Virtual Revival
Submitted July 22, 2004 Updated August 23, 2004 Status Complete | Natalie just transferred to the Kadic Boarding School. Now she's found the factory. But is she a Fighter of Lyoko or a Monster of XANA?
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Part 1--Meeting Natalie
Submitted: July 22, 2004 • Updated: July 22, 2004
Word count: 1652 • Size: 8k • Comments: 5 • views: 341
Chapter 2 - Part2-Found the Factory
Submitted: July 29, 2004 • Updated: July 29, 2004
Word count: 2636 • Size: 14k • Comments: 3 • views: 333
Chapter 3 - Part 3-The Second Attack
Submitted: August 6, 2004 • Updated: August 6, 2004
Word count: 1991 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 331
Chapter 4 - Part 4-Natalie Deactivates a Tower
Submitted: August 9, 2004 • Updated: August 9, 2004
Word count: 2760 • Size: 14k • Comments: 1 • views: 300
Chapter 5 - Part 5-Similar DNA
Submitted: August 19, 2004 • Updated: August 19, 2004
Word count: 2291 • Size: 12k • Comments: 1 • views: 338
Chapter 6 - Part 6-Happiness
Submitted: August 23, 2004 • Updated: August 23, 2004
Word count: 2844 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 363
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thecompleteanimorph on March 13, 2008, 1:29:00 PM
DannyPhantomGirlfriend on December 3, 2005, 10:05:47 AM
IT WAS THE BEST AND WEIRDEST STORY EVERSashi_Chan on November 14, 2005, 7:37:51 AM
You should work on your form. It's really jumbled up. When another person talks, there's a new paragraph. That's why I didn't read it all. But you have moderatly good sentance fluency. Work on your word choice, though. Good job.LyokoDreamer on July 5, 2005, 2:59:30 AM
that story is so beautiful*cries* ok now i'm getting sappy, lol, but still, it's a great story.
BandFairy on April 29, 2005, 9:24:32 AM
One of the few good Code: Lyoko stories I've ever read.KotokoPlum on September 25, 2004, 9:09:24 PM
Yay! I didn't expect it to be over so quick, but still, great job! KotokoPlum on September 25, 2004, 9:00:50 PM
Wow. I am speechless... *drools a lot* Go, GD!(lol I say that in every chapter...)KotokoPlum on September 25, 2004, 8:55:03 PM
YAY! You write fanfics sooooo well! I'm going to read the next chapter now! *goes off to read the next chapter*KotokoPlum on September 25, 2004, 7:54:12 AM
Omigosh, omigosh, omigosh, what is XANA going to do with Natalie?! The suspense is killing me!!!!KotokoPlum on September 25, 2004, 7:49:51 AM
Wow, GD! Yay! Great story! Wheeeeee!! (I'm hyper, as always)KotokoPlum on September 25, 2004, 7:46:57 AM
Ahhhhhh!!!! The crazed kitchen appliances are coming to get me! Ahhhhhh!!! lol. Great story, GD!bloodyangel on August 10, 2004, 12:52:46 PM
So good, keep going. Is Natalie going to figure out she's from Lyoko soon?SuicidalMunkys on August 8, 2004, 1:16:32 AM
It's such a great story!Sunshine_Fox on August 7, 2004, 9:11:02 AM
I love this story,it's so... beyond words!bman69 on August 5, 2004, 3:30:25 AM
very good i like itbman69 on August 5, 2004, 3:29:32 AM
very goodRogueRider on August 3, 2004, 8:31:56 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY! i liked it so much i drew what i thought Natalie would look like. she ended up looking a lot like me(oops^-^)SuicidalMunkys on July 24, 2004, 4:38:56 PM
Oooh, cool! Next chapter! Hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!The_Chao_Lover on July 22, 2004, 10:01:03 AM
Wow! Nice beginning, only it was a little short. Ah well. :)
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