Chapter 1 - A
Submitted September 1, 2004 Updated September 1, 2004 Status Incomplete | THE BEST POEM I EVER WROTE!!!******READ ASAP!
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Chapter 1 - A
Chapter 1 - A
You give me reasons to cry
Bit you always make me smile
You tell me I should try
My best once in a while
You give me so much pain
But I'll always be in love
From the core of this very earth
To the stars way up above
You tell me that you're not
As perfect as can be
And yet I'll always know
That you'll be better than me
You tell me life's a garden
And that I should dig down deep
And I always listen
But all I can do is sleep
I wish I could live up
To the life you've always had
I have no talents I can't do math
But my writing's not that bad
I feel so good
But I'm always sad
But what matters is I love you
I hope you're glad
This is the feeling
That I've always had
Bit you always make me smile
You tell me I should try
My best once in a while
You give me so much pain
But I'll always be in love
From the core of this very earth
To the stars way up above
You tell me that you're not
As perfect as can be
And yet I'll always know
That you'll be better than me
You tell me life's a garden
And that I should dig down deep
And I always listen
But all I can do is sleep
I wish I could live up
To the life you've always had
I have no talents I can't do math
But my writing's not that bad
I feel so good
But I'm always sad
But what matters is I love you
I hope you're glad
This is the feeling
That I've always had
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BlizzardComics on May 9, 2005, 11:45:59 AM
87mazy on April 25, 2005, 1:48:56 AM
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that is......beautiful a wonderful poem!One question,what inspired you?wolf_alchemist on April 23, 2005, 5:22:55 AM
its so touching......it made me cry......Keep up the good work! ILoveAang on April 16, 2005, 9:25:41 AM
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OMG THAT POEM WAS SO F@#%*$ AWESOME i added it to my favorites list on my profile!!!Rikus_Lover_MINE on February 25, 2005, 11:39:34 AM
wow....simply....wow O.O
blue_dragon35 on October 16, 2004, 12:20:33 PM
AWESOME-NESS!*faves*xXxYINGYANGxXx on October 8, 2004, 3:57:45 AM
thats soooooo beatuful. so romantic and yet soo sad. well done ladykagome on September 6, 2004, 10:03:17 PM
ladykagome on
THIS IS THE GREATEST POEM I EVER HEARD!!Inu-Tasha on September 2, 2004, 6:57:23 AM
Inu-Tasha on
GOOD JHOB! AGAIN!neko_chan123 on September 2, 2004, 5:42:58 AM
neko_chan123 on
I usually don't like poems, but this is very nice. Keep up the good work ^_^
yup, yup