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Virtual Revival

Natalie just transferred to the Kadic Boarding School. Now she's found the factory. But is she a Fighter of Lyoko or a Monster of XANA?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Part 1--Meeting Natalie
Submitted: July 22, 2004 • Updated: July 22, 2004
Word count: 1652 • Size: 8k • Comments: 5 • views: 344

Chapter 2 - Part2-Found the Factory
Submitted: July 29, 2004 • Updated: July 29, 2004
Word count: 2636 • Size: 14k • Comments: 3 • views: 336

Chapter 3 - Part 3-The Second Attack
Submitted: August 6, 2004 • Updated: August 6, 2004
Word count: 1991 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 333

Chapter 4 - Part 4-Natalie Deactivates a Tower
Submitted: August 9, 2004 • Updated: August 9, 2004
Word count: 2760 • Size: 14k • Comments: 1 • views: 303

Chapter 5 - Part 5-Similar DNA
Submitted: August 19, 2004 • Updated: August 19, 2004
Word count: 2291 • Size: 12k • Comments: 1 • views: 341

Chapter 6 - Part 6-Happiness
Submitted: August 23, 2004 • Updated: August 23, 2004
Word count: 2844 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 367

Comments

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thecompleteanimorph on March 13, 2008, 1:29:00 PM

thecompleteanimorph on (Chapter: 6)
thecompleteanimorphIt was cool. Although now it's considered AU, and OCs that are relatives of Aelita are generally a no, I think this excels in its category.
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DannyPhantomGirlfriend on December 3, 2005, 10:05:47 AM

DannyPhantomGirlfriend on (Chapter: 6)
DannyPhantomGirlfriendIT WAS THE BEST AND WEIRDEST STORY EVER

Sashi_Chan on November 14, 2005, 7:37:51 AM

Sashi_Chan on (Chapter: 1)
Sashi_ChanYou should work on your form. It's really jumbled up. When another person talks, there's a new paragraph. That's why I didn't read it all. But you have moderatly good sentance fluency. Work on your word choice, though. Good job.

LyokoDreamer on July 5, 2005, 2:59:30 AM

LyokoDreamer on (Chapter: 6)
LyokoDreamerthat story is so beautiful*cries*
ok now i'm getting sappy, lol, but still, it's a great story.

BandFairy on April 29, 2005, 9:24:32 AM

BandFairy on (Chapter: 6)
BandFairyOne of the few good Code: Lyoko stories I've ever read.

KotokoPlum on September 25, 2004, 9:09:24 PM

KotokoPlum on (Chapter: 6)
KotokoPlumYay! I didn't expect it to be over so quick, but still, great job!

KotokoPlum on September 25, 2004, 9:00:50 PM

KotokoPlum on (Chapter: 5)
KotokoPlumWow. I am speechless... *drools a lot* Go, GD!(lol I say that in every chapter...)

KotokoPlum on September 25, 2004, 8:55:03 PM

KotokoPlum on (Chapter: 4)
KotokoPlumYAY! You write fanfics sooooo well! I'm going to read the next chapter now! *goes off to read the next chapter*

KotokoPlum on September 25, 2004, 7:54:12 AM

KotokoPlum on (Chapter: 3)
KotokoPlumOmigosh, omigosh, omigosh, what is XANA going to do with Natalie?! The suspense is killing me!!!!

KotokoPlum on September 25, 2004, 7:49:51 AM

KotokoPlum on (Chapter: 2)
KotokoPlumWow, GD! Yay! Great story! Wheeeeee!! (I'm hyper, as always)