouth dribbles blood as well. The blood is darker than any other's, and, when coming into contact with his body, turn into blue tenticals that crawl, and squirm up him*
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:22:19 AM
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Fira: oh it wasnt him, little one.
Blizagga: it was eclipse. it's his fault.
Fira: he passed the gene.
Blizagga: he is to blame.
Twilight: but it's still condemned's fault!! ITS STILL HIS FAULT!!!! *is tearing up, but doesnt notice in her rage* YOU'RE LYING!!!!
Fira: and if we are?
Blizagga: if you attack condemned, you will lose your only ally.
Fira: you will have to face four opponents with no help, rather than two opponents with two others aiding.
Blizagga: *singsong* confliiiiiict!
Me: ...damn them.
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 10:29:41 AM
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Luminos: AUUUUGH!!!! *becomes completelly engulfed in the tenticals. He makes a gurgling sound but then stops struggling and slumps over. The tenticals shapen into the form of Condemned's part-son, Vorace. His malicious eyes open. He snarls, a snarl only a wild animal could make. He is ready to kill*
Me: oh dang... O_O
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:39:10 AM
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Fira+Blizagga: *are laughing uncontrollably*
Me: .........she wont bring herself to ally with condemned after seeing this atrocity....... twilight is screwed. unless she can get the demons on her side, this'll end up being a three-way fight with twilight at a disadvantage...
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 10:51:51 AM
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Condemned: gahahahahaha!!
Me: I as well doubt that Condemned can keep such a wild animal at bay for long...
Condemned: geheh...heh... what?...
Vorace: *disappears and reappears attacking Condemned like crazy*
Condemned: GRAAA!!! WHAT??? NO! YOU WILL FOLLOW MY ORDERS!!!
Me: the beast cannot be tamed.
Vorace: *disappears and reappears on Condemned's left, then again, to his right, then infront, then behind, then finally the front again and slashes upwards, leaving a bloody mark on the demon*
Condemned: NRRAAARRRGH!!! *clutches at his chest*
Me: Vorace is a demon of speed. He can move so fast that it would SEEM like he's using chaos control, when really, he's become so fast that the naked eye cannot catch him.
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:12:10 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 11:16:28 AM
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:31:39 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 12:13:01 PM
mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 3:02:08 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 8:49:07 AM
mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 10:45:15 AM
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Me: oh my god..... she remembered the incident in eclipse's mind!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 2:39:44 PM
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Vorace and Condemned: *get sent out*
Vorace: *looks tired now that he's outside Twilight's mind. He falls over on the ground and becomes an unconcious Luminos. Blood stains the under-side of his eyes*
Condemned: *gets sent shooting out, and crashes into a wall*
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 8:08:09 AM
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Twilight: *reverts to the regular aquablue daemon form*
Me: she's regaining control!!! :D
INSIDE!!!
Twilight: *knocks the daemons to the floor, and pins them down like mufasa with the hyenas* grrrrrrrrrrr...
Fira: well, well, well. someone's all grown up!
Blizagga: pfft. please.
Twilight: *snarls at them, and they fall silent* you two have caused me nothing but misery for the last seven years of my LIFE!! you two deserve to get kicked out. to become shapeless spirits!! weak, powerless!!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 8:36:10 AM
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 9:19:39 AM
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Twilight: well?! do you have anything to say for yourselves??
Fira: .....
Blizagga: .... *sticks her tongue out at twilight*
Twilight: *snarls* do that again and you wont have a tongue.
Blizagga: *hastily pulls her tongue back in*
Fira: i say, we ARE feeling violent today.
Twilight: no, you think? so... what do you say? do you wanna get kicked?? or will you agree to stay quiet?!
Me: ooh, nice choices.
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 10:14:25 AM
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 10:30:38 AM
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Fira: what do you mean by stay quiet?
Twilight: what i mean is that you will not try to take me over again, you will not talk out loud in my head unless i ask for advice, and you will NOT look into my memories.
Blizagga: and what do we get in return eh?
Twilight: ...... you get to stay.
Me: oh no she didnt!!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 10:39:26 AM
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 10:51:30 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 11:00:15 AM
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 11:30:32 AM
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Twilight: *mimics his grin and accepts the hand*
Lightning: *yanks her up and pulls her into a tight hug*
Twilight: *returns the hug*
Lightning: youscared me there for a while you know?
Twilight: i know.... im sorry, light....
Me: lupe's gonna be disappointed. these two are the type f couple that if you see them walking down the street, you'd think they were just friends. they dont do couplesy things in public ^^
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 8:50:32 AM
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 11:01:48 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 11:26:05 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 11:58:41 AM
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twilight: yeah, it's freaky.
Skye: *POOF ZOOMS IN!!* hey, neo sent me to check on you guys! *sees twilight and lightning and has a whoa, this is awkward look on her face for a split second, then hides it* is everyone---- *gets cut off when she sees luminos* omigosh!! what happened to him?!
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 12:06:06 PM
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 12:22:32 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 12:24:18 PM
mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 9:29:40 AM
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Twilight: *eart twitches, as if she had heard critic*
MIND!!!
Twilight: *ear twitches* huh....?
Fira: weakling. *heals the hole in her body, then starts to circle around condemned*
Blizagga: RAGH! *is stabbed* heheheheheh..... *freezes the tentacle in place, making it impossible to unattatch from her* looks like the little demon is stuck. poor him. *laughs maniacally, then grabs the tentacle and tugs it hard, pulling eclipse-condemned towards her outstretched talons*
TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 9:42:16 AM
mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 10:27:21 AM
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Fira: *still pacing around him, her paws start to glow with red flames*
Twilight: *thinking* i have to do something..... i HAVE to... but i cant fight both condemned and the daemons without killing myself!! what do i do? what do i do???
TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 1:10:47 PM
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Condemned: *shoots a huge energy blast at Fira like a hyperbeam on steroids*
Condemned-Eclipse: I'm not emo... it's just... dead people can't feel pain, can they?
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 2:35:10 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 5:21:08 AM
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 7:50:39 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 9:28:08 AM
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Condemned-Eclipse: AUUUGH!!! *bends forward, clutching his gut and grimacing. He falls to his knees, then promptly lands on his face. Blood leaks out of his mouth and he's unconcious*
Me: oh look what you did! You just created ANOTHER god-damned bad image for Twilly! Thanks a LOT, you daemon TRASH!
Condemned: *still on the ground, he looks at his counterpart-form* ahhh... i knew you were alwas the weaker half...
mechadragon13 on October 2, 2008, 3:16:53 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 2, 2008, 11:41:42 AM
mechadragon13 on October 2, 2008, 12:14:30 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 2, 2008, 1:12:36 PM
mechadragon13 on October 3, 2008, 8:11:18 AM
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Fira: *snarls right back*
Blizagga: *snarls as well*
Twilight: *taps the drum part on her leg, still humming the other guitar part*
MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: *hands clench into fists*
Me: she's zoning..... *gets excited*
TheGameArtCritic on October 3, 2008, 8:14:53 AM
mechadragon13 on October 3, 2008, 8:40:56 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 3, 2008, 8:48:01 AM
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 2:57:52 AM
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Fira: what the---- AGH!! *gets cut off as she flies i nice distance away*
Blizagga: *turns towards twilight, and growls* you... you DARE challenge us??
Twilight: nope. i dare to kick BOTH your asses!! >:D
Me: HECK YES!!!!! *is bouncing up and down in excitement*
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 3:10:55 AM
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 3:55:40 AM
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Fira: grrrrr..... *stands back up* you little brat.
twilight: is that the best you can come up with? ppft. three words for ya. PA. THE. TIC.
Blizagga: *dont push too hard, kid, or you'll get yourself in BIG trouble.
twilight; meh. i've been in worse ^^
Me: oh yeah, twilight ROCKS.
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:00:06 AM
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:15:57 AM
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Blizagga: *faces twilight* looks like it's you and me, twilly. heheheh. this'll be fun....
twilight: but you wont enjoy it as much as i will!!! *jumps into the air, right above blizagga*
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:18:17 AM
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:40:45 AM
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Fira: *ducks under condemned, and slashes at his belly*
Twilight: *pulls a spinball right into blizagga's head*
Blizagga: RRRRRRRRRARGH!! *manages to knock her off*
Twilight: *pulls out of the spinball and lands on her feet* heheh. i see why sonic likes that one.
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:43:59 AM
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 5:57:02 AM
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Fira; heheheh. getting tired, condemned?
Twilight: dontcha think thats a little hypocritical, fira? look at you! you're huffing and puffing more than the big bad wolf!! XD
Blizagga: nice one, twilly. *ice shards start stabbing out from the ground*
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 8:30:43 AM
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 9:33:02 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 9:39:40 AM
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 9:11:52 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 20, 2008, 9:18:39 AM
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Rosette: *follows me*
meanwhile
Lupe: *is right where i said he was*
Gun Shop Owner: HEY! Can't you read?! *points at the NO LOITERING sign*
Lupe: yeh. I can. I'm not loitering. I'm resting. Resting is still DOIN' something.
Gun Shop: grrr... I'm calling the cops... *walks back inside*
Lupe: just try it, boy... heheh... *pats his schimitars*
Condemned: *zips up right in front of Lupe* YOU!!!! YOU ARE WHO I NEED!!!!
Lupe: AH!!! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU?????
Condemned: that's not important... right now, what's important is who YOU are.... MY NEW HOST...
Lupe: what are yeh babbling about? *pulls out one of his schimitars*
Condemned: you! My new host! Now be quiet! I must possess you!!
Lupe: POSSESS ME???? I DON'T THINK SO!!! *swipes at Condemned with his schimitar, only to feel it go right through the demon*
Condemned: ahahahaha!!!
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 9:43:13 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 20, 2008, 2:38:32 PM
mechadragon13 on September 21, 2008, 7:27:43 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 21, 2008, 8:20:45 AM
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Me: his first transformation...
Lupe: *falls down onto his hands and knees, and cries out in pain. His eyes are squeezed shut. His hands grow longer, and turn into Condemned's claws. Lupe's eyes then open. They are pure, glowing red* AAAARRRGH!!!! *his fur turns blue, and his snout is glued shut with skin, only to be ripped open again by long, sharp, ugly teeth. Finally, wings rip out of his back* agh... agh.... agh... huff... *closes his eyes again, this time more relaxed, and gets up like a zombie*
Me: L-lupe...?
Lupe: *in a creepy double voice, he laughs darkly* kahahaheh... *opens his eyes, which now bare dark blue irises* Lupe's not here...
Me: ohhhhhh crap...
mechadragon13 on September 22, 2008, 2:52:09 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 8:33:16 AM
mechadragon13 on September 22, 2008, 8:37:10 AM
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mechadragon13 on September 23, 2008, 11:54:27 AM
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mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 2:34:34 AM
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Lightning: ok thats it. *takes out a metal rod* i hoped i wouldnt have to use this.... *suddendly runs a current of electricity through one end of the rod so it comes out the other end, looking somewhat like a whip* get ready for this, condemned!! *starts to advance towards the fight*
Me: oh boy. last time he used the whip was when he fought terra... and that did NOT end well....
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 8:27:32 AM
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 8:52:33 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:07:22 AM
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 10:11:00 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:27:44 AM
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 10:41:50 AM
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mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 11:14:01 AM
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Me: O.O f***.
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 11:33:22 AM
mechadragon13 on September 25, 2008, 2:42:07 AM
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Daemon: heheheheh. *lazily dodges out of the way, smaking his head with the back of her paw* we are not like you, haine. this girl is our prison. if you killher, we will be more powerful than anything you have ever imagined. we were gods, haine, doomed to spend eternity trapped in a child. if you release us now, there will be no stopping us. we shall command this planet, we will command all!!
Me: umm...i think the daemons are officially a problem.
TheGameArtCritic on September 25, 2008, 11:05:11 AM
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Me: you damn leech.
Condemned:... and stop calling me "Haine"... Haine is no longer a part of me...
mechadragon13 on September 25, 2008, 12:01:33 PM
TheGameArtCritic on September 25, 2008, 2:31:28 PM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 2:44:06 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 9:51:59 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 10:15:33 AM
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Me: OH MY FREAKING GOD!!!!!!
Lupe: w...wha...? Oh god... i feel sick...
Me: LUPE!!!!! RUN!!!!!!!!!
Lupe: *gets caught in the pounce* AGH!!!!
Condemned: *possesses Twilly*
Me: D8
Condemned: *in Twilly's mind* I WILL RIP YOU FROM YOUR CONTROL...
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 10:29:03 AM
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Twilight: *mentally yelling in the daemon's mind* AGGHHH!!! WHAT'S HE DOING IN THERE???? GET HIM OUT!!! GET!! HIM!! OUT!!!!!
Me: oh, this is bad, she wont be able to take three demons in there!!! CRITIC WHAT DO WE DO????
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 10:46:03 AM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:01:38 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:07:27 AM
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Condemned: i do not WANT the weakling... i want YOU both to FEEL MY WRATH!!! *dodges the attacks, and devides himself into two seperate forms. One, his normal self, while the other, a much more deppressing and cruel form - Eclipse with Condemned's eyes and voice, representing his greatest host*
Me: oh he did something cruel to Twilly in there...
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:17:06 AM
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Fira: heheheheh. at least we aren't REJECTS.
Blizagga: too right.
Fira: *shoots a huge fireball at condemned*
Blizagga: *stomps the "ground" with her front paws and huge ice shards shoot out of the ground under condemned-eclipse*
Daemons: *outside, the daemon is laying motionless, unchanged from it's black furred form, but breathing heavily*
Me: this is not cool.
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:21:39 AM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:32:46 AM
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Fira: RAAAGH! *bites his shoulder and rips him off her, then she throws him a few feet away* grr... insolent pest...
Twilight: ohhhhh god. ohhh god...
Me: WELL I'LL SAY IT AGAIN CUZ IT'S THE TRUTH!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:41:52 AM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:54:54 AM
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Fira: *grins toothily, then jumps on condemned, biting at his throat*
Blizagga: *laughs maniacally, then jumps onto the tip of the ice shard, balancing carefully* *mockingly* aww... poor little condemned got stuck on an icicle......
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 12:10:28 PM
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Condemned: *snarls at Fira, but melts through her and into the ground*
Me: calm down Twilly... calm down...
mechadragon13 on September 27, 2008, 11:27:37 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 27, 2008, 1:32:28 PM
mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 3:22:39 AM
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Blizagga: what seems to be wrong, condemned? can you not fight with a hole in your belly? heheheheheh.
Twilight: ohhhhh......god..........
Me: i have no clue. there's only one way to know. wait. if she returns to her normal form, we've got twilly back. if she remains in the big black daemon thing. we lost her. maybe for good.
TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 8:59:22 AM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:22:21 PM
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mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 2:37:24 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 8:24:56 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:06:32 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:43:52 AM
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Me: so you WILL let him live TO make him suffer? *sad sigh* *sings*
What has come over me?
What madness taken hold of my heart?
To run away, the only answer
Pulling me away
To fall upon (the night)
The source of my recovery
Sweet shadow taking hold of the light
Another day has been devoured
Calling me away, bringing a question
Why
For saving me from all they've taken
Let my armor fall again
Giving me the strength to face them
Feeling it taking over
Now, on a path to take it all away
There can be no better way of knowing
In a world beyond controlling
Are you going to deny the savior
In front of your eyes?
Stare into the night
Power beyond containing
Are you going to remain a slave for
The rest of your life?
Give into the night
This self discovery
Redemption taking hold of my mind
A serenade of haunting voices
Calling me away
To feast upon (the night)
The source of my felicity
Dark maiden taking hold of my hand
Lead me away from hibernation
Strong and unafraid
Never a question why
For saving me from all they've taken
Let my armor fall again
Giving me the strength to face them
Feeling it taking over
Now, on a path to take it all away
There can be no better way of knowing
In a world beyond controlling
Are you going to deny the savior
In front of your eyes?
Stare into the night
Power beyond containing
Are you going to remain a slave for
The rest of your life?
Give into the night
Give into the night
In a world beyond controlling
Are you going to deny the savior
In front of your eyes
Stare into the night
Power beyond containing
Are you going to remain a slave for
The rest of your life
Give into the night
...
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 10:47:15 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:50:04 AM
mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 2:54:05 AM
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Me: both of you just calm down!!!!! *whacks both lightning and critic over the head* sheez. what he was trying to say was that they're gonna try to make his last days more comfortable........ as painless as possible......
TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 8:43:17 AM
mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 11:24:16 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 11:38:26 AM
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 2:31:23 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 6:08:51 AM
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 6:14:53 AM
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Fang: *is silent*
Lightning: .....he's gone.
Manny: oh NO!!! whyyy???? why does he have to go like that??? *starts crying* why did he just leave?? was it that mean-o condemned??? if i ever meet him again, im gonna.....gonna...... ohhhh......
Twilight: there there *gives manny a comforting hug, though she has started tearing up herself* .... its ok...... he's at peace now.....
Me: *thinking* i hope.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 9:05:40 AM
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Eclipse's Spirit: *is in a shimmering, white place. Huge gates are in front of him* w... where am i...?
Angel: you're in heaven. Woo-hoo. You didn't commit any sins.
Eclipse's S: but... but the murder...
Angel: - was not your fault. Corruption doesn't count. Are you ready to join us in Heaven?
Eclipse's S: i... don't know... I guess...
Angel: then, Eclipse, you need to forget everyone and everthing from your life on earth... you need to forget...
Eclipse's S: w-what? No!
Angel: please... just calm down, and forget, and you will be free and happy.
Eclipse: I can't forget them... they helped me so much...
Angel: forget... *disappears*
*a light shines brightly everywhere, blinding Eclipse. The voice echoes, but this time, more powerful and commanding*
FORGET.....
Eclipse: NO!
FORGET!!!....
Eclipse: I WON'T!!!!!
DO IT!!!
*the light shines brighter, turning everything pure white*
Eclipse: NOOOOOO!!!!!
*and then everthing turns black. Cold. Dark.*
Eclipse: *gets up from the black floor. He looks around* I still remember them... still... phew... but... where am i...?
The Room: *fades away to reveal that he is back in Greenhill City*
Eclipse: wait... I'm home... does that mean... I'm not dead? *suddenly he realizes he can't feel his own weight at all. Moving around is hard though, like walking underwater* oh no...
Everyone walking by: *seems to not know he's there*
Eclipse: no... no no no no... *looks at his hands. They are transparent, the light of the sun gleams through them* oh god.
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 9:17:17 AM
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Twilight: *ears perk up* .......mish?
me: ohhhhhh.... not coool.........
Lightning: what?? what happened????
Me: ....eclipse is still here.
Twilight+Lightning: !!!!!!
manny: you mean he's not ..... you know.....dead??????
me: no...... he's dead allright. he's just not.... gone...................
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 9:23:13 AM
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Condemned: *shoots out of Eclipse's body like a bullet, and heads out deep within Greenhill City*
Me: not good.
meanwhile
Eclipse's ghost: I... never really believed in an afterlife... this all so weird... is... is this what i get for defying a messenger of God? is this my punishment?
*there wind swirls through him, almost mockingly, telling him that he no longer exsists*
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 7:16:14 AM
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Daemontwilight: *is listening eagerly*
meanwhile!!!!
Lightning: *sits down next to rosette* hey..... listen, rosette. i know you saw what eclipse did. i know. i was there, and i saw it too. but you know what? as soon as he realized you were watching, that you had left, he broke down.
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 7:19:55 AM
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 7:44:29 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:40:49 AM
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menwhial (woah it's back to normal)
Newman: *has a smile etched across his face* huff... i... huff... know... huff... what it... huff... DOES... i... huff... have... huff... this! *holds up something that looks like a black wii remote with red buttons, Instead of a nunchuck, it has a microphone* hang... on... *turns it on* woo...
Eclipse: *has a seziure, and falls off Twilly*
Newman: IT WORKS! Yessss!
Me: WHAT DID YOU DO???????????
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:46:38 AM
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:47:28 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:53:53 AM
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 9:31:36 AM
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Me: *checks eclipse over* ehh... he doesnt look too good........
MEANWHILE!!!
Lightning: i dunno... my mind's just wanderin', i guess.... hey i hope ya dont ming my asking, but how did you and eclipse meet? *pauses* you dont have to answer if ya dont want to.......
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 12:12:05 PM
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meanwhile
Newman: AAH!! OMIGOD!!! ECLIPSE!!!
Eclipse: *slowly gets up and looks at Newman, eyes vaccant of free will*
Newman: HELP!!!!!!!!!
Eclipse: *suddenly growls at Twilight, and rams into her, pushing her off Newman*
Newman: oy... thanks, man! *retrieves the black device*
mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 7:27:42 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 9:14:45 AM
mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 11:26:48 AM
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Me: ya got THAT right........
MEANWHILE!!!!
Lightning: i see....... *laughs* The way twilly and i met was actually pretty funny. Talon, Mikki, Dio and I were on patrol one night, and apparently she say us sneaking around and thought we were up to no good. so she followed us. but we were real sneaky and got her caught in a trap. *smiles widely* she ended up hanging from a tree by her foot XD Mikenno took pity o nher, though. He went back and let her down. It was funny how she practically exploded on us.
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 12:53:30 PM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 3:15:07 AM
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Me: this is getting bad.... *presses a hybrid-symbol-shaped button on her watch* hurry, lightning.....
MEANWHILE!!!
Lightning: yeah, it was funny stuff! i remember when---- *something beeps on his wrist* huh? *rolls up the cuff of his glove and reveals a small black band with a hybrid-symbol-shaped button on it. it's flashing red* oh boy. come on we gotta hurry! *quickens pace*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 8:38:11 AM
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meanwhile...
Me: I can't promise that he won't attack you.
Eclipse: *coughs some more, then suddenly sways forwards and backwards a bit, like he's going to fall down*
Newman: what's up with him?
Me: he's... slowly shutting down...
Newman: i don't get it.
Eclipse: *falls down, facefirst onto the ground. He has blacked out*
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 8:55:46 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 9:19:39 AM
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meanwhile
Eclipse: *still blacked out*
Me: Twilly... Eclipse is going to die in two days... the toxin that Condemned has within him is finally getting to Eclipse, and rotting his body...
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 9:53:38 AM
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Me: ................ *silent*
Lightning: *approaches the others* sorry rosette!!! whoo. that was a nice run. hey mish, whats------- *gets cut off as he sees eclipse on the ground* ...what happened?
Twilight: *looks up at lightning with sorrow in her eyes* ...eclipse is dying, light.
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 10:00:51 AM
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Newman: HEY!
Me: uh, yeah, see, no. You have no right to be annoyed right now, you @$$.
Newman: I WAS PROGRAMMED THAT WAY.
Me: *picks up Eclipse's limp body* oof! Heavy guy! Um... lets see... *studies him* yowch... his body heat is pushing 200. That's pretty bad. If you feel his chest area carefully, or listen to his breath, he's weezing oh-so-softly. That'll get worse within the next two days.
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 10:32:41 AM
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mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 3:42:37 AM
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menwhial
Eclipse: *walks down the winding staircase to the basement. He opens up the door to the boiler room. It is hot and uncomortable in there*
Mr. Inderretta: Eclipse! You... uh... why did you come here?
Eclipse: to make sure that every breath of life you have is stolen from your throat...
Mr. Inderretta: *applauds* very descriptive. You should be a writer.
Eclipse: *scowls*
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 7:55:30 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 8:05:24 AM
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menwhial
Eclipse: *has Mr. Inderretta by the throat* SUFFER.
Mr. Inderretta: you will NOT turn on me after i helped you!!
Eclipse: you turned me agianst my friends! I was your puppet! You did NOT help me!! *goes Condemned*
Inderretta: *also goes Demakarr*
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 8:10:30 AM
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Twilight: *has her ears flat against her head and is running full tilt (which is about 600 mph)* LIGHTNING!!! BLAST THE DOOR!!
Lightning: GOT IT!! *stands up on her back and charges up a LOT of electricity, then, when close to the big door, he blasts it with electricity, making a hole just big enought for them to fit through*
Twilight: *runs right into the buildidng, avoiding trampling any workers, then screeches to a halt* where are you....? *lifts her nose up and sniffs the air, then turns towards another hallway and starts running again*
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 9:32:34 AM
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menwhial
Condemned: *smashes Mr. Inderretta's head to the ground*
Mr. Inderrettakar: *stays on the ground, bleeding and beaten from Eclipse beating him to a bloody pulp in only ten minutes* how.... *he pants*.... did you get this STRONG....?
Condemned: rage. *continues beating Inderretta to death*
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 10:01:04 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 10:22:05 AM
mechadragon13 on September 7, 2008, 6:20:04 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 7, 2008, 9:09:31 AM
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Mr. Inderretta: *is still on the ground, whimpering*
Eclipse: the least i can do is end his life... *steps on Mr. Inderretta's neck, and presses down hard, snapping it*
Mr. Inderretta: *is literally drenched in blood, and now can't breathe*
Eclipse: I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF YOU!!! *Continues to punch him, knee him, step on him, and break Inderretta's bones until....*
Mr. Inderretta: *lays still. He has been beaten to DEATH*
Me: Eclipse... I don't know whether it's you, or that chip... but... but it seems that you are now gone... the old you...
mechadragon13 on September 7, 2008, 10:17:12 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 7, 2008, 1:32:51 PM
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Eclipse: *laughs maniacally at the murder he's commited*
Me: And how do you think the more faint-hearted of us will deal with the fact that your a crazed, bloodthirsty murder?
Rosette: *is in the doorway. She's slowly shaking her head in disbelief, eyes wide, and tears streaming down her face. She backs up a step* I.... followed you all here.... but.... i didn't expect....... how could you stoop this low, Eclipse? I.... I thought you weren't like this..... I thought it was all the demon...... I guess... I guess i was wrong.... *turns around, and dashes out of the building, wiping tears from her eyes*
Eclipse: Rosette, wait! ROSETTE! *is about the chase after her, but stops* *in a weak voice* she's right.... I failed to prevent myself from becoming a monster... I've become something to fear... somthing to hate.... I'm the new Inderretta...
mechadragon13 on September 8, 2008, 11:07:38 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 8, 2008, 11:20:27 AM
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Me: i think... i think you finally scared Rosette off.... did you SEE how she looked at you?
Eclipse: *irises glow red* SHUT UP!!!! *bares his teeth at me*
mechadragon13 on September 9, 2008, 6:32:28 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 9, 2008, 9:39:37 AM
mechadragon13 on September 10, 2008, 10:58:47 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 10, 2008, 11:36:13 AM
mechadragon13 on September 10, 2008, 11:44:08 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 10, 2008, 11:52:54 AM
mechadragon13 on September 11, 2008, 8:55:21 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 12:01:22 PM
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:27:53 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 8:33:31 AM
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:41:35 AM
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Lightning: .....twilight, stop.
Daemontwilight: *screeches to a halt* whats wrong, light?
Lightning: *jumps off twilight's back* im gonna go find rosette. you guys keep going, i'll be there in a bit.
Daemontwilight: *nods and starts running again*
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 8:48:37 AM
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:53:23 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 12:02:41 PM
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mernwhriarl
Eclipse: *he seems deep in thought*
Me: what's up?
Eclipse: you know that chip inside my head that stimulated the anger and stuff?
Me: ...yeeaaaahh?
Eclipse: i just realized something.
Me: what's that?
Eclipse: there's no such thing as manipulation of anger. Making me angry isn't the chip's only purpose...
Me: O_O
mechadragon13 on August 24, 2008, 10:10:21 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 1:44:01 PM
mechadragon13 on August 25, 2008, 10:53:00 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:08:22 AM
mechadragon13 on August 25, 2008, 11:21:19 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:36:36 AM
mechadragon13 on August 26, 2008, 2:44:08 AM
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CondemnedLightning: *seems to grin, and snarls*
Me: where are you twilly?
DaemonTwilight: RIGHT HERE!!! *bashed into lightning, smashing him into a wall*
CondemnedLightning: SCREE! *is smashed*
daemontwilight: *returns to normal* come on lightning this isnt you!! dont let eclipse control you.
TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 8:53:18 AM
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Me: HEY!!! YOU WERE FOLLOWING US!!!!
Eclipse: heheheh... i was... Lightnig? New command. Don't try and kill the artists. Kill TWILIGHT...
Me: YOU MONSTER!!! YOU'RE GOING TO SERIOUSLY TURN TWO LOVERS AGAINST EACH OTHER???? THAT'S CRUEL!!!
Eclipse: hmph. If i have the opportunity to destroy love, I'll do it.
mechadragon13 on August 26, 2008, 9:05:01 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 9:44:44 AM
mechadragon13 on August 27, 2008, 7:08:32 AM
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Twilight: *ear twitched at the whimper, and she gasps* *to herself* he's still in there....... *gets back in her fighting pose* i just gotta bring him out!
CondemnedLightning: *pounces at twilight, snarling ferally*
Twilight: *easily side-steps his move* come on, lightning, remember me? it's twilly!!! i know you're in there! fight it!
CondemnedLightning: RARRRGH! *tries to claw at twilight. but she moves to fast and he misses*
Me: she's way faster than he is. as long as she's on her feet, he'll never hit her.
TheGameArtCritic on August 27, 2008, 8:48:30 AM
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Me: WHY?????? WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS???????
Eclipse: because i want the most out of this death...
Me: WHAT?????????
Ecliipse: i want them BOTH to suffer...
mechadragon13 on August 28, 2008, 6:52:54 AM
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Condemned lightning: *grins toothily and pounces on twilight*
Twilight: eek! *ducks, so he narrowly misses her*
Condemned Lightning: *lands on all fours and immediately turns and jumps at twilly again*
Twilight: *tries to move but cant move fast enough*
CondemnedLightning: *has pounced on twilly and is attempting to claw at her*
Me: oh noes!!! TWILLY!
TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 8:18:05 AM
mechadragon13 on August 28, 2008, 8:26:59 AM
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Twilight: *is trying to push lightning offa her* lightning ya big lump, git off!!!
CondemnedLightning: *holds her shoulders down with one hand and raises his clawed hand up, preparing to stabbeth her*
Me: LIGHTNING!!!!! NO!
CondemnedLightning: *goes to SLASH!!!!! but hesitates and stops halfway*
twilight: *takes the opportunity and kicks him off*
TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 8:41:51 AM
mechadragon13 on August 28, 2008, 8:48:43 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 9:33:41 AM
mechadragon13 on August 29, 2008, 12:05:21 PM
TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 2:54:39 PM
mechadragon13 on September 2, 2008, 9:57:46 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 8:48:58 AM
mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:46:15 AM
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CondemnedLightning: *pauses for a split second, then tries to slash at twilly again*
Me: that definitelky did something.... should we do it too?
TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:55:34 AM
mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 8:05:36 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:31:47 AM
mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 11:38:08 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:57:36 AM
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Lightning's Condemned stuff: *slithers out of his body like a dozen goopy blue snakes, and returns to Eclipse, who shudders when they enter his body. He opens his eyes again* I'm sorry, Lightning...
mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 12:29:44 PM
TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 1:26:49 PM
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Eclipse: yeah. That's how i was able to get the Condemned stuff outta you.
Me: you're not angry.
Eclipse: *his eyes widen. The chip in his head thoroughly zaps him, and the electricity coming from Eclipse's head is now visisble. Eclipse moans in pain, falling to his knees. When the shocking is done, he is shaking. His eyes are closed, and he is panting heavily. When his eyes open, the irises are a pulsing, and glowing crimson red. He stands up and growls darkly*
Me: i wonder who his target is now... he's not angry at any of you guys now...
Eclipse: *is a very extremelly scary whisper* Inderretta will die...
Me: AH!! NO!!! NO!! MURDER BAD!!! MURDER BAD!!!!!
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 2:49:23 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 2:58:48 AM
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Eclipse: I will NOT stop until i see that damn badger dead!
Shadow: *somewhere far away* where's that DAMN fourth chaos emerald?
Me: is death what you rally want? Do you really want to be responsible for another death? Do you want to see more blood dripping through your fingers because YOU couldn't contain your anger???
Eclipse: *in a Condemned voice, and hissing* yesssss......
Me: uh, no.
Eclipse: *wings rip out of his back*
Me: er...
Eclipse: *runs outside, and flies off to Inderretta's hideout*
Me: *watching Eclipse fly away* well THAT went well...
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 3:07:36 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 3:14:49 AM
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menwhial (lol)
Eclipse: *simply kicks down the two large doors that block the entrance to Zephcorp, and walks in*
Worker Dude: Hey! This area is for authorized personal only! You can't just -
Eclipse: *glares at him, then shocks him thoroughly, stopping his heart and killing him*
All the other workers: *stops what they're doing, and stares at Eclipse and the now smoldering body*
Eclipse: heheheh....
Other Workers: *panic*
Eclipse: *ignores them all, and heads for the boiler room, walking at a slow, but steady stride*
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 5:30:26 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:45:37 AM
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 6:25:37 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 9:34:06 AM
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mewhial.
Me: he's in the medical room by the looks of it.
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:25:23 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 4:32:06 AM
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:40:53 AM
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meanwhile:
Lightning: .......do you really expect me to give you those codes? HA! as if! *laughs* torture me as much as you like, i wont put the othes in danger.
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 4:51:59 AM
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:55:34 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:07:20 AM
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menwhial
HE'S THREATENING HIM WITH A TRUTH SERUM!!!!!!!!!!!
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 5:14:32 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:26:26 AM
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 5:36:16 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:40:36 AM
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 6:19:58 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 7:46:50 AM
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menwhial
Me: MISH! HEY! SNAP OUT OF IT! Look, he wouldn't kill Lightning... not yet, at least... Eclipse is stubborn. He knows that killing Lightning is the easy way out. Eclipse wants something from him...
mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 3:07:14 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 5:41:56 AM
mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 6:08:15 AM
Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 8:38:00 AM
Snowpaw1 on
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 9:46:22 AM
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Menwhial
Me: I KNOW WHAT HE'S GOING TO DO!!!!! HOLY shoot HE'S NOT GOING TO KILL HIM!!! HE'S.... he's..... O_O oh no...
mechadragon13 on August 21, 2008, 6:17:27 AM
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meanwhile.....
Lightning: Hybrid Nation is smarter than you think. we anticipated something like this, and our technical people changes the codes. only a handful of people in Hybrid Nation know the codes, and it isnt anyone you've met. *laughs* heheh. that truth serum's still working.
TheGameArtCritic on August 21, 2008, 7:15:52 AM
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menwhial
Me: HE DID!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE INJECTED LIGHTNING WITH A PIECE OF CONDEMNED!!!! HE'LL BE JUST LIKE SHADOW EXCEPT ECLIPSE WILL BE ABLE TO CONTROL HIM!!!!!!!!!! *breaks down sobbing*
mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 5:04:35 AM
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meanwhile.
Lightning: *at first, nothing. than suddendly, he cries out in pain as he starts to change* AAAGH!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 6:24:35 AM
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menwhial
Me: omfg don't do that again!!! *heart beats normally again* ok... ok.. just stay calm... just... yeah... It's all good... it's... it's all good if we just stay calm and play our cards right... *freaked out*
Skye: *gets there* are we too late??
Lightning: *sees teh hole* where's eclipse??