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You Never See The Most Obvious Things

Something has been irritating Zoro. What irritates him more is that he can't figure out what it is. And as if he's not having enough trouble, Luffy is just making things worse. (ZoroxLuffy)

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Beware A Bored Captain
Submitted: October 6, 2004 • Updated: October 6, 2004
Word count: 1991 • Size: 10k • Comments: 8 • views: 736

Chapter 2 - Still Irritated
Submitted: May 22, 2005 • Updated: May 22, 2005
Word count: 2175 • Size: 10k • Comments: 1 • views: 470

Chapter 3 - Meat
Submitted: May 25, 2005 • Updated: May 25, 2005
Word count: 1279 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 450

Chapter 4 - Ask Dr.Chopper
Submitted: June 2, 2005 • Updated: June 2, 2005
Word count: 4016 • Size: 20k • Comments: 5 • views: 463

Chapter 5 - Sexual Frustration
Submitted: June 16, 2005 • Updated: June 16, 2005
Word count: 1470 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 462

Chapter 6 - Zoros Weakness
Submitted: June 21, 2005 • Updated: June 21, 2005
Word count: 1920 • Size: 10k • Comments: 3 • views: 664

Chapter 7 - Dont Trust A Redhead
Submitted: June 21, 2005 • Updated: June 21, 2005
Word count: 2076 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 511

Chapter 8 - Competition and a Persuasive Reindeer
Submitted: July 26, 2005 • Updated: July 26, 2005
Word count: 1842 • Size: 9k • Comments: 4 • views: 472

Chapter 9 - Damn Women and Their Games
Submitted: July 30, 2005 • Updated: July 30, 2005
Word count: 2556 • Size: 13k • Comments: 3 • views: 419

Chapter 10 - Food Poisoning
Submitted: August 2, 2005 • Updated: August 2, 2005
Word count: 2344 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 489

Chapter 11 - Fear The Birdle
Submitted: August 3, 2005 • Updated: August 3, 2005
Word count: 2399 • Size: 12k • Comments: 6 • views: 666

Chapter 12 - She Knows a Lot of Things
Submitted: August 9, 2005 • Updated: August 9, 2005
Word count: 1369 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 624

Chapter 13 - A Thief's Confession
Submitted: August 11, 2005 • Updated: August 11, 2005
Word count: 2879 • Size: 14k • Comments: 6 • views: 442

Chapter 14 - Without Words
Submitted: August 13, 2005 • Updated: August 13, 2005
Word count: 3530 • Size: 18k • Comments: 5 • views: 505

Comments

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shamenteen on August 10, 2005, 3:05:11 PM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 12)
shamenteenGood to see you writting! It WAS painfully short! Oh well, makes a good teaser of what should happan right? Hope you update soon!!!

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:48:04 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 11)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlThat WAS a fluffy kitten! ^w^ That birdle will be haunting my dreams tonight though.... *shudder* I have the urge to draw teh birdle now.

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:39:50 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 10)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlOO!! Me!! Pick me!! I like kittems!! Awesome story! Kepp up the great work!!

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:34:10 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 9)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlDAMN YOU NAMI!!! I HATE YOU!!!! Go Zoro-nii-san!!!! Kick her @$$!! And oooo....kisses *makes grabbing motion for bag*

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:29:42 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 8)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlAwww. Choppeh-kun..... you're so sweet! *huggles*

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:26:41 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 7)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlNAMI YOU dog!! GIVE ZORO LUFFY!!! *fume* schmalt....I like that word....schmalt... ^w^

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on August 4, 2005, 1:36:09 AM

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 11)
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_BunnyNYAAAAAA!!! Zolo and Luffy!!! C'mon, KISS!!!!!!

shamenteen on August 3, 2005, 11:08:57 AM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 11)
shamenteenI have a craving for turtle soup and chicken pot pie right now....dam bird-thing. I'll kill it! Anyways, good chap and I hope your next update will be soon!!! (So close Zoro, but so far)

shamenteen on August 2, 2005, 5:22:36 PM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 10)
shamenteenThis was a really good chapter to the fic! Finally, some zoro and Luffy bonding! Sugestions? Hmmm, why don't you....put in a evil talking bunny that is a pirate who comes in in search of another guy who has a bounty o his head, and Zoro and Luffy get cought in the crossfire. Wait, make it a evil, talking, pink bunny, I hate pink. That would be really random and funny! ^.^ *favs* Anyway, hope you update soon!!!

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on August 1, 2005, 4:51:59 AM

Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 9)
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_BunnyMooooore please!!! I loooooove Luffy/Zolo!!!!!!!!!