Citrus Fantasy

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Citrus Fantasy

Citrus Fantasy by luckylace222

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CRITIQUE WANTED.
I need to emphasize to the nice people out there that creatively badgering me about my art is most wanted, and if you have this irking thought about the eyes, face, or proportions, you better tell me or I will destroy youuuuu! *points cutely*

More realism work with women; I guarantee that when I start working with realistic men, they will look like transvestites. I switched from Open Canvas 1.1 and Photoshop Elements 6.0 on this. PS was not really used that much except for the occasional dodge and burn. ;I

HAH! The BEST girftart in the WORLD will come in a matter of 5 hours to 1 day!!! Such a nice gap of time! ENJOY or send your complaints to my fake email(fakeemail@yahoo.com)! <-- Oh god! It highlighted itself! HAH!

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Category Real People » Women
Date Submitted July 16, 2010, 10:13:46 AM
Views 2579
Favorites... 22
Vote Score 19

Comments 71
Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken 8 hours
Reference My hand

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dingoy_x_chan on July 16, 2010, 6:09:27 AM

critique? you asked for it~ ;D

The left eye is farther away from the nose than the right is, the ears look rather small, and somewhat squished.
Her head on the right side is flatish, while the left side has a cheekbone that's visable~ hmm.
That's all i can come up with! It looks wonderful Buu-chan :)

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 9:57:22 AM

HAHAHAH I cheated so much. I defined the ear, but it still looked weird to me, so I gave her an earing so people would pay more attention to that than the ear. xD HAHHA

D; I attempted to make the right eye and left eye more symmetrical and close, but I'm not sure if that did the perfect trick. You can see the changes in full-view! thanks so much!

Also, I'm not very sure about the cheekbone efect. D; I just kind of tinkered with the face structures after you said that, hahah. Tell me what you think!

dingoy_x_chan on July 17, 2010, 2:41:38 AM

ahaha you little cheat XD
looks much better now, actually looks more defined than befores C:

The eyes look better now too~ and the nose is mor reaslist lookig with the eyes equal distances apart XD
*masures* aw Buu. ITS STILL HALF OF AN 1/8 OF A MILIMETER WRONG YOU FAIL >:C

OMIGWASH.
THERE'S A BONE THERE! :O
xD
with the shadeing color you choose, kinda looks like the juice from the orange splattered on her face. messy gurl 8o
*wipes her face with a napkin*

I do not think there is anything more to tweek in this one. C:

luckylace222 on July 18, 2010, 1:32:22 AM

:'D You have no idea how amusing I found your comment. Talk like that more often! I could walk around with a smile for the rest of the day because of this! HAHAHAH

Thanks so muchh! =3= *kisses you on the knees and gives you extra muffins*

dingoy_x_chan on July 18, 2010, 8:04:53 AM

Heehee otay *salute* -w- whatever the lace of luckyness wishes *bow bow bow*

*nibbles muffins* mmm my favorite! snake eggs <3 *breaks the muffin in half* want some? :3

Falconlobo on July 16, 2010, 3:30:54 AM

i love those eyes nice colors the orange really stands out^^

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 9:15:30 AM

Thanks! Say, did you happen to find my cat? :P

Falconlobo on July 16, 2010, 11:47:46 AM

cat?

luckylace222 on July 18, 2010, 1:29:33 AM

;P Koji- oh nevermind. SO far, only one's person been able to find him, haha. ;U I really shouldn't find this such a amusing puzzle/game as I should.

Falconlobo on July 18, 2010, 3:39:28 AM

ah okay

TearsOfLove96 on July 18, 2010, 2:25:04 AM

lol at Koji (in his amazing orangness) being in the middle of the orange

luckylace222 on July 18, 2010, 2:41:33 AM

NOOOO!! Another bystander has sen him! Erase his image from your head NOW!

StormCall on July 16, 2010, 8:21:02 AM

Some old-styled hair right thar.

Dat orange.

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 12:48:55 PM

You wish you could have cool hair like her! I mean, look at you and your bland...straight hair. *preppy hand swing* Boring guuurrrrlll. JK! xD LOL! D:< I need to get a haircut VERY SOON.

Anyways, thanks. 8D I'm starting to think orange is my favorite color. What is YOUR favorite color? Rojo?

StormCall on July 16, 2010, 2:48:03 PM

Well, a certain shade of rojo.

luckylace222 on July 18, 2010, 1:25:49 AM

Carnelian Cerise Chestnut Coquelicot Coral red Crimson Dark pink Falu red Fire brick Fire engine red?

Tell me if I'm possibly getting close! If you say my guesses stink, I'll break your self esteem later!

StormCall on July 18, 2010, 1:32:46 AM

I'm Commander Shepard, and you have the worst guesses on the Citadel.

luckylace222 on July 18, 2010, 1:37:04 AM

*cracks knuckles*

Milesprower_Fox on July 17, 2010, 1:24:57 PM

hey, optical illusion I see a cat face in the middle of the orange, 0_0,

Well the picture is fantasic, the orange is so vibrant, it really stands out, I'm like gonna fave this 100 times, if I could

SatomiTakashida on July 16, 2010, 6:56:00 AM

Critique: The nose leans to the right too much, and is not in proper alignment with the eyes which are slightly too far apart. also her mouf looks a tad crooked, but otherwise it's great!;P

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 10:01:59 AM

Thanks! I put the eyes closer together, ATTEMPTED(xD) to make the nose more symmetrical, and added more flesh to the right part of her lip! Go to full-view to see changes! Once again, thanks for the feedback!

SatomiTakashida on July 17, 2010, 12:19:52 PM

you're welcome!x)

killerrabbit05 on July 17, 2010, 6:03:09 AM

I love all the strokes and the amount of colors used, they really add to the depth of the picture. And her eyes look lovely, especially the green speckles- they remind me of sparkly makeup or sequins! ^_^
As far as critique... hmm... Well the hand holding he orange looks a bit too small compared to her face, and I think her neck looks a bit on the thick side for a woman. It can't get too much thinner, but maybe try to elongate it; that could help add a more feminine touch.
Otherwise, this looks great!

Alma on July 17, 2010, 12:22:47 AM

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luckylace222 on July 17, 2010, 1:58:54 AM

It is in fact a waterfall! EHEHEH ;P Thank-you very much!

Minty snow waterfall surprise! It could all be made out of vanniiilllaaa~! <3 Thank-you once again!!!

Tuntun422 on July 16, 2010, 5:51:50 PM

I like her sea green eyes and the way you curved her mouth into a smirk.The sparkle on the eye shadow is very attractive and the way she's holding that orange it's almost as though she's tempting you with some tasty treats( and not necessarily, of the fruit variety,He he.)

Though my minor issues with this drawing are her nose as it appears to look a bit smooched together,and the index & middle finger holding the orange look sort of stiff.

But other then that it's a real work of art.
PS: What type of flower is that sitting right next to the woman on the left?

luckylace222 on July 17, 2010, 1:57:17 AM

Ohhhh I can see how her smirk and fruit offering can represent something MORE, hehehe. xD

Thank-you so much! That is a Gerbera daisy on the left, but I added an extra black outer layer to the petals to make it stand out.

http://members.cox.net/playinthebass/gerberas_800_600.jpg

The fingers do look stiff! D; Ahhh curses. Now when you say the nose is smushed, you you think I should add less shadow on it so it won't have so much dept, or is it the size? O; Some other artists have had an issue with it, so I am not sure which one is the case here.

lashanta22 on July 16, 2010, 8:18:24 AM

i love it!!! i really donr see anything wrong with the face just the hand bugs me for some reason but i dont know why lol
I REALLY REALLY love all the colors that you use!!!!!!

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 12:47:33 PM

Thank-you! the picture was originally going to be smooth and dark/bland looking with normal lending colors, but then my coloring senses kicked in and I made her a rainbow. xD AAHAHAH because I tend to make eveyrthing a rainbow. D:

I KIND OF added more flesh on the fingers, but only a little. I used my own hand as a reference, and someone said it looked small, so that may have been the cause. I think I'll work with more hand anatomy later in other pictures! Dx

Thanks so much! You can view changes in full-view!

lashanta22 on July 16, 2010, 1:57:22 PM

That is why i love your art so much^^ You use so many colors and it makes your art stand out so much and that is what draws me to your art!!!!
your very welcome

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